SAHIL SS-DIL JALE-COMPLETED-PT1-14+EPILOGUE-*AWARDED*

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kyph21

@kyph21

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#471

wow!!! i didnt even know this SS existed!!! its simply superb!!!!! TFS!! written very welll!!! ur very talented

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kyph21

@kyph21

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#472

seriously reading ur story was so much better than watching the show!!! hope gul khan can see this!!!! you do better justice to her characters than she does

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Mandy

@MrDarcyfan

Stunner

+ 6

Posted: 10 years ago

#473

Originally posted by: kyph21
seriously reading ur story was so much better than watching the show!!! hope gul khan can see this!!!! you do better justice to her characters than she does

Thanks so much! Someone send this to Gul Khan! LOL. I just LOVE the characters she creates, but agree, sometimes even she struggles giving them justice. But that is where US, the fans come in. We always know the characters better than even the creators do, coz we love them so dearly.

I think fans make or break a show. No doubt about that at all!

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kyph21

@kyph21

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#474

you also make it so easy for us to read!! by giving the link to the next update page at the end of the writeup!!! grt continuity!!!
i have read ur story 3 times now
still reading it...😊

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Mandy

@MrDarcyfan

Stunner

+ 6

Posted: 10 years ago

#475

Originally posted by: kyph21
you also make it so easy for us to read!! by giving the link to the next update page at the end of the writeup!!! grt continuity!!!
i have read ur story 3 times now
still reading it...😊

Thanks again. Reading such comments makes all the work and time that go into writing worthwhile. I am so glad you love the story so much. Even I have a few favorites like that, I read all the time. I am really happy I am in your favorite list! Keep the comments coming. We writers live for that!

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laks_vish

@laks_vish

Navigator

Posted: 10 years ago

#476

Read the whole ss in one go..beautifully written Mandy!

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Mandy

@MrDarcyfan

Stunner

+ 6

Posted: 10 years ago

#477

Originally posted by: Perfectionist2
Mandy,
My Nz Behna...

You got to know I am reading this.
It is bloody awesome..
And I am imagining every single scene.

I am at the point where Aahil told Sanam he is in love with her...

Haiiyeee My heart Tuting and Tutting and Tuttting...💔

So much Angst Hanga! And so much weepy hogaya...
I am off to read ok...

I am so happy Tamara asked me to read this.
Its so so brilliant...And such a swift and fast read.
Can't stop reading...
I read 12 chapters last night... Now baki ka tonight..

Love and hugs.. It;s simply superb.👏

Juliet, thanks for sending me the PM. I didn't see these comments at all, coz I didnt check this thread for at least a day or two. I am in the South Island at the moment, travelling. So I have periodically updated my SS Yeh Dooriyan. I have also started a new SS on SAHIL.

I am SO glad to get this compliment from you coz I SO love your writing. Especially your recent "Letting Go"! Just loved it. It's in my favourites list! Thanks again for the great comments!

Cheers

Mandy

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Mandy

@MrDarcyfan

Stunner

+ 6

Posted: 10 years ago

#478

Originally posted by: Perfectionist2
If only he knew the future love of his life was going to see him, he would have run a mile before going anywhere near that bloody haystack! Looks like he will never live it down! Aahil punched the door with his fist in frustration, for a minute forgetting his injured state!😆

OH I want this scene in the show...
Please Four Lyons...I mean Four Lions... Listen to Mandy.

"All faculties are working fine". Well she had to concede they were. It didn't seem that his knock on the head or painful shoulder was impeding him in any way when it came to his prowess in bed. It seemed there were many positions one could take to avoid putting pressure on sore arms. Now thinking of it she blushed, but at the time, she had been more than eager and willing.

Yah Allah!

Kya Likti Hia aap Mandy Ji...😉
Juliet Blush* Blush*😆😆

I HAD to go there with the haystack. It was too tempting not to bring it up, not once, but twice. The first time, Aahil just ignored the subject. The next time he tried to laugh about it. Both didn't work out for him! Lol

I cant believe that recently when Sanam taunted him about his lack of taste in women he chose in the past for flings, that she didn't specifically mention Haystack girl. She was talking about that as well as the few other girls she had seen him with. WHY didnt she say she saw him in Punjab? It would have been HILARIOUS to see Aahil's face!

Also, Aahil wanted to pounce on Sanam after he came back from the hospital and nothing was going to stop him. Especially after she told him she loves him. He was too tempted. So no matter what bit of pain and discomfort he was in, that was not about to hold him back! Glad you liked it!

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Mandy

@MrDarcyfan

Stunner

+ 6

Posted: 10 years ago

#479

Originally posted by: Perfectionist2
Loved it Mandy.
It was so well conceptualized.

It was just so flawless.

I couldn't get enough of the epilogue.

Oh such an adorable couple.

I wanted to hug Aahil when he spoke about his father.
Lovely spoke and written so well.

Thank you for sharing this Darling.

Again. Thanks Juliet. Just loved writing this, though it got intense sometimes. I actually ended up getting viral pneumonia, and I am still recovering. Too many late nights writing dude! My hubby yelled at me, but I was addicted. Just was so in love with SAHIL and just could not stop writing about them.

That is why despite my sick state, I have started another SS on SAHIL, and trying to complete my SEHAN - SAHIL SS as well. It's a lot of time and energy, but I am loving it. I feel inspired at the moment, so channeling it! :)