#5 - AsYa/KaBhi FF : My Mental Love ! PART 20 - PART 23 ! Go #6 ! - Page 3

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Amazing update
Sooo emotional
Poor Zoya felt sad for her and Asad
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Posted: 10 years ago
#22
bano really great updt
its really sad updt
plz updt soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Congrats on the new thread...
very heart touching...
N very emotional...
felt bad fr zoya...
asad is always with zoya n will help her...
eagerly waiting fr the next part...
thx fr the pm n do continue soon n do pm me...
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Posted: 10 years ago
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No.. that's so sad... 💔 nono no...
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Posted: 10 years ago
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It was a very sad and depressing update
But I guess eventually it will make zoe stronger.as what doesn t kills you makes you stronger!
So eventually I would get to see a stronger Zoya fighting for her own rights with the cute Khan family as the strength.
I could understand Asad's plight.
He could not break doen in front of his family.
Thank you for keeping it short cause as such it Was quite depressing
Thanks for the pm
Update soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Congo for the new thread. ...

Kesi ho.. .

Such an emotional epi..
I can imagine how much it must have took for u to describe soon perfectly. ...
N naaraate every emotion...

So perfectly presented. ..

U r such an amazing writer. ...
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Posted: 10 years ago
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congratulations fr d new thread.. many more 2 come
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Posted: 10 years ago
#28
emotional update...
Zoya lost her baby
I didnt cried coz i knew baby is nt gonna survive bt I was sad
Asya's breakdown made me so sad 😭
finally she looked at him n he's feeding her...
asad's angel is so gud..
loved d last section
continue soon...
I know u vl b busy with college bt still try 2 update once in a week..I love this FF a lot
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Posted: 10 years ago
#29
congo on the new thread bano🥳
update was so emotional ,it literally made me cry😭

zoya lost the baby..i know it was going to happen but still i feel shocked

zoya is blaming asad that he couldn't save the baby..poor asad so helpless

i love the khan family and daniel they are lovely people..zoya is lucky to have them

you portrayed the emotions very well 👏

all the best for your college bano !! tc cya ❤️
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Congrats for the new thread Choti Bajijaan 👍🏼

There was no need to ask if anyone cried. Am sure anyone who will read this chapter will cry. A very very well written chapter, so emotional 😭

Every sentence you wrote about her plight about her suffering, her breakdown and what each in the room felt for her and with her was just superb.


I won't say anything more, it will dampen what you have written.


Loved it Choti Bajijaan just loved it

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