Saahil fic--'So many words...'Chap 7 UPDATED Page32-21 DECEM - Page 4

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Posted: 11 years ago
#31

Originally posted by: amlavs

<font face="Geneva, Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif" size="5">Amazing Diti👏</font>

<font face="Geneva, Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif" size="5">U have described Aahil s emotions so beautifully😊</font>
<font face="Geneva, Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif" size="5">Waiting for next parts👍🏼</font>

thank you Lavnya😳 am glad you like it. I'll try updating asap.
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#32

Originally posted by: risingsea101

Awesome

It is very interesting
Do continue soon :))

thank you dear! I will.😊
and thanks a lot for reading.😊
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Originally posted by: Nithiya95

Wow tatz awsm
Continue soon

Thank you.😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
#34
Awesome OS!! Beautifully written!!!
I felt so bad for Aahil in this scene.. Poor baby!!! Looking forward to what you do to the story!!! So sure its gonna be amazing!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
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you portrayed aahils helplessness very well...super piece dear...waiting for others part...my like button is not working..
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Posted: 11 years ago
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This was great, All the thoughts going through Aahil's mind. I almost had tears when I got to this.
But logics failed. His eyes burned with tears.
His heart was on fire. And Aahil felt like inflaming every single thing only if he could.

I saw Aahil's face, the hurt face as he watched them and when Sanam saw him.

Poor baby!
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Posted: 11 years ago
#37

Originally posted by: Prags_Sociopath

Diti! 🤗 Sorry for not leaving my comments on our one or two posts :(

I just keep forgetting man, I am so sorry. Thank you so much for the PM :D
Its alright. You made it thats what matters.😊
An OS from you finally! I was wondering why don't you start writing them? Your so soo good at writing. Such an awesomely talented writer. And there you are! Thank you so much for writing this.
Thank you! I am flatterd.😳 although i doubt its that good!Bt still thank u for your kind words.😳
This is just so wonderfully written piece! So totally loved reading it. Well I love all your writings to be honest. Those are so heartfelt and so deeply connected with the feelings.

Such a beautiful explanation of his feelings he was going through. I just loved it so much! The lines:

Sanam is not the first girl in his life. Its true. But she is the only girl whom he had ever truly loved irrespective of what she is or who she is.
He loves her. And no matter what direction his life takes from here he will always love her.
Sanam is his first love and she always will be his last as well. Aahil doesnt have to think to be certain. He knows. ❤️
Thank you.😳
I loved these like hell! :')

Poor him! He has an ocean of emotions inside of him, and not even a drop he could give. He is not able to express them how to. Such a difficult phase it is for him. It tears him at the insides. The burning intensity is burning him and he just can't do anything about it. This sounds so much heart rendering it breaks my heart :'(

<font size="2">And the title is one of my favorites too! This song goes so perfectly for him. "Tell me why..I can't be there..where you are." :'( 💔 Such a small line and has such deep meaning to it.</font>
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<font size="2">I loved this so much! Please please continue ASAP. Can't wait how this works out.</font>

You have explained all of it beautifully!👍🏼 glad to know i was able to express his feelings well.😳ya i will update this tonight. :) and thanks again for such a long lovely comment pragu!thanks so much!🤗
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Posted: 11 years ago
#38

Originally posted by: krithikas

<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="2" color="#ff0033">WOW Fantastic .. 👏 I always love and admire your posts ..And this is truly Awesome..👏👏👏</font>

Thank you dear.am glad to know you are liking it.😳
<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="2" color="#ff0033">I could visualize Aahil's emotions through your beautiful writing.. I felt like crying reading Aahil's feelings..😭</font>
Aahil is going through an extreme phase and to ease it he couldnt have the love he needs.
<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="2" color="#ff0033">Cant wait for the next part ,please continue soon..👏👏👏</font>

Thank you so much for reading dear. 🤗 Ya I will update tonight.😊
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#39

Originally posted by: chicksoup

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U have described that one shot of the triangle so well...👏

thank you dear.😳

Now as he watches Sanam from afar he feels certain that dreams have nothing to do with him. They were like puffs of cloud that his hands can never reach.


💔 😭

Is it going to get better for Aahil?
Waiting for next part...

mm...lets see what fate has in store for him!
I shall update tonight!😊
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Originally posted by: TasriS

Very nice...loved it.

thanks dear.😊

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