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Mitwaaa

@Mitwaaa

Beginner

Posted: 11 years ago

#401

Im sad that this beautiful ff ended 😭
the ending was perfect! I loved the entire story but the airport scene was so adorable and amazing!

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jaanu013

@jaanu013

Inactive

Posted: 11 years ago

#402

superb ending

asya confession was beautifully written

loved the zaroon part,he loves zoya very much but felt happy for them

its sad it ended but hoping for an epilogue

thanks for updating

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Mayur Chan

@MayurChan

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#403

Hi...Fari..well i should first thank you for such a lovely and wonderful story...and i think it is the longest running FF which ended...well every good thing finishes and gives way for the new ones...and i hope you will come again with another work...i was a silent reader...but i recently only started commenting..and it was a very blissfull experience for me...and it was one of the top most beautiful FF's on this forum which i have read...i don't have enough words to convey my emotions..but as you asked about any fav scene from this FF ,the first scene that came to my mind was the scene in Asad's room where zoya and Asad for the first time shared their past with each other and then followed by zoya realisation of her love for asad during that cricket match...it is my fav scenes in this whole FF's there are many other also but i liked them the most..and coming back to the end...it started off on a serious note where zoya was planning to leave...and then again Ayaan as always talked and make sense...and made zoya laugh in that situation also...i must tell you that this Ayaan of your FF was the most sensible ,witty,loveable...Ayaan on this Forum to whom i came across...and the Dilshaad-zoya convo was also touching ,,special mention to Zaroon for being a true friend..in this thick time...i thought zoya receieved more than enough happiness in this update but when you actually go through this FF she is the one who is cryingg alot and it has been her journey ...so she very well deserves this happines...ALL WELLS THAT ENDS WELL...thanku for such a lovly story and do continue soon...

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cool_sri

@cool_sri

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#404

Superbbb update!!!! Very very well written..loved it...

Zoya-Ayaan scene & then Zoya -dilshaad scene were fabbb...

Asad confession part was outstanding!!!! So heart touching & then Asya scenes after the confession were so lovely cute!!!

But I felt very bad for zaroon..he is such a great guy , a perfect friend...frankly speaking I loved him a lot in this story,, more than Asya hehe ;))

U should have given a happy ending for him too..

anyways if possible please write an epilogue...would love to read!!!!!

& plz do keep writing new stories!!! Love to read ur stories!!!

U are an amazing story writer...keep up the good work!!!

Edited by cool_sri - 11 years ago

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lourel24

@lourel24

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#405

Superb update.No words to explain how much I loved it.Every scene was simply amazing.ayan zoya ,dilshad zoya n finally our asya.haii! Today I m going to dream visually of ur update.trust me.Zoya's reaction after she had seen asad sitting beside her was so much adorable.I cud truly imagine her reaction n obviously credit goes to ur fabulous writing skill.I loved the dialogue "Can we get to the but' part of the speech?" of ayan.I was literally grinning at this dialogue. 👏

Edited by lourel24 - 11 years ago

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Waqt Zaya

@WaqtZaya

Elite

+ 7

Posted: 11 years ago

#406

ressing before i forget my bad fari.. been too tired :(

p.s. i l y toh

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Mishal Sheikh

@mishal9

Explorer

Posted: 11 years ago

#407

Wow! That was amazing!! 😊

This was the best Fanfiction i have ever read and I wouldn't be lying if i said it was my favourite. You had me hooked to it from, "Allah Miyaan! What's wrong with you? Can't you watch where you're going?" From Chapter one till, "forever and beyond" in the last one.

You should know that you are an amazing writer and I used to wait for this FF with bated breath and every single time I saw your PM my face used to break into a smile.

I just love the way you've expressed all the feelings the characters must've felt in a particular scene and how I could actually understand what they could feel. I laughed with the characters, Aww'ed at Zaroon's lines ( since Fawad is such a cutie pie), cried with them and mostly... the lines were so in sync with the characters. It would be a shame if you don't write another Fanfiction.

Sad that its over but all great things come to an end and this did too. Loved it! Especially the ending bit with the forever and beyond! 😊

Edited by mishal9 - 11 years ago

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Natasha

@drunkiiebabe

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#408

Amazing ending Loved it <3 Thanks for the pm

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ChocoBerry

@ChocoBerry

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#409

Fari, loved the story. It was a pleasure to have read this story. It felt so real. Never during all these months did I feel that there was any lacking in the way you have narrated the story.

It always kept me hooked on. You wouldn't know it, cause i never spam threads, but I always waited for updates here. It was a treat to read how the get hitched and promise to walk away from eachother after a month but keep getting pulled in. It was just superb.

And the ending was so happvala too. Asad getting onto the plane with her was just amazing. I loved his confession, every word of it. It really touched my heart. I also liked how Zoya wanted a few last minutes with everyone before she left them.

Simply a superb story that I am going to miss.

Please give us an epilogue filled with their honeymoon.

Loved it Fari and thank you for sharing it with us.