Saahil fic--'So many words...'Chap 7 UPDATED Page32-21 DECEM

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Posted: 11 years ago

#131

Originally posted by: sylvia99
This is so nice, lost in eyes.
Next??

Next is something intense..maybe?😉

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Posted: 11 years ago

#132

Diti! <3 Omg! It seems like I almost forgot this story 😕 I mean, you have updated after so much time!! :( 😆 Anyways, on to the story now.

I just wanna hug you right now for writing so breathtakingly beautiful <3 You write like so so well! All the emotions like just flow when you write and it reaches to the reader when they read, like the flow is directed towards a given direction, which NEVER, NEVER EVER loses its way in the middle :D

You pour out magic with your hands, I just LOVE LOVE how you portray everything in such a vivid manner, that it engrosses you so much, that you forget your laptop's battery is dying and it needs to be plugged in till it goes blank 😆😆

So, yeah I have told how much I loved this update. I wanna hug Aahil too coz what he did was just like OH MYY GOD! I mean. He doesn't even says anything, talks SO MUCH LESS, like never I guess. Doesn't even looks at her properly, well though I know the reason why he doesn't, coz he would just get lost in those big brown enchanting eyes of her, but still you get it right? Right.

And. How gorgeous he would be looking so silent standing by the window with a glass of wine in his hand. Alone he is, yes. Sanam too notices it.

And then he just stops her orders her to sit back, holds her ankle and dresses the wound!! Who wouldn't get shocked by seeing this changed behaviour all of a sudden. And on top of that he instructs Lateef before to dress her wound and ake care of her!! Oh god this is like the most touching thing he has done. He doesn't want to get noticed of these things but want to remain in hiding instead. Sigh! Poor troubled soul :'(

And I just love how he is being shown here. So mysterious and quite and all. I love the dynamics of him here, maybe we get to see some of these things in the show, I mean hope they keep the intensity in him intact.

Loved this Diti! You are amazing! Can't wait for next part now! Love! <3