#5 - AsYa/KaBhi FF : My Mental Love ! PART 20 - PART 23 ! Go #6 ! - Page 10

Originally posted by: radadolcevida

beautiful and emotional update😭

how it 's hard to loose baby for any parent , specially a mother, you write it with decency

and congrats for the new thread, please update soon, can't wait for the next part😃

Thank you so much dear !! 🤗 i'm really glad that i've been able to stand up to that standard ! It really is an honour for me ! ❤️

Thanks buddy ! ❤️ but i havent wrote a word yet of the next chapter but i'll be updating my other SS in a day or two 😳

Originally posted by: Nitya_Suresh

Congratulations for the new thread..
I was so sad reading that the baby didn't survive... ;(
I just want to cry...
you are an amazing writer really.. Beautiful part.. Very well written.. Looking forward to the next ones... :)

Thanks so much Nitya !! 🤗
Aww i'm sorry for making u almost cry ! ❤️ i stopped it there because it was grtting too depressing for me to handle myself ! 😆
Thanks a lot Nitya ! It really means a lot to me ! 😳 ❤️

Originally posted by: ak020203

Very emotional update. . Beautifully written. .

Felt so sorry for Zoya. .

Thanks for updating

Thanks buddy ! 😳

Originally posted by: jaanu013

very emotional update

emotions of Zoya were perfectly written

danial dilshad and najma cheering her

atlast asad made her eat

thanks for the update

Originally posted by: Dhwaniiam

I loved it ...

Originally posted by: scarletmalik

emotional update😭

beautifully written😊

loved it❤️

felt so sorry for zoya😭

loved how dilshad,nazma and daniel were trying to cheer up zoya

continue soon

nd thnx 4r pm

Originally posted by: princess101

Congrats on the new thread

amazing update lovely

thanx 4 the pm

update soon

Originally posted by: nilusoni

congrats for new thread

awesome and emotional update😭

zoya's condition is too weak but gr8 part

thanx for pm

plz pm me for next part

continue soon

Thanks a ton guys ! 🤗

Originally posted by: mayurchan7

Hi...Bano..thanx for the P.M...well it was a emotional and a turmoil full of update...well what can we say about the loss of the baby and only those mothers who goes through this pain know its grief...you potrayed Zoya's emotions in a very perfect manner...and asad's turmoil and helpnessness is also painful .i really liked the part where zoya says that Asad in not her SAVIOUR...because he didn't saved her baby...what a scene... : ) can imagine Asad's plight at that...continue soon..

Hi Mayur ! 😃
Exactly ! But i'm honoured that i could stand up to the way i described the pain ! ❤️
Yeah the scene where she blames him really made me teary because she was blaming him for something that wasnt in his hands ! 😭
Thank you so much for such a lovely comment ! 🤗 I'm glad you liked it ! ❤️

Originally posted by: cale

awww

such an emotional chapter..

zoyalost her baby...she cried so much...everyone was so emotional 😭😭

zoyasaid so much to asad...but still he didn't left her side, he knows that she is not in her correct state of mind...love their understanding

Hopezoya comes out of this trauma soon

Update soon

Thank you so much Cale ! I'm glad you liked it ! ❤️
Yeah quite depressing chapter ! 😆
I so love this Asad because he loves her so much !! ❤️ the love he has for her makes me fall in love with him ! ❤️

Originally posted by: Saima-Syed

Congratulations on the new thread Bano

Well deserved👏

The chapter was extremely emotional but like you said at the end things happen in life that we have no control over and I guess it was necessary to bring Asad and Zoya that much closer and to start a new beginning

Beautifully written

Thank you so much Aapi !! 🤗

Yes because this down down will bring an up for Asad and Zoya because Zoya will get much more better mentally 😛

I'm glad you liked it !! ❤️

Originally posted by: asifiqbalsh

Emotional update
You said it right that chapter made everyone cried more.
Zoya lost her baby & the way she took out her emotions was well written.
Asad tried to calm her down but her position broke him more. He took her in his arms & consoled her.
This phase is difficult for both zoya & asad. Hopefully they will come out together.
Continue soon plz
Thanks for pm

Thank you so much Asif ! 😳

Originally posted by: AsyaManeet

Emotional update!!!
Yep life is complicated!!!
Hope she recovers soon!!
Asad is no less!!

Quite depressing one i'll say ! 😆
This little shock will make her alright, bringing a new sunny day in the lives of Asad and Zoya ! ❤️
I'm glad you lenjoyed it ! 🤗

Originally posted by: cutestar12

Nice update continue soon

Thanks ! 😳