Th#4 AsYa FF Across The Shadows - Chapter 10 to 13 - Page 100

Part 10
Abt present:❤️
Wohoo i did a happy dance when i read abt that taklu death
Loved whole humi /zoya talk😃
Sad to know that only humi has given her beautiful memories in her family
Wow saiqua got married😲 she deserved to be in hell..😡
Abt past :
Hehehe finally bast**d got heart attack😃
LOved nisha's concern abt zohura.. And nisha mom is ready to help her..
Lets see how it will unfold...
Poor zoe didn'y have any education
Coming to present asya scene:
First strangers - well wisher(adviser) - now they become friends - what next lovers haina😆
Loved whole remote passing fight scene❤️
How surprisingly she fell down above him n their increasing close proximity☺️
I thought he is not an EC but he is an EC..
he n his woh actually🤣 🤣

You know wat bubba i was curious to read when he will come to know abt her past - abt behind this beautiful smile there was a horrible past ?????
cutely written bubba..
i loved it...

Part 11:
Abt present😳
How adorable asad - he don't want her to go germany❤️
Aww for the first time he kissed on her forehead☺️
I know i know i know asad - now u kissed on her forehead - then on her cheek - then on her lips ☺️ and so on☺️ ☺️
I cant believe my eyes that he initiated the kiss..
Wow their r/s is progressing..
Loved phone convo - now she started to share abt her few thinks - one day surely she will share abt her whole horrible past soon...
This is wat i like from asad he never ever ask her anything which would disturb her...❤️
Lol her jahapanah said ich liebe dich for the first time - but zoya wont know german
Abt past:
She was out of the dracula😊 but Y i think some bad thing is going to happen for my zoya

Twists in the tales😆
I have 9 more parts to comment..
Well written bubba❤️
Love yah..

Part 12:
Abt past:
Wohoo finally zoe was out of the shell..
Im happy but sad at the same time coz till now she faced some torture by disgusting people in her house.. Somewhat she was safe their..
Now she was out from her house. She have to face so many things..
I hope god will give courage to face the world bravely...
I felt something fishy in nisha's mom gaze..
I ready to read the worst past of zoya in upcoming parts...
Abt present..
Poor humi coz of razia n saiqa humi got punishment for no reason[b(]
Saiqa got married - she was forced to marry that guy - tell me bubba who is the guy????? Y razia forced saiqua into marriage.
U know y im asking bcoz when humi was abt to ans evil writer cutted it - is their any reason behind it - in one chappi u mentioned that asad - he said im not going to visit his family though he is in the same city..
I hope u wont tell us that guy saiqa married was asad - which was a forced marriage after zoe exit.
So that he was angry on his family..
I know u will prove me wrong..
And also i know my asad was a gentle man..
At present in confused.
I hope all will be revealed in future..
Okay now i coming back to this part
Hehehe time is always cruel now razia eating her own medicine..
Abt asya.
Loved how curiously asad waited for her, then how zoya arrived in black, how he admires her, how she blushed a lil..
Wow she brought sunil with her - mazaa ayega🤣 🤣
Excited to read jeally asad..
Pointed to be noted - zoya called him as JAHAPANAH for the first time❤️
Loved this part..
beautifully penned...

Part 13:
Bubba this part was super duper short part..
But i forgive u bcoz u gave us cute asya moments..
Thank u so much for the asyalious part..
loved how cutely asad hugged zoya lightly.. And also he ignored sunil🤣 🤣 also he was lil rude to him..😆
who is Mr.mehra? Zoya said🤣 🤣
Who is sunil? Asad said🤣 🤣
then asad ignored her but pinch of pain raised in his heart when he saw her with sunil in dance floor🤣 🤣
Ab agayi mazaa my most waited asya moment
I just loved the way u wrote abt whole scene n their close proximity☺️
The way u protrayed jealous AAK was epic🤣 🤣
He asked her to dance with him☺️
They said you are hurting me eachother
Asad n his Iche liebe dich😳 but this time he said it unintentionally and he pressed his lips on the soft skin☺️
Did i ever tell u that how much i love u n ur stories.
U are simply fabulous bubba..👏 ❤️
7 more parts to reach 20..

Originally posted by: -Anitha-

Yo yipee!! Finally asad confessed and kissed her wow!!<3<3 bubblu too good!!:-*:-* muuaaahhh..