New Asya FF: the runaway bride * update chap26 page 129, 2/1/15* - Page 35

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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: ak020203

Loved the update. ..

Very intense. . Very emotional. . Amazing ..
Well written. .
Thanks for updating


thank you,

anf thank you again , I'm happy that you feel this, it mean that I translate my feeling too into the story and I'm glad that you feel the same

"well written" thank you, really, because I'm not good in english but I improve with the chapter

thank you dear
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: radadolcevida



Thank you dear,

well why Asad behaving like this, you will know it later, and in your different proposition , on is right😉, but I won't tell you which one.
I know that Asad's word was really bad and cruel and It cost me a lot to write this part, I went out all his frustration out and hurt feelings toward.
I'm totally agree with you, none of them were in fault, Asad never exposed his feeling toward Zoya and at the beginning, Asad was friendly and protective and she only see him as a truth friend.
Like all the girls, she have her dream and she just want to be in love, and I agree that she didn't deserve that from Asad, but this is how the storyline goes in my mind.
The following chapter, you will see the story from Zoya's vision, Asad's pov will come later after some new twist, hope you will like it.
And thank you for you PM, your word touched me lot and I will answer to you in private.
Thank you dear, you are the best and I'm really glad to have such a beautiful reader like you❤️



Ohhh datsss sooo sweet.. .thaaank u dear..
N another fact is v r lucky to have such beautiful writters like u.. ..u r one of my fav writters.. .
Thaank u for this beautiful story..
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: PrettYSmile



Ohhh datsss sooo sweet.. .thaaank u dear..
N another fact is v r lucky to have such beautiful writters like u.. ..u r one of my fav writters.. .
Thaank u for this beautiful story..


thank you dear, again, I don't know what to say 😭, the next chapter I will dedicated just for you, promess ❤️
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Posted: 10 years ago
Thanks for the update
Really enjoyed reading it..
Thanks for the pm...
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Posted: 10 years ago
Hii...Radha hope you won't mind calling you that...and yeah now i also got on what part iam right...but will love if it come as a suprise to me...and i think zoya will think that she can fall for or like amir while comparing him to asad...but 2 ya 3 updates are more than enough time for the twists...well continue soon.
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: radadolcevida


You see I finally introduced a good guy for Zoya and I'm happy all of my reader likes him, afterall, he's really sweet person and as expected, he is attracted to Zoya.
Asad's word was really bad I know and many of you had hated him, but the storyline goes like this. For the following chapter, you will see only the story from Zoya's vision, Asad had suffer a lot so I don't to expose for the moment his feeling, but it will come.
For the new girl and the jealousy track, it will come in 2 or 3 chapter later, hope you will like this new characters


No no dear i don't hate Asad mera dimag khrab hai kya😆
cuz definitely i know his reasons, he is trying 2 push her away & mayb he has this secret agenda😉 2 make Zoya like Amir cuz we know he is man of wrods & he promised Guffi 2 find a suitable match 4 Zoya plus he thinks Zoya doesn't feel anything 4 him so is not fighting 4 his love.😭
And hum sabko pata hai how angry he can get at times i know he went 2 far but knowing him i think it was expected specially 4 a person 2 bear lose of a company he made wid his hardwork kya kehte hain Khon paseene ki kamayi hai😃😉 so why he wont get angry agar koi aur hota toh bhi woh yahi karta aur Zoya ne khud responsibility bhi toh li thi😲
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Posted: 10 years ago
Nice update
Loved the asya in the garden the convo nice
They just can't stay away from each other
Aww he sipped her coffee
So a new character is here Amir
He is already attracted to zoya so new boss of zoya
Oh asad blasted her and blames her she has 3 days or she is fired
Aww he called her a kid and tell her to grow up
He is really pushing her away and harsh too
But he can't stay away he just keeps coming and checking on her in pretence of Amir
Haha Amir asked if she loved asad she is speechless hope she realizes soon
Wonder if asad will take Amir proposal for zoya
He is a beast or a beauty God who is the real asad
She hates him really
Continue
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Posted: 10 years ago
Nice update
Asad wanted to push zoya away from him & she felt it. He took all his anger on her. He hurt her with his words but zoya knew that he was pretending to be arrogant. He is hurting himself as well . Amir as a good friend tried to help zoya & he started liking towards zoya. The way asad told her to eat & both behaved was wonderful. Waiting for next update soon to see zoya winning the challenge. Thanks for pm
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: anopama

Nice update

Loved the asya in the garden the convo nice
They just can't stay away from each other
Aww he sipped her coffee
So a new character is here Amir
He is already attracted to zoya so new boss of zoya
Oh asad blasted her and blames her she has 3 days or she is fired
Aww he called her a kid and tell her to grow up
He is really pushing her away and harsh too
But he can't stay away he just keeps coming and checking on her in pretence of Amir
Haha Amir asked if she loved asad she is speechless hope she realizes soon
Wonder if asad will take Amir proposal for zoya
He is a beast or a beauty God who is the real asad
She hates him really
Continue


Thank you
I write it to be a calm before a storm
Yes amir is the new character and he will balance with Asad and his anger toward zoya
this chapter showed the confusion and the friendship turned to be bitter for both, Zoya need to reject friendship to let love going through her heartn and this is how I want it to be.
Thank you, I will update tomorow hope 😃
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: asifiqbalsh

Nice update
Asad wanted to push zoya away from him & she felt it. He took all his anger on her. He hurt her with his words but zoya knew that he was pretending to be arrogant. He is hurting himself as well . Amir as a good friend tried to help zoya & he started liking towards zoya. The way asad told her to eat & both behaved was wonderful. Waiting for next update soon to see zoya winning the challenge. Thanks for pm


Zoya always understand Asad, but she wasn't aware why she was connected to him like this. It was always intense between them.
I introduce the last part (eating part) to balance with the insult part, I know it was a bit harsh and It cost me to write it, and I'm glad that you like it.
Next part , will be all about the challenge and I will update tomorow 😃

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