Beautiful Chaos - Link to Thread II (Index) - Page 96

Originally posted by: Prags_Sociopath

Okay. Just read the much awaited update. Yeah its coming from ME.

Ani babe. This was a mixture of every thing. Rage. Hurt. Passion. Sexy. Kink. Pain. Passion. Like every damn thing.

I mean. Wow. That flashback where he met her. At the gym. Working out those abs. Biceps and all. And. That chest. THAT CHEST. grrrhh!!

Spitfire. Indeed. She is his spitfire.

And the Kinky Mrs. Ibrahim. That was plain Sexy!! Navy blue. Such a Sexy color it is!!

But. The loss. :'(

Don't tell me he. He. He..doubted her at first??!😡

And when he came back she was..she was..gone. </3 Well he kinda deserved it then. 😡😭

Originally posted by: fatuimamotala

Wow that was amazing and sad...

please update soon ..

Originally posted by: mahwash22

OH GOD

I feel like my heart has busted out from my chest and shattered into tiny little pieces 💔 😭

Tiny little pieces...

I need a moment, guys...

*Sits by the bed and cries for hours*

Originally posted by: farz_parachute

Damn damn damn!

Crazy?

Shit.

Oh boy.

Originally posted by: mahwash22

Okay, I'm back from crying on the bed..

This piece of writing was just beautiful yet so heartfelt and sad!

I love the fact that Aahil wore the chain around his neck! It gives a feeling that he really misses her. She might come back to him..

- I totally fell in love with their Gym encounter. It was damn funny and hot! Prags is right - I mean, that Chest!! The Chest which we dream about all night..

I was smiling like crazy when I read that she was pregnant! But then the news... My hopes shattered into tiny pieces..

Oh God, she lost the child :,( Nooo...

God damn it, Aahil, you do not do this to her! You do not leave her out of nowehere.

And the most hurtfelt thing to discover... She was gone when he got home.

I'm so sad and I'm so hooked on reading the next update.

Great work once again! ❤️ It was so well written! I'm really speechless right now.
I really have no words to describe how beautifully written this is. Great job, darling!

Come here so I can give you a hug you rightfully deserve 🤗

This could be my spoiler to my update😛

Originally posted by: sageflower7

Hahaaa... Juliet's ina house !!

YO! that is so me!!!!!!!!

Originally posted by: Perfectionist2

Oh MY! MY OH MY!

Sagey!

Tuski Chuppa Rustam HO!

But I can't write mature stuff you know... LIAR!

You sexed up the update for me...😆

Ok First things first... The last time I went to a gym was about 4 years back...I still remember my Personal Trainer. Bloody Bitch was after my blood cos I called her BF who was also an instructor HOT!. Well I didn't know He was her BF. And well He was Hot, and he smiled a lot when he spoke to me. But whatever! I am so not a Gym person.😛

But how do you write like this woman..😛

He came up on one knee, stripped off his sweaty tank top and really gave her something to look at. He flexed his arms over his head, and his V-shaped back stretched. He sauntered over to the chin up bar and hoisted himself up. Slowly, he pulled himself up to the bar, his muscled arms bulging with effort. His 6-pack abs bunched prominently as he slowly hoisted himself up and down the bar with practiced ease. Sweat beaded over his torso, breathing controlled.

I am salivating. Feeling Hot! hot! hot!

Coming to Aahil... You know I am trying to like him. I don't fall easy. I just don't . And while last update I went a bit soft for him, this update I want to pickle his balls.

That girl eventually became His spitfire...

I was so looking for a back story and you gave me one but I wanted to know how they confessed. And how love happened.

DAFUQ Chocolate!

I mean AHHH! I am at work ok.. I am so very bothered right now... f**k! YOU! SAGEY!

I need a popsicle bath ASAP!😆 LIAR! I can't do bold! Tie me up! And senses at play... OH f**k! I need a selfie right now, but how!😕😆

Now the update, I just simply loved till here. I mean kudos to you to pull off such a fabulous update in such short notice...and you are such a talented writer Sagey. I have always told you this.I love what you write , it's just so polished at all times.

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But then whatever happened after I didn't buy it...

I am not a fan of getting pregnant and miscarriage and stagnation because of the miscarriage. I don't read or watch such stories. It's just me. But I also know huge population of females are sucker for such plots.

I didn't get why he would shut her down.. but oh well. That's the story.

You gave it whatever you could in such a short period.

And I so commend you for this update. It had everything. Angst at it's best.

I hope you don't mind my honestly. I am not criticizing love. I am just saying I was so high from this update and then Aahil just fell from grace. The strength of his character just effervesced in that one statement.

but I get may be you have a plan, apart from that... I LOVED THE UPDATE! LOVED! LOVED LOVED!

Thank you so so much Sagey for doing this. 🤗You really write so well. I got to learn a few things. I am not joking I will pm you what I mean...

But Crazy is really a crazy word to start with😆

Faru bring it on...I can't wait to see what you do with Crazy..😛

Love You Sagey!

Juliet!

Sagey.
I am just being a bitch because while others can cry n feel so easily.
I only cry in hiding.
I know how hard it must have been to write.
Did I volunteer for the spot? No.
Because I couldn't think of anything apt to write.
At least you wrote this superb piece which every one loved. It was so emotional. I wanted to hug Sanam. And it's a sexy piece of meat.

Sorry I am just being difficult as always. Hope you still love me. Because I love you. 😭
And thank you for writing. I would love for you to take another turn at writing in the end after we finish our circle.

Love
Juliet.