|AsYa FF| Destinies Intertwined Thread # 8, Last Chap, Page 53 :) - Page 40

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Posted: 11 years ago
this was so awesome!!!
i can't believe this wonderful journey came to an end...

this one had a perfect blend of every emotion...love...friendships...envy...arrogance...cuteness...pain...affection...everything !!!!

i really adore u as a writer n one of my favorites is this one...what u wrote!!

mindblowing journey...

n i want an Epilogue seriously!!

n about what i liked...of course AsYa!!!
n after that zaroon...selfless man n the bestest friend one could have...n i had a desire once to see him getting the one who loves him as much as he deserves...hope you'll write about it in the Epilogue...if possible!

continue soon...
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Posted: 11 years ago
Oh Fari.



Oh you.



What can I say really. My first story here ever. EVER. And all that amazing memories.


Pick a part that I love most? How do I do that. How? How do I pick?

All of Zaroon is all loved. He had to be in love with her...I wish he loves her but not be in love with her. There is such love. It's the same as Zaroon has except the pain is a different pain. Dulling and mulling. But not quite aching. More like what Ayaan would feel if he knows Zoya is leaving. But times ten. Zaroon in the end wasn't as important as Asad's family. And that got me to see perspective. So it's fine really that he's in love with her coz only then the sacrifice he made would be twice as meaningful. And dayum all that angst. He gives up his place as if that's the most natural thing to do..!!


And Fari. All that pain. And agony. Zoya was crying. Asad was in pain. Well both were in so much pain. Love love love!! I cry too man! I picture them. Of him at the airport confessing. And of her talking to Ayaan and Dilshad. And that letter. That is just so very painful. Painful but beautiful. Painfully beautiful. LOVE!



And what more I love. What more. I love their meeting at the shop where they went to buy their wedding suit. YES! hat long back. You must remember I read chapters 1 to 8 repeatedly. For a long long time!

I love when Zoya thought she could be getting married to an older man with moustache.

And then.


I love their fight after the wedding in his room. And that she wasn't feeling well! And her red anarkali.

I love the car ride back home after their waleema. She slept on his shoulder? Or was this after Nikah! Omg. I'm in a daze.


I love Imran's entry and Asad being hard on him and him winning over Asad. Love.



You already know I love everything of Zaroon. There's two I'd like to point here.

First is that video call when Asad learnt that Zoya got hurt because of him? A headache? OMG! The daze is heightening! Got him to drink milk? I need some air. IS THE STORY REALLY FINISHED???? I CAN'T. I JUST CAN'T.


Sorry Fari, this is really hard for me. Everything is just fuzzy. Omg. This is it. This is the end. A beautiful, heart touching, soulful journey. Has ended.


Omg.



This is so hard. Anyway. The second thing is Zoya and Zaroon as kids. Drawing on the floor and being with each other for each other. You know how impactful that chapter was for me. Just how tear jerkingly pure the whole flashback was.


Oh Fari. There's so much more to share with you. So much more...but this is proving so very difficult for me...and I'm just...I don't even know.


Oh Fari. Love you. I cannot thank you enough for this but thankful I am. And thank you I will. Thank you, thank you so much! Appreciate your brilliance and your amazing gesture in sharing this with us!


You're one of a kind. None other like you! One piece. Special!



Mwah mwah my darling. May you find happiness in all that you do!

Loads of love,
Farz
Posted: 11 years ago
wow
beautifull update
loved it
😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
such a fabulous update...one of ur best updates till date..
it was emotional in the start..which brought tears to my face ..but later on it was so happy..
awesme wala update and beautiful story too..
pls do pm me if u write more..
and an epilogue next wud be like a cherry on the top..
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Posted: 11 years ago
U writen a totally totally Lovely story from start to finish, loved every chapter, thank you so much for taking your time out to write it
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Posted: 11 years ago
Well such a wonderful n magical story of asya n m glad that m a part of dis journey through reading dis ff...
Zoya's heartbreak asad's confession they jst amazed me u know m feeling so lucky now that I got a chance to real such a beautiful story that can touch anybody's heart even if he is heartless 😳
asya's love hmmm well I have no words for that 👏
But I seriously want a happy ending for zaroon like he was exiting from airport n bump with a girl n mitwa moment or eyelock guess wat m a total Bollywood fan 😆
Well that's my views becoz m feeling really sad for zaroon 😭
But it's ok i'll suppose he'll find a kashaf for him soon too' 👏
Yaar m going to miss this ff badly..
N at last I want to thank u for sharing ur thoughts n your blockbuster story with us that's an honour to be a part of this 😳 😭
Love this ff n love you for posting it n completing it 😳
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Posted: 11 years ago
Fari, don't you want to send Zaroon to me.. I doubt there are any other selfless guys around..
This was an amazing end.. A very emotional update at certain points as well, the tears couldn't help but make its presence..
The Zoya - Ayaan scene and Zoya - Dilshaad scene was very well penned..
Can still remember chapter 1 of this FF and today it ended.. Hope you will write an epilogue for this..
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Posted: 11 years ago
Wonderful ending yaaarrr...
Loved it very much...
I am feeling sorry for zaroon..poor guy...
I wished he also find a match for him like zoyaa...
As per your request...
I loved the first meetings & marriage of asya very much...
Total story was amazing...
All chapters were better than another...
Will you givea epilogue for this story...
Pls write more stories about asya...
And one more thing pls don't forget to pm me...
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Posted: 11 years ago
awsm update
luvd it
plz do write more
thanx for d pm
t.c
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Posted: 11 years ago
Amazing + Emotional Update...👍🏼

Every Scene Is Written Beautifuly...🤗

Just Love It...😊

Update Next Part Soon...😃

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