Th#4 AsYa FF Across The Shadows - Chapter 10 to 13

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Posted: 11 years ago

#81

Originally posted by: SBanoMalik

I dont want 'Thank you' ! 😡 😆 😉
Well i had read it last night but now read thedited version ! And Thank you so much !! Thats so so so sweet !! 🤗 love u !! ❤️
Well at least in this hell, she went knowingly 😕
I said that u r updating tomorrow ! 😳 PLEEEAAASSSEEE ? Rehem kijiye Jahanpanah ! Humein update de dijiye ! 🤣 🤣 🤣

ohh I forgot 😲😆

yeah I wrote in a hurry but then I edited it after an hour 😆

Love u tooo 🤗

well yeah she did !!

is gustaakh ko deewaar ke ander bund kerdo 😎🤣🤣

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Posted: 11 years ago

#82

Originally posted by: Azraa01
Congrats on the new thread..
Loved the update, especially the end..

Thanks 😳

I am glad that you liked it !!

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--Bubble007--

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Posted: 11 years ago

#83

Originally posted by: -Crazy4AsYa-
just read last two chapters !!!
thank god asad had a wrong info about zohura n doesn't believe her to be character- less!!

i love asya's banter n stupid fights here...
n i am so happy that asad had confessed...at least to himself!!

continue soon

yeah he was misinterpreted about her !!

Thanks 😳

I am glad that you liked it !!

Will try updating sooon 😊

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Posted: 11 years ago

#84

Originally posted by: -Crazy4AsYa-
belated happy birthday bano n iqra...
may god bless u always!!!

Aww thanks for that 🤗

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--Bubble007--

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Posted: 11 years ago

#85

Originally posted by: Sanjhari
what ... y u have to stop there...
firstly congrats for the new thread...

I love the update... I love the cute bonding of two sisters...

so gaffur is no more... understand how difficult it was for Zoya to stay with Razia... and Nisha is always there to support her... even advise to run away...😆

but what I love the most is the growing relationship of ASYA/... aww he is doing so many things for her...

n don't want her to go...

I was laughing with the whole remote control stuff...

m really glad y r fully charged up... and writing for next chapter... as even I cant wait to read next one...

because I thought its getting long 😆

Thank you !!

I am glad that you liked it 😳

haha yeah nice advice but let see if it works or not 😉

Yeah he is in love ❤️

Aww will try my best to update sooon !!

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Mrinalini

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Posted: 11 years ago

#86

Fantastic chapter.

Asad is so adorable! I can see a confession coming!

Continue soon!

- Mrina <3

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Miss-Appy

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Posted: 11 years ago

#87

Originally posted by: --Bubble007--

ohh I forgot😲😆
yeah I wrote in a hurry but then I edited it after an hour😆
Love u tooo🤗
well yeah she did !!
is gustaakh ko deewaar ke ander bund kerdo😎🤣🤣

NAAAHHHIII !! Aapko apne FFs ki kasam ! Aapko apne frequent updates ki kasam ! Aisa mat kijye Jahanpanah ! Rehem kijiye Jahanpanah ! Iss kaneez ko deewar mein mat chunwaiye !! 🤣 🤣

Edited by SBanoMalik - 11 years ago

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shreya mehra

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Posted: 11 years ago

#88

Res😔

Chappi 10

M very much RELIEVED aftr this update😳

Razia n her kamini aulaad saiqa atlst gt wat thy dn to INNOCENT zoya🥳

HUMZI read the note wat zoya wrt fr her..n gethered her all courage to call her😳..

I love the convo..n the best part is humzi PROMISED her to meet..

I like the flashback dis tym😃

Her BEFKUF GOFFY died..she had nothing left in dat house fr whom she stayed..

Atlst NISHA gv her much needed courage to leave the house😳..

I love this asad hu ORDERED her evey tym..hu DOMINATED on hr😎..

I thnk she need that KINDA PERSON hu gv her gud GUILDENCE to mk her life better..

The whole scene btwn asad n zoya ws very BEAUTIFULLYwritten👏. .

He wanted her to STAY at his plc..bt she ws HESITATING. .

He ws OVERPROTECTED to zoya. .which she liked very much..bt didnt ACCEPT it😳😆..

Overall I love their love dovy MOMENTS❤️😳

off to nxt CHAPPI

LOVE

SHREYA😉

Edited by shreya11mehra - 11 years ago

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Saima Syed

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Posted: 11 years ago

#89

Brilliant update Bubble

Oh my Ghaffur dies

Their fight was so cute, loved how she slipped and sat on his lap...perfect for lol

Hmm doesn't want her to go

Looking forward to next update

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A.S.K

@ToughStuff

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Posted: 11 years ago

#90

Originally posted by: --Bubble007--

Thanks😳
I am glad that you liked it !!
haha yeah Ghafoor is dead😆
D'ohhh !! no not Akram atleast😲😆
not soo sooon --- let them meet first😉
yeah they r❤️

oh?
den who she got married!!
the Asli characterless girl is living a happy married life!!
while our bechari zohura living alone!!
But Asad is nw wid her !!

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