Allooo!
I didn't know what to give you except Ian.. So I asked Faru what does Allooo like besides Ian and she replied Ian.š
Anyways where do I begin. YESSS! I LOVE YOU!
Love! You had us fooled when you said you are new to this imaginations go wild business.
Oh Allooo! Whom are you kidding. You write like a Pro with Killer Heels Dude!
Sexxxahhh! So flawless.
So twisted and knotted.
You anchored and you are still mooring...
God that was something I will remember for a long time... I love stories that leave endings to vivid imaginations.
I mean we need our readers to be active participants and not lazy beer bellies who want things just spoon feed.
Your story! ASDKSHF!!#@# (learning from Prags and Sudsš)
You totally woke me up with all these speculative senarios. I wanna know. I want it so bad.
The title...IT AIN'T EASY BEING GREEN!
God my theories. Othello came to mind instantly. But not so, this is Aahil, The doesn't do in between, He is his own demon...
His Green was the reason for her to move away, to drift apart... She needed his faith and he couldn't help being green. IT wasn't easy for him to let go of his green because his life was full of insecurities. He could not risk losing her. He had to make sure she remained his. Hence his green., No it's not easy.. It burns you up from inside out...
Home Coming! I never went to one...š Oh Cheesy Twillight came to mind.. But Aliya does any thing but cheesy... Aliya does class. And Aliya does Class Apart...
He didn't want to go without her.. And she knew somewhere somewhat..
I loved the lines...Sanam couldn't help but feel watched. She nervously looked around and saw him looking at her.
Why does he always have to be around them...around her?!?! Aahil stared at her with the mixture of adoration and frustration that defines their relationship. He held her gaze for a few seconds before looking away and walking off.
I just awed those lines... I know the feeling! I have lived that. That crackle and the dimensions of the room change and suddenly those pair of eyes nude and tug not just your heart...They do something to me these things. They so do...
He stood at the end of the hallway, whimpering and frowning in jealousy. There was a silly feeling that someone was moving in on "his" territory. Enough!! He needs to end this now. The agony, the angst and the pain.
Mr.Green at his best here...š in your face sucker... I have a guy to flaunt and make you jealous some more..š
then " I want you back!" And " We are both broken!"
I don't cry normally.. But all these feeling you evoked in me with your one tiny piece Allooo! I honestly mean it when I say... I was so caught up reading, so into the plot that I hated I didn't have answers. I wanted to jump in that story and fix things for them...
I am a sucker for happy ending.. I have never ever written anything sad in my life.. And this felt so so sad... I want a completion okay..
Please at least try something...But even if you don't want to continue.. This was a brilliant piece... Just amazing...
Aliya! Thank you! Thank You so very much...Because honestly... I am lost in the show.. I don't connect to it at all. But I love this bunch and I love telling stories. And I am here only to be a part of this awesomeness and crazy. For you to attempt something out of your comfort, IT means a lot Alloo... so thank you from the bottom of my heart...
Love
Juliet!
Thank you so very much...
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