New Asya FF: the runaway bride * update chap26 page 129, 2/1/15*

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nilusoni

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Posted: 10 years ago

#321

Superb part loved it
thanx for pm
plz pm me for next
continue soon

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potternerd

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Posted: 10 years ago

#322

Loved the update

Asad being so rude just to keep zoya away !!!! 😒

Amir nice guy 😊

I loved how asad made zoya eat 😳

Continue soon :)

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jas91

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Posted: 10 years ago

#323

d start was very serious but i was laughing at d last part😆

Asad was lonely sitting in his home & Zoya came wid coffee where she talked about Romance & her dream boy.😊

Next day Asad brought Amir & i m sure he purposely scolded her when later he will present Amir as Zoya's suitor as he promised 2 her family.😭

They had a big fight again & Zoe almost blurted that she loves him❤️ but stopped

She wants her old Asad😭 back Amir is attracted 2 her🤢

D last scene was enjoyable as i said already

loved d updt😃

PS- when is d girl coming in office 4 Asad,😳 i want jello Zoya soon😆😉

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PrettYSmile

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Posted: 10 years ago

#324

OMG! Now, this is totally not expected...

I really can't figure out y asad behaving like dish.. ...is he doing it purposefuly, so dat zoya will hate him n eventually get close to amir...Ohh no.. Pata nahi.. .

But I ll tell u one thing, I don't find zoya totaalyy wrog here.. .I mean common, if v think on her pov, she never hurted asad knowingly. ..or on purpose. ..she wanted to marry a guy whom she ll love n know well. .
N after here too, she cares for him n want to help him.. dats different dat its hurting him.. .

She is not able to figure out her own feelings. .stupid girl. ..

N whatever she has done, nobody deserve dis kind of treatment. ...

M sure asad has a big reason behind dish behavior. .he is not any jerk kind.. ..or may be he is too much frustrated. ...

[/B]both r right on their places. ...but this behavior is not acceptable. ..[B]

Anyway, awesome update. .getting intresting day by day..
Plllzzz try update sooner. .. grt job madam. ..

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aseela sha

@aseelashah

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Posted: 10 years ago

#325

Its so touching update Radha

Poor Asad he cant go away from Zoya😭

He is hurting her for making her go away from him

Zoya hurts cause of his words

She is confused cause of Asad's behaviour

Asad is trying to make Amir & Zoya a pair

Pls update soon

thanks for pm

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ak020203

@ak020203

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Posted: 10 years ago

#326

Loved the update. ..

Very intense. . Very emotional. . Amazing ..

Well written. .

Thanks for updating

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radadolcevida

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Posted: 10 years ago

#327

Originally posted by: -ABI-
unres

well Radha this update is far much better than last one
and LOVED: AsYa backfiring the most

I ENJOY READING IT

TRY TO UPDATE SOON

Thank you Abi, I'm happy that you like it, but Asad's word were a bit hard for zoya 😭

Anyway, I started writting the next chapter , hope you will like it dear

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radadolcevida

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Posted: 10 years ago

#328

Originally posted by: Ihopelove
Hey,
That was superb.
Asad is really trying hard to be away from her but his heart failed again.
Amir looks really nice guy. I think asad going to put amirs proposal for zoya in front of gaffur in the near future.
Asad insult zoya badly. Shes heart by asads words. She wants her asad back. Zoya is really confuse who is the real asad.
My poor asad how much more he has to bear the pain.
U said last time it will be strong jealousy but from which side. Its going to jealous asad or jealous zoya or both.
Awesome chapter dear.
Continue soon

thank you dear, I'm glad tha you like it 😃

I want Asad and Amir to be really opposite in this chapter, and the title is not only for Asad with his 2 sides but it also concerned Amir, the beauty in this chapter.

For the jealousy track, it will come , in 2 or 3 chapter, but for the following chapter, you will essential read from ZOya's vision , Asad's pov will come after a big twist. Hope you will like it.

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radadolcevida

@radadolcevida

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Posted: 10 years ago

#329

Originally posted by: sasir
nice
i thought i can see jealous zoya which will make realise asad's importance in her life
but here it seemed quite opposite
plz dont bring amir in zoya's life
i feel that being stupid she is she prefer amir if asad ask her
i was lil bit dissapointed
asad is trying really hard to make her hate him
poor asad
my heart went out for him
how much he have to bear
plz update soon

Jealousy track in Zoya's side will come soon in 2 or 3 chapters, but for the following chapter, you will see the story from Zoya's side, I want to show how new feeling will grow on her.

For Amir, he is a nice guy, that all the girl dream about, but the story is about finding a guy for Zoya, I'm sorry that you are disapointed with this new entry, but the storyline is like this, but don't worry I like beautiful ending 😉

I didn't expect that you will not be angry against Asad with his harsh word toward Zoya, but it depend on which side we are.

I will dear, I started writing hope I will finish soon

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radadolcevida

@radadolcevida

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Posted: 10 years ago

#330

Originally posted by: -Crazy4AsYa-
wonderful!!
continue soon
excited for more clashes between asya

Thank you dear,

I have mixed of opinion about Asya clash, some are for Asad and the other for Zoya, it's really exciting for me as a writer, to give such an opposite feeling to my readers, I 'm glad 😃

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