|AsYa FF| Destinies Intertwined Thread # 8, Last Chap, Page 53 :) - Page 39

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Posted: 11 years ago
So sad that its over :( I hope you start a new FF though!

Coming to the update it was like the perfect ending. You did an airport confession!!! That was my favorite part. Zaroon is really a great guy and I knew he would give up his seat so Asad can be with Zoya. Great update!
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Posted: 11 years ago
What 2 say man... Awesome update... Loved how u described each and every small thing...
Feeling sad for zaroon though... V definitely deserve a cheesy and romantic epilogue...
Hats off to u... U really have taken..hope to c ur next off soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
Wow... It was simply a great story...really really great... One thing I am sure about is i will always remember this ff ...

It was such a wonderful story full of so many emotions... Especially LOVE...

Hey Smiley star... Talking about the scenes from this Love Story, there are many...

Scene where zoya barge into asad's room through window so that he won't hurt himself was beautiful...

The scene in which zaroons love for zoya was described was simply heart breaking...

There were a lot of ayaan zoya scenes that one can never forget. How inspite of being careless ayaan cares for every single person in his life...

This story was not only about ASYA... Its about every single person playing role in this. Be it ayaan or najma or dilshaad or zaroon, they were as important as asad and zoya were.

Dilshaad is the sweetest mother and mother-in-law anyone could get. She is perfect in your story. Loved the scene when she forgave zoya to take steps for honor of her self respect. Being a mother she can't help to worry but being a woman with dignity she respects zoya a lot ..

Najma is as sweet as anyone could get. So our tamatar was in love in your story. So many things happen in one month only. Loved her brothers a lot. Her relation with her Bhabhi was brilliant..

Now there we have zoya... The life of this story..like literally. Her craving to get loved was so natural. Her love for Asad is beyond any description. I love their first night scene where they fought like enemies...

What can I say about asad, he is what he is..an emotionally challenged, incredibly smart, devilishly handsome, over protective and hopelessly in love...
I will remember the scene in which he saw zoya's scars on her arm. The description of his emotional whirlwhil was wonderful.

I like the scene of najma's bidaai. It was overwhelming to read these siblings share happiness, asad controlling his emotions and zoya's simple gesture of placing her hand on asad's arm at that time...wow ... I'll miss this story...

Ayaan and zoya's discussion on love on najma's reception was something unforgettable. And the dialogue about of ayaan about asad's smile was one in a million.

I don't Knw how to tell or write more and more about this story...there r so many sweet and cute little scenes indicating how perfect this story is...!!!!

Now... I just want to tell you to please continue this a little. As a reader I want to Cherish this story some more. In this story of one month of asya marriage, they confessed in the last episode...ufff ... Can you believe it...they were married in the first episode only... And the whole month was their changing emotions towards each other and their respective family and friends. I agree there was w lot of love and romance in this one month of their marriage but it was one sided from both the sides (hope m making any sense ). I want to see (read) them romancing like really..not in dreams . they have gone through a lot misery in this whole time and now is the time for their happiness ...their irresistible and irrevocable love... ..I want to read that... Please please please... Itsa sincere request, after watching them go through all this we want to see them cherish their love for each other... And also their families reactions after knowing their one month deal and airport confession... Really...!!
I think I should stop now... But please give a thought to it...

... With lot of respect
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Posted: 11 years ago
One of the oldest on-going fiction on the forum comes to an end. This was an absolute delightful read.


"They do when Bhaijan fixes them." Ayaan replied confidently. "He puts so much heart into it that they turn out even better than before."


"I just want to remind you that Bhaijan loves you. If he has broken your dreams, then he will be the one who will bring your dreams to life too, Mona... Once he realizes he has hurt you, he'll do anything to make up for it, to drive away your pain."


True to Asad's basic essence and the narrative. Ayaan certainly has immense faith, trust and confidence in his brother and Ayaan's recognition of Asad is rightly precise.


"It's simple. A person only gets disappointed when he or she has high expectations from the other person."


Absolute truth!


"What are you planning on doing Zoya?"

"I can't tell you that, Ammi."

"Then tell me, whatever you're planning on doing, does your heart tell you it is the right thing to do?"

"Not the right thing Ammi, the only thing to do." Zoya answered, trying to keep her voice level.


This was tear-jerking, pulled at heartstrings.


I saw the man I called my husband, playing cricket on the streets to honor his father's memory and losing deliberately to children at the end and I thought to myself that I'd never seen a finer man in my whole life.


Her realization was breathtaking. That independent recollection was just as beautiful as the narration of the actual scene, an imperfectly perfect man, a broken being, yet a liberated soul.


"That's the beauty of love I guess. It doesn't look for huge, extravagant moments; all it looks for is a good heart and I guess that is the reason I fell for you so hard because your heart is the purest thing about you.

Look at me rambling on but I just had to say all this, Mr. Khan. You need to know all this. You need to know that you deserve to be loved... I don't know whether I can say the same about me though... As much as I would've liked it, you and I can never be together. You and I together, is a broken dream that will have to complete itself in sleep, never in reality."


This letter was simply beautiful.


"I love you, Zoya." He said softly with such confidence and with such simplicity in his air that Zoya was left dumbstruck. "I'm here to tell you that I love you. It's that simple and that complicated." His voice was thick, his eyes shimmering with tears that looked like they were going to escape any minute.


The blood shot eyes, tone of voice and expressions were so imaginable and true to Asad's basic characteristics. Simple yet exquisite. Simply loved that he boarded that flight along with Zoe, who I thought was written beautifully in this chapter, the balance of the emotions she felt was a charming read.


I couldn't help but feel unexplained pain for Zaroon, he is an amazing friend.


Hope we get an Epilogue, this couple along with their amazing family and Zaroon would be a charming read post confession/honeymoon. And you could perhaps treat us to a fiction where they are parents, that you so brilliantly write. 😳 ⭐️


P.S Favorite Scenes:


1. Asad burning that briefcase of money to keep Zoya warm for the night;

2. Playing cricket on the road with those little children and;

3. The night Zoe runs from home, leading to Asad's realization.


When I reflect over this FF, these three scene stand out because of the sentiment, realization and perception behind them, apart from this, there were numerous poignant and enthralling scenes throughout this amazingly captivating journey.


Until next time!

❤️

Edited by p_s05 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Wow... It was amzng
Perfect end... I loved it...
U did a great job

Hp u ll write more
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Posted: 11 years ago
What an awesome story and a beautiful ending!
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Posted: 11 years ago
amazing story :)
you write very well.
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Posted: 11 years ago
This was an absolutely amazing story. I'm so sad that it's completed.
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Posted: 11 years ago
send your zaroon my way- seriously, he's the sweetest, bestest friend ever EVER!!
loved it all-this update and of course this ff
i'm going to go back and reread it possibly this weekend (and go blind in the process but eh)
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Posted: 11 years ago
Awww...I got a special shoutout!!! 😊

You deserve all that encouragement and more Fari, for being such an awesome writer and human being!!!

Will be back with my usual lamba wala comment after my second read ok??


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