New Asya FF: the runaway bride * update chap26 page 129, 2/1/15*

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radadolcevida

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Posted: 10 years ago

#331

Originally posted by: sweetnandu
nice,,but wen do we get to c a jealous zoya

soon, in two or 3 chapters later, but not for the moment.

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Posted: 10 years ago

#332

Originally posted by: Missvishtoofani
awsm

thank you dear

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radadolcevida

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Posted: 10 years ago

#333

Originally posted by: spn2013
Asad to much rude, he insult Zoya & Zoya as usual will forgive. I don't like
Insulting parts.

I know, I want it to be rude and cruel , it was really hard for me to write those words 😭, I was feeling bad, but this is how it should turn in my version of the story.

Sorry dear

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Posted: 10 years ago

#334

Originally posted by: mayurchan7

Hii...thanx for the P.M , well it was a long update ,it started off with a interesting talk between ASYA...i just didn't got one thing...that Asad mind swore that he will be away from Zoya but his heart failed him..and Zoya also was very determined to get him out of his miseries...but she also was hurt by his insults on her now both are on loggerheads ...so Amir is going to be the probable select for zoya by Asad i think that is why he behaved somewhat like that...and zoya was also getting positive vibes from Amir...but then your are also introducing a girl character for Asad...Thinking what vibes will zoya get from her...hahaa...continue soon.. 8-)

Well, i'm glad that you understand my feeling and you found the clue, not bad 😉 but I won't prrecise on which part you are right, just to have some surprise, I hope

Well, I want it to be a war feeling between heart and brain from both side, Asad was really mean with her and he pushed her away, so he just acted as his plans. I introduce Amir as the beauty person in Zoya's vision, the title was for both Amir and Asad, for Asad's 2 face and Zoya's 2 face also. Yeah, I can be confused girl sometimes, but I like the mixed in emotions 🤪

The girl character and jealousy track will be introduced soon in 2 or 3 chapter later, hope you will like it

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Posted: 10 years ago

#335

Originally posted by: Mvinfff
Awesome part!

thanks 😉

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Posted: 10 years ago

#336

Originally posted by: nilusoni
Superb part loved it
thanx for pm
plz pm me for next
continue soon

thank you dear and I will pm you for the mext par don't worry 😃

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radadolcevida

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Posted: 10 years ago

#337

Originally posted by: potternerd
Loved the update

Asad being so rude just to keep zoya away !!!! 😒

Amir nice guy 😊

I loved how asad made zoya eat 😳

Continue soon :)

Thank you dear

I know, he was a bit cruel with her, but it was suppose to be like this and it was hard for me to write this part

Amir the beauty person of the story, he balanced with the negative wibes between Asya

Yeah, I want it also to be intense between them, our beloved Asad don't know how to talk always acting 😆

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Posted: 10 years ago

#338

Originally posted by: jas91
d start was very serious but i was laughing at d last part😆
Asad was lonely sitting in his home & Zoya came wid coffee where she talked about Romance & her dream boy.😊
Next day Asad brought Amir & i m sure he purposely scolded her when later he will present Amir as Zoya's suitor as he promised 2 her family.😭
They had a big fight again & Zoe almost blurted that she loves him❤️ but stopped
She wants her old Asad😭 back Amir is attracted 2 her🤢
D last scene was enjoyable as i said already
loved d updt😃

PS- when is d girl coming in office 4 Asad,😳 i want jello Zoya soon😆😉

You see I finally introduced a good guy for Zoya and I'm happy all of my reader likes him, afterall, he's really sweet person and as expected, he is attracted to Zoya.

Asad's word was really bad I know and many of you had hated him, but the storyline goes like this. For the following chapter, you will see only the story from Zoya's vision, Asad had suffer a lot so I don't to expose for the moment his feeling, but it will come.

For the new girl and the jealousy track, it will come in 2 or 3 chapter later, hope you will like this new characters

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Posted: 10 years ago

#339

Originally posted by: PrettYSmile
OMG! Now, this is totally not expected...

I really can't figure out y asad behaving like dish.. ...is he doing it purposefuly, so dat zoya will hate him n eventually get close to amir...Ohh no.. Pata nahi.. .

But I ll tell u one thing, I don't find zoya totaalyy wrog here.. .I mean common, if v think on her pov, she never hurted asad knowingly. ..or on purpose. ..she wanted to marry a guy whom she ll love n know well. .
N after here too, she cares for him n want to help him.. dats different dat its hurting him.. .

She is not able to figure out her own feelings. .stupid girl. ..

N whatever she has done, nobody deserve dis kind of treatment. ...

M sure asad has a big reason behind dish behavior. .he is not any jerk kind.. ..or may be he is too much frustrated. ...

[/B]both r right on their places. ...but this behavior is not acceptable. ..[B]

Anyway, awesome update. .getting intresting day by day..
Plllzzz try update sooner. .. grt job madam. ..

Thank you dear,

well why Asad behaving like this, you will know it later, and in your different proposition , on is right 😉, but I won't tell you which one.

I know that Asad's word was really bad and cruel and It cost me a lot to write this part, I went out all his frustration out and hurt feelings toward.

I'm totally agree with you, none of them were in fault, Asad never exposed his feeling toward Zoya and at the beginning, Asad was friendly and protective and she only see him as a truth friend.

Like all the girls, she have her dream and she just want to be in love, and I agree that she didn't deserve that from Asad, but this is how the storyline goes in my mind.

The following chapter, you will see the story from Zoya's vision, Asad's pov will come later after some new twist, hope you will like it.

And thank you for you PM, your word touched me lot and I will answer to you in private.

Thank you dear, you are the best and I'm really glad to have such a beautiful reader like you ❤️

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radadolcevida

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Posted: 10 years ago

#340

Originally posted by: aseelashah
Its so touching update Radha
Poor Asad he cant go away from Zoya😭

He is hurting her for making her go away from him

Zoya hurts cause of his words

She is confused cause of Asad's behaviour

Asad is trying to make Amir & Zoya a pair

Pls update soon

thanks for pm

Thank you , I'm happy that you feel this mixed of emotion, it mean that I translate what I want to my reader, thank you for your comment

Asad pushed her hard and this is waht he promess her in previous chapter , that he was full of darkness ,

Asad is a confusing guy and for Zoya too, but I introduce Amir to balance between Asya and their war of word, even is Asad who win this time.

I will dear and thanks again