#5 - AsYa/KaBhi FF : My Mental Love ! PART 20 - PART 23 ! Go #6 ! - Page 11

Originally posted by: suganti

emotional chapter

the baby couldn't survive and zoya is shattered😭

poor asad..try to get a grip of himself for zoya

everyone's pain was beautifully described❤️

love the chapter very much🤗

thanks for the pm

Thank you so much Suganti ! 🤗 I'm glad you liked it !! ❤️

Originally posted by: aarzoo50

always knew it was going to happen...
but still it hurt...
you penned it down beautifully bano...
awesome emotional update...
hope zoya gets over the loss soon..
she has a no. of supportive n loving people around...
continue soon

Yes because taking away te life of an innocent soul always hurts ! 🥺
Thank you so much Aapi !! 🤗 i'm glad that i was able to stand up and describe her pain ! 🥺
Lets see how she'll get over with it ! ❤️ she indeed is really lucky to have such a loving family ! 😳

Originally posted by: RAJLUVASYA

Beautiful update sis.But its very emotional and heartbreaking.I always wanter the baby to died but when its happened i m feeling so sad.U captured the emotions so beautifuly.I usualy dont feel much emotions. But your updates always touched my heart.Hope zoya able to get over from the loss very soon.Now waiting for the twist in asya life. Hope Zoya now recovered fully.Update next part soon.❤️ Raj

Thank you so much bro !! 😳 it had to be emotional and heartbreaking because after all, an innocent life had been taken away ! 😭 🥺
Its normal that u r feeling sad because u also r a human being and u r sad that an innocent soul was taken away and left so many people crying over that death 😭
Thank you so much !! That really means a lot and i'm honoured to have been able to make u feel that pain ! 😳
It wont be a twist but more like a turning point where Zoya will get alright ! 😃
I updated this one on monday, soi'll update the nzxt chapter next week ! 😉

Originally posted by: zola007

Congrats for the new thread !🥳.🤗

Thanks so much Shona !! 🤗 mwah !! Missing u ! ❤️

Originally posted by: MysticRiver

very well written update...👍🏼

Originally posted by: navk

wonderdful update

Thanks guys 😳

Originally posted by: --Bubble007--

This was a pretty sad update !!

she lost the Baby

and its soo upsetting ,,I really feel bad for Zoya !!

Thank God she has got a family finally to help her out😒

Asad is taking care of her❤️

update soon and a happy one if possible !!

and yup this update was really beautifully written !!

I know it was quite depressing ! 😕
A loving family family with her ! 😳 and above all she has a guy like Asad who loves her like crazy no matter what !! ❤️
I dont think i can write something happy just after this but i promuse that the happy days r coming ! 🤗
Thank you so much Bubble sis !! 🤗 mwah ! ❤️

Originally posted by: MisHumptyDumpty

heelo heelo hello

this update made me feel so saad😭

Zoya falling so weak.. and the heart wrecking pain she has to suffer..

And Asad's pain

But when Asad is there.. There's nothing to fear

p.s. Some more care scenes please

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I so love ur little cartoons in ur comments ! 😆

Hello ! 😆

Awww i'm sorry but this had to happen ! 😳 its never eaasy for a mother to lose her child and thats what i tried to show taht even though Zoya is not mentally an adult, she still can feel that pain because she was bonded to the baby 😭

Even Asad was in pain but he had to be strong for her because she needed him in that moment ! 🥺

Hahah the care scenes will evntually come ! 😉

Update wont come before next week (weekend maybe 😆)

Originally posted by: anopama

Congrats on new thread

Such a heartbreaking chapter

Zoya is so broken her baby is gone

No one can console her all r in pain seeing her like that

Her lashing out at asad was understandable

U r my saviour y didn't u save my baby I want my baby

He allowed her to cry it out and he stopped anyone from stopping her

Let her get it out of her system

No one could hav gotten her in a good mood

She just lost a baby people come on

Glad asad send all home and let her have her space

But he was there to hold her when she allowed him and comfort her and be there for her

He was the only one who can get her to get over her grief and take care of herself

Hope they grow closer with this lost

Continue soon

Thank you so much Anopama ! 🤗
Yeah even while writing it was quite depressing ! 🥺
Exactly ! The fact that he's her Savior, in her mind his duty was to save the baby but he couldnt do it since nothing was in his hands !
The fact that she had lost the baby had out her in a kind of shock to which she wasnt responding to anything 😕
Yeah she had finally let him in when she felt all lonely again ! 🥺
He would be eventually the one who would help her to get over this loss as well !
I'm glad you liked it ! ❤️

Originally posted by: Amin21

wow bano yaar what an update

it was so 😭

if you remember once I asked you something like zoya to lose the baby but I really felt bad here .

maybe it was for zoya or for the baby itself but in any way the credit all goes to you yaar beautifullywritten 👏

just hop to see her have babyinlast of thisff .

loved it 😉

HAha u were the one asking for a sad update ! And i also had promised u one so here u go ! 😉
Awww its normal that u r feeling bad because an innocent life had bern taken !
Awww that really means a lot !! Thank you so much Amin !! ❤️
Of course she'l have Asad's baby but that will be in the last part or even the epilogue of this story ! 😉

Originally posted by: kanchan23

<font size="3">hey...you are mindblowing writer...you managed to make us cry😭

zoya is ok but still weak...but baby is no more...😭

danial is become their family member...

i don't know how to explain in words...what i felt for zoya...
when she learn that her baby is no more...that scene was...😭😭

zoya behaviour towards asad...was expected...he is her savior...so she thought that he also can save her child...

asad is also feeling sad...

zoya is still in shock...she is not responding to anyone...

lovely family...they all try to cheer her up...but failed to grap her attention...😊

asad also try to grap her attention...atleast she ate her food and medicine...

you described the emotion of zoya very well👏

you said in your note that this will bring new turn in asya life...

i am waiting for it...😊

thank you so much for sharing this update with us and for pm me...🤗

please continue soon...

p.s-congratulation for your new thread...you deserve it🥳👏

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Awww i'm so sorry to have make u cry !🤗
For any woman its hard to swallow the fact that another woman lost a baby ! 🥺

Thank you so much dear ! 🤗 i'm glad that i could do that ! ❤️
Yes it will bring a new beginning ! 😳

Thanks a lot dear ! MWAH ! ❤️