Saahil fic--'So many words...'Chap 7 UPDATED Page32-21 DECEM

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Indu

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Posted: 11 years ago

#41

Originally posted by: Axiom
Loved it! You captured Aahil's pain so accurately.
Hopefully he won't be sad for too long ;)

thanks so much! I am honoured.😳

Aahil is going through a rough patch. Things are going against his wishes. But is it fate or his fault ? He could have taken steps to prevent it. But he didnt. So lets see if he can do it nw!

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Indu

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Posted: 11 years ago

#42

Originally posted by: flowergarden
<font color="#cc6666">wow! always treat to read ur story...👏 👏sorry for the late dear</font>

no worries. Its ok dear.😊
and thanks very much for reading.😳

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Indu

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Posted: 11 years ago

#43

Originally posted by: -Saffi-Surbhi-
aww thank u so much for this beautiful os 😊
loved it ❤️

thank you! :)
You are most welcome dear.🤗

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Indu

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Posted: 11 years ago

#44

Originally posted by: Nitya_Suresh

Awesome OS!! Beautifully written!!!
I felt so bad for Aahil in this scene.. Poor baby!!! Looking forward to what you do to the story!!! So sure its gonna be amazing!!

thanks so much dear. I hope you like the story further as well.😳
thanks for reading. :)

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Indu

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Posted: 11 years ago

#45

Originally posted by: Gayu-Sahil
you portrayed aahils helplessness very well...super piece dear...waiting for others part...my like button is not working..

Thank you.🤗
i will update within an hour.😊

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Indu

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Posted: 11 years ago

#46

Originally posted by: KhatamKahani
This was great, All the thoughts going through Aahil's mind. I almost had tears when I got to this.
But logics failed. His eyes burned with tears.
His heart was on fire. And Aahil felt like inflaming every single thing only if he could.

I saw Aahil's face, the hurt face as he watched them and when Sanam saw him.

Poor baby!

Am glad that you could feel Aahil's emotions and his pain.
Thank you Dear! I tried to portray whatever Aahil is going through. So happy to know i have pleased you. :) thanks again.😳

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Indu

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Posted: 11 years ago

#47

Note: hi guys am back with the next update. And i just want to tell you that here Nida is quite different from the show. And she has a lot more mysteries than meets the eye. 😊
i hope you like it. Enjoy!

They were both looking at each other in a manner that words can never convey. It was ineffable and intense.

Aahil felt a wringing pain in his heart. Something that wouldnt leave him the rest of his life. His hopes and desires were on flame. He could do nothing to save them.

Sanam had no clue how long she stared at him. She swalloed the sudden pique that formed inside her throat. Sanam had no inkling about her own feelings or why she felt what she felt. Her dislodged mind failed to register anything. Tears well up in her eyes again. Whatever she felt at the sight of him standing there were removed by the hurt she had received. She could only feel humiliation and disgrace.

Both sides had no words to exchange. Neither of penance nor of hurt. Though their eyes spoke otherwise. They reflected sparks waiting to be ignited. Yet they remained aloof trying to ignore the irrevocable thread that bound both of them.
Silently they sat back inside the car. None except Rehan spoke occasionaly. Aahil was mute all through the time like he had left his blazing side somewhere behind.
Once or twice as their eyes met Sanam saw the passion in his eyes but she did not dare to think the emotional explanation it could have behind. Perhaps she was unable. Because her mind was only used to think herself as the hater. Never the one who can as well be desired. Admiration was not something she was used to, that too from Aahil Raza Ibrahim! Never.

It was a smooth ride. They reached home at the early hours of morning.

No one talked about what happened in the bunglow. They decided not to bring the horrid topic since Rehan thought it would bother Sanam.
Rehan was the one to insist it since he believed it would bring back the horrible memories. Aahil didnt say a word. He just shot up his eyes and stared at Rehan for more than a minute with an unfathomable expression. "So thoughtful of you Rehan! " he said at last with a meaningful look. "You have changed." he added further before leaving the room. Rehan gave a slight smile. He didnt note the anger in his tone. He instead was innocent enough to reply back kindly "People change Aahil bhay. " after this Aahil didnt feel like standing there another moment. He wasn't in a state to listen one more word about Sanam from his mouth. It ignites flame inside him.

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It was a morning that could light up anyone's mood instantly.
Rain was lashing against the window frame in small spells. The sky wore a dark hue with thunder flashing now and then.
Certainly nt a morning people would wish for especially not when an engagement is waiting to be celebrated the following day.
Therefore nobody was much pleased. Although the feel of the first downpour drew an atmosphere of joy among the young ones. Rehan, Sanam and Aasma were talking. Their faces happy and smiling. Latif too was standing beside them listening to their conversation when there comes a sound of footsteps.

All eyes turn to the door as the tall towering figure enters the lavish drawing room. Its Aahil.

With his bottomless eyes he looks at one particular face intensely. His dishevelled hair and perplexed demeanour doesnt miss their eyes. Sanam realises something is wrong. She notices the eagerness in his face and shifts her own gaze. Somehow she feels uncomfortable under his probing gaze. Rehan is the first to break the silence.
"Aahil bhay are you ok ? You're nt looking too good . Do you want me to manage the office today on your behalf?" he asks politely.
Aahil finally move his eyes from Sanam and disagrees. "no. I'm fine. You guys enjoy at home." the last word he says a bit annoyedly. His gaze back on Sanam.
Sanam shots up her large luminous eyes and stares at him. Then she looks down again. She is both confused and bewildered unable to understand what is the meaning of that last word ? "And his tone ? Was it anger or she had just imagined it ?"

Suddenly she remembers something and tries to talk to Rehan. But he seems too busy talking to Aahil about the party arrangements. Latif nudges her mildly "whats the matter ? You arent trying to dodge the kitchen i hope!" Latif widens his eyes and asks Sanam in his usual nasal tone.
Sanam shakes her head. "don't worry Latif i don't leave my tasks unfinished. " her voice sounds surpsingly tired and sad. Latif notices it and feels bad for her, thinks its due to the overload of work.
And doesnot budge her further.

On the other side of the room Aasma appears to be standing right beside the glass window watching the rain fall. She smiled to herself and walked beside Sanam. "Its lovely outside. Have you seen it Sanam ? I love the muddy smell ! Its heavenly!"
Sanam smiles back at her. Aasma is always softspoken and kind. She seldom speaks much. Sanam likes her. Among all the girls she finds her most pleasing.
"Ya..i did ! In monsoon back home we used to have a lot of fun! We often got wet and received a good scolding from badi ammi !" she laughed her first genuine laugh of the day reminiscing the old days. Aasma noticed the sadness behind her smile and said "Would you like to join me for a rain walk Sanam? Its such a beautiful day! Would be a waste if we spend it sitting at home." Sanam's face lit up instantaneously. "But how would she ask for leave? That too from Aahil ? Who better than her knows how sour is his mood these days!"

"no Aasma i'm sorry! But i don't think i can go. So many works are left." Aasma's lovely face saddened but she smiled. "Its alright Sanam. We will make it some other day." her tone was understanding. Sanam felt bad. She wished she could make it not to dissapoint her but she had little say in anything. Her wishes doesnt count. Not to Aahil Raza Ibrahim. Sanam heard Rehan's voice and something hit her mind. She immediately excused herself and strided at his side. "Rehan can you come with me for a moment ? I have something important to say." Aahil watches them with astonishment. His face stern and hard. He stares at Rehan's arm where Sanam is holding his hand. Anger flares through him. His jaw tightens and eyes turn cold. Clenching his fists Aahil starts to walk away but a voice stops him.

"Aahil... "
Aahil turns around to that unmistakably familiar tone.
He runs and holds his Ammi's hand. He makes her sit on the couch. "Whats the matter Ammi ?" his tone sounds soft and caring.

Tanveer looks tense. She voices her dissapointment. "beta its such a bad weather today! And i had ordered for the designer sarees. They were expected to deliver it today.but how do i go now? " she stops. Aahil understands her annoyance. She is allergic to rain. He says calmly "dn't worry Ammi. Just give me the list. I'll pick it." "No Aahil beta you wn't be able to understand. Its not about just picking, its about the designs-the colours! I would have asked you to take Nida with you but even she is out to visit her friends." Tanveer appears unhappy and Aahil can bear anything but not that depressing look in his Ammi's eyes. But he fails to find any solution. "Sanam knows the colour and designs. Do one thing-take her with you." startled Aahil looks at his Ammi.
His eyes shift uncomfortably from Sanam back to his ammi. "but Ammi.."
"Aahil its your engagement beta! And nt much time is left !" Sanam watches as Aahil nods his head with a final "Ok. Fine! As you say." his face refuses to give away anything. Sanam feels uneasy. She wants not to go with him but she cant even deny 'Begum Sahiba's' orders. "And Rehan i want to talk to you about the floorist. Come to my room." she says with the unflinching authority in her voice and gets up. Rehan masks his unhappiness and nods."ok begum sahiba." but before following her he gives a sad glance toward Sanam.

The gathering breaks as tanveer and Rehan leaves the room. And so does Aasma as she gets an emergency call from the hospital.

Latif unwillingly hurries to the kitchen.

Aahil opens the door and walks out without a word. He doesnt even look at her. Sanam swallows the hurt that forms a lump in her throat. Staring for a second from where Aahil had left she mutely follows him...

--to be continued---

Guys Please leave you views and let me know how it is. Whether you like it or hate it please dnt hesitate to tell me. I am open to criticizm.😊

thanks for reading.🤗
love you all 🤗

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Posted: 11 years ago

#48

Lovely update
lol aahil annoyed rehaan talks so much even me also
Sanam slowly unease with aahil gaze I think she start to realising
Update soon
Thanks dear for the pm

Edited by --Sana-- - 11 years ago

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lavanya

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Posted: 11 years ago

#49

Oh my god Diti😉 u r killing me🤢 with ur imagination & ur beautiful words..while reading this i can easily picturize it in my mind👏 tats the beauty of ur posts❤️ waiting for nxt part😊

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Pragya

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Posted: 11 years ago

#50

Diti!! Hugs! 🤗

Thank you so much for the PM :D

I just checked this evening for the update but in vain 😆 Then read the comments that you'll be updating today and there! 😆

Okay so the update. Awesome awesome and AWESOME!! Yeah sometimes I think these words just don't justify how you describe the feelings <3 Its unexplainable. You can only feel that what you're reading. Thats why I just can't bring myself to review when I come to write it. ITS JUST SO GOOD <3

I love everything about the update. There wasn't a single part which was like boring or don't wanna read. The scene description, atmosphere, surroundings everything was so realistic.

Loved this intense ARI, getting all burnt up by seeing Rehan-Sanam together. Its gives such a sadistic pleasure 😆

Sanam constant confusion about the hidden emotions behind his intense stares still continues sigh! 😆

Sanam-Aahil <3 These two don't even need words, Their glances, silence, gazes speak volumes. <3 Oh the intensity they evoke just by looking at each other..HEAVEN! <33

So they are off to choose the dresses! Hmm exciting! 😆

Another amazing update man. Just can't say it enough. You are truly a gifted and talented writer. PLEASE DON'T EVER STOP WRITING..EVER! <3

Can't wait for the next part. Update soon and do PM me! :)

Love! <3