Saahil fic--'So many words...'Chap 7 UPDATED Page32-21 DECEM

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lavanya

@amlavs

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Posted: 11 years ago

#11

Amazing Diti👏

U have described Aahil s emotions so beautifully😊

Waiting for next parts👍🏼

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Farhana

@risingsea101

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Posted: 11 years ago

#12

Awesome

It is very interesting

Do continue soon :))

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Pragya

@Ms.Sherlocked

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Posted: 11 years ago

#13

Diti! 🤗 Sorry for not leaving my comments on our one or two posts :(

I just keep forgetting man, I am so sorry. Thank you so much for the PM :D

An OS from you finally! I was wondering why don't you start writing them? Your so soo good at writing. Such an awesomely talented writer. And there you are! Thank you so much for writing this.

This is just so wonderfully written piece! So totally loved reading it. Well I love all your writings to be honest. Those are so heartfelt and so deeply connected with the feelings.

Such a beautiful explanation of his feelings he was going through. I just loved it so much! The lines:

Sanam is not the first girl in his life. Its true. But she is the only girl whom he had ever truly loved irrespective of what she is or who she is.
He loves her. And no matter what direction his life takes from here he will always love her.
Sanam is his first love and she always will be his last as well. Aahil doesnt have to think to be certain. He knows. ❤️

I loved these like hell! :')

Poor him! He has an ocean of emotions inside of him, and not even a drop he could give. He is not able to express them how to. Such a difficult phase it is for him. It tears him at the insides. The burning intensity is burning him and he just can't do anything about it. This sounds so much heart rendering it breaks my heart :'(

And the title is one of my favorites too! This song goes so perfectly for him. "Tell me why..I can't be there..where you are." :'( 💔 Such a small line and has such deep meaning to it.

I loved this so much! Please please continue ASAP. Can't wait how this works out.

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krithika

@Wonderfullife

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Posted: 11 years ago

#14

WOW Fantastic .. 👏 I always love and admire your posts ..And this is truly Awesome..👏👏👏

I could visualize Aahil's emotions through your beautiful writing.. I felt like crying reading Aahil's feelings..😭

Cant wait for the next part ,please continue soon..👏👏👏

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chicksoup

@chicksoup

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Posted: 11 years ago

#15

👏

U have described that one shot of the triangle so well...👏

Now as he watches Sanam from afar he feels certain that dreams have nothing to do with him. They were like puffs of cloud that his hands can never reach.

💔 😭

Is it going to get better for Aahil?

Waiting for next part...