SAHIL SS-DIL JALE-COMPLETED-PT1-14+EPILOGUE-*AWARDED* - Page 47

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Marybarton

They have come a long way in their relationship. I like that Aahil is playful with Sanam now. The affection and love is really cute, it makes for a good end to a good story. I liked that "still love me" line a lot, it was teasing and loving at the same time. Very late response here, I have been busy lately. Also, loosing interest in QH because they are not showing Sahil anymore. This happens to be everytime, I still don't learn.



Thanks Mary. Yes I wanted to make the scene a bit playful as well as intense. Once you confess your love, there is a certain level of comfortableness that comes between a couple anyway, that didn't exist before. After all, your guard is down now. You have nothing to hide. I also wanted some reference to the past and their first impressions of each other as well. (A nod to my beloved Pride & Prejudice) where Darcy and Liz have the worst start, only to have the best end!


Yes, not enough SAHIL in QH at the moment. In around June I had a similar stage where I lost interest when there was too much Billi and Badi begum drama with the snake. But then the BEST phase came with Sanam getting into trouble and Aahil starting his "Junoon Ishq". I know next week there is going to be some high points with SAHIL. Lets watch out for them! :)

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Posted: 11 years ago
Wonderful Story...
Loved it..😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
Hi All,
For everyone that has been following Dil Jale, a big thanks! Just loved the response and the support I got for this SS! I hope to write more in the future.

Currently working on another idea. For those interested, my SEHAN SS "Yeh Dhooriya" is currently going as well. It does have a lot of SAHIL in it too.

Thanks again

Love

Mandy
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Posted: 11 years ago
loved the ending so cute loved the confession and loved how both just talked and sorted some of their misunderstanding loved that he started opening up to her about his past loved it thanks for the pm.
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: dumas

loved the ending so cute loved the confession and loved how both just talked and sorted some of their misunderstanding loved that he started opening up to her about his past loved it thanks for the pm.



Thanks! I just love this photo. I really enjoyed writing this series and have really loved reading the great comments you have all written. I will surely continue to write on SAHIL. I am just short of time at the moment, and I have been sick too. But will try and make some time soon!

Thanks again! :)
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Posted: 11 years ago
Amazing update
Loved it
Cute SaHil moments
Amazing story
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: honeybees22

Amazing update
Loved it
Cute SaHil moments
Amazing story



Thanks a lot. The characters are such that they are a pleasure to write about! :)
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Posted: 10 years ago
Mandy,
My Nz Behna...

You got to know I am reading this.
It is bloody awesome..
And I am imagining every single scene.

I am at the point where Aahil told Sanam he is in love with her...

Haiiyeee My heart Tuting and Tutting and Tuttting...💔

So much Angst Hanga! And so much weepy hogaya...
I am off to read ok...

I am so happy Tamara asked me to read this.
Its so so brilliant...And such a swift and fast read.
Can't stop reading...
I read 12 chapters last night... Now baki ka tonight..

Love and hugs.. It;s simply superb.👏
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Posted: 10 years ago
If only he knew the future love of his life was going to see him, he would have run a mile before going anywhere near that bloody haystack! Looks like he will never live it down! Aahil punched the door with his fist in frustration, for a minute forgetting his injured state!😆


OH I want this scene in the show...
Please Four Lyons...I mean Four Lions... Listen to Mandy.

"All faculties are working fine". Well she had to concede they were. It didn't seem that his knock on the head or painful shoulder was impeding him in any way when it came to his prowess in bed. It seemed there were many positions one could take to avoid putting pressure on sore arms. Now thinking of it she blushed, but at the time, she had been more than eager and willing.


Yah Allah!

Kya Likti Hia aap Mandy Ji...😉
Juliet Blush* Blush*😆😆
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Posted: 10 years ago
Loved it Mandy.
It was so well conceptualized.

It was just so flawless.

I couldn't get enough of the epilogue.

Oh such an adorable couple.

I wanted to hug Aahil when he spoke about his father.
Lovely spoke and written so well.

Thank you for sharing this Darling.

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