Saahil fic--'So many words...'Chap 7 UPDATED Page32-21 DECEM

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Indu

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Posted: 11 years ago

#151

Originally posted by: lourel24
Read all chapters in one go.loved it totally.

aww..thank you so much dear🤗 glad to hear you like it this much.😳 Hope the future updates too meet your expectation!

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Indu

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Posted: 11 years ago

#152

Originally posted by: halima_zaka
excellent

thanks.😊

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Indu

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Posted: 11 years ago

#153

Originally posted by: ssafdar
How did I miss your story????????
I have just read all your chapters in one go a d I love it!!!!!
The loaded silence between Sahil is so compelling.
Aahils words don't match his actions which confuses the hell out of Sanam.

What is on Nida phone??? Is it a sex tape which she is being blackmailed with? I'm afraid my mind tends to go to the gutter automatically.

Waiting for the next part with bated breath

Thank you dear. Means so much. 🤗

I am glad you asked that. No that's nt what it is. But whatever it is I can say this much that it's definitely of great significance and has a lot to do with the upcoming twist.😳
I will update today. :)

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Indu

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Posted: 11 years ago

#154

Originally posted by: Prags_Sociopath
Diti! <3 Omg! It seems like I almost forgot this story 😕 I mean, you have updated after so much time!! :( 😆 Anyways, on to the story now. Ya i know. So sorry. :( i shall try to update more regularly from now on.

I just wanna hug you right now for writing so breathtakingly beautiful <3 You write like so so well! All the emotions like just flow when you write and it reaches to the reader when they read, like the flow is directed towards a given direction, which NEVER, NEVER EVER loses its way in the middle :D

You pour out magic with your hands, I just LOVE LOVE how you portray everything in such a vivid manner, that it engrosses you so much, that you forget your laptop's battery is dying and it needs to be plugged in till it goes blank 😆😆oh dear! :O do i write that way?😆honestly i feel overwhelmed praggu!thanks so much for ur Kind words.🤗

So, yeah I have told how much I loved this update. I wanna hug Aahil too coz what he did was just like OH MYY GOD! I mean. He doesn't even says anything, talks SO MUCH LESS, like never I guess. Doesn't even looks at her properly, well though I know the reason why he doesn't, coz he would just get lost in those big brown enchanting eyes of her, but still you get it right? Right.

And. How gorgeous he would be looking so silent standing by the window with a glass of wine in his hand. Alone he is, yes. Sanam too notices it.

And then he just stops her orders her to sit back, holds her ankle and dresses the wound!! Who wouldn't get shocked by seeing this changed behaviour all of a sudden. And on top of that he instructs Lateef before to dress her wound and ake care of her!! Oh god this is like the most touching thing he has done. He doesn't want to get noticed of these things but want to remain in hiding instead. Sigh! Poor troubled soul :'(

And I just love how he is being shown here. So mysterious and quite and all. I love the dynamics of him here, maybe we get to see some of these things in the show, I mean hope they keep the intensity in him intact.

Loved this Diti! You are amazing! Can't wait for next part now! Love! <3
thank you. Glad to know you appreciate it. :) yes Aahil is a mess here. A man who has a heart of gold and is battling a war of his own.

I am going to update in few hours.and i hope i dn't disappoint you.

Once more thanks so much for this lovely comment darling.love you too.🤗

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Indu

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Posted: 11 years ago

#155

Originally posted by: sahil333
Dearest Divs,

TQ for your pm. So sorry for the late read and reply. 



First of all, you know what, you're an Excellent and a Stupendous writer. And this is for you my dear 👏👏 👏 . Along with a Kiss and a 🤗 . I've just read all the parts in one go. And do you know what I did? I've copied/pasted the entire story on my laptop. Yes I did ! 😳 

I have to read it again in a relax way, coz I went so crazy fast over the chapters. I am tired, but I had to read it all, coz you took the time to pm me. And I'm so glad you did 😛 . I'm so happy with SaHil. 

I have to say this. Thank you, thank you for writing it entirely in English. I'm a non-Indian and don't understand Hindi, so thank you for the beautiful story. 

It's unfortunate that I have to skip stories that I can't understand. Sometimes I do read OS's, coz it more convenient for me. I just have to picture the scene 😊.

Anyway, I can't wait for the follow up. Pleeease, don't let us wait too long 😉. I know, I know, you're a very busy girl, but you're keeping us in tension! 😆

Way to go Divs, Love you ❤️

Ri 🤗 thank you for such a warm compliment.🤗 I am humbled.😳

so happy to hear you could enjoy the story. :)

oh. . . :( then it must be a great trouble for you to make out the meaning of the dialogues. I will try using only english in my posts.

And while writing stories i always use only English as i am more comfortable in it. :)

I wnt make you wait too long. Update is on its way! 😉

And thanks once again for reading. Means a lot to me.🤗

Edited by Paint.It.BlacK. - 11 years ago

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Indu

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Posted: 11 years ago

#156

Wish you all a very happy Durga puja and Navaratri. . .🤗

Chap-5

When he realised the noise had rose from downstairs --and too close from Rehan's room, Aahil became worried because no matter what he said-no matter how rudely he behaved he still cared for him like his own brother. And at the moment he panicked thinking whether there was some attack from his rival side as they had threatened him time and again and were well aware what Rehan meant to him. "what if they make Rehan their target just to take revenge on him?" small beads of sweat formed over his forehead as Aahil glided down the stairs. He was too panicky even to call someone.
He landed on the last step of stairs and rushed to the wide corridor when he suddenly had to stop in his tracks. He was completely transfixed to move at all. He didn't expect what he saw. It was the last thing he expected to see that too as late as this hour of night. Anger rilled in him like hot coal burning to engulf in its flame.

What was that he saw ?

There was Sanam, Sanam and Rehan---alone, at what was nearly well past midnight- with their hands clasping together.

"Rehan--what happened to you? " Sanam said in a stained voice. "how did you hurt your hand?"
Rehan stared at her unaswerably keeping his gaze steady on her face. Jolt of emotion threatened to pill out but he controlled them with all his willpower. In stead he tried to shift his mind to think what reply should he give her that would not raise suspicion.
"Let's go and sit first--this needs first aid, later we can talk . . ." Sanam pulled his other arm while her eyes echoed concern. Rehan didn't answer but he did not argue with her either. He let her lead him.

Aahil did not stir for a while as he saw them stand there in the darkened corridor. Their closeness flared a burning feel inside him and Aahil suddenly lost the urge to look for what had happened or to search for the source of the sound. An ugly dark taste cropped up in his throat. A taste he was well aware of.

A taste of rage and betrayal.

And he knew what it could do. It was never good when that feeling rose. It had always destroyed everything around. He didnot wait and turned to climb back the stairs as fast as he could.

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Scene change

Sanam returned to her bed wondering about Rehan. She did never like to interfere in anyone's personal matter...but she could not stay back when she felt it was life threatening. Her upbringing did not allow that. And Rehan was more like a friend so she didn't hesitate asking him. But Rehan didn't seem at all willing to tell what had happened that led to the wound. He rather opted to turn the subject and that was what bothering her.

Sanam could also see the lights still on in Aahil's room while she was heading back and that was another reason of her unease. She had no idea why but somehow Aahil's moodswings always seemed to affect her as well. But she could not probe in either of their matters because afteral she was just a cook. And she had no business in bothering her nose in their affairs. Besides she was not the type. Sanam thought it best to close her eyes and try to sleep, it was past 3 a.m. already and she had to get up early for the arrangements. Begam Sahiba wants the engagement to be as grand and neat as possible.

"I better sleep." she mumbled warily and tossed aside.

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"What would happen if he says no to the engagement? Would it matter if he defies to follow what is expected of him? " Aahil considered how it might turn things if he did. Only he would not. He would not because he has given his consent and he stands by what he says, he doesn't change even if that one decision tends to lend him a life of scar.

For a brief moment Sanam and her elegant figure danced in front his eyes. Aahil clenched his hands, before ruefully shoving the image away and pressed his head onto the pillow.

A fairy tale life was not meant for him and no one knew that better than him.

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This wedding should be over before his birthday and the entire property won't be long after that. She can already smell the money that would land in her lap. Tanveer leaned back on her rocking chair and closed her empty eyes satisfactorily. It was a long time ago she had felt happiness so raw and pleasing. It was that feel of power and triump that comes before every big achievement and this time just like the past, she was sure of winning it.

A wide grin flashed around her beautifully carved lips. The ugly reality behind that smile was known to few and Tanveer knew all of them were dead now.

"Aahil you've to go my dear- - - Rehan --my son--will be the Nawab! I can't wait for the day! I've waited for an eternity for this!" a mad triump glinted her cat eyes and Tanveer laughed like a small girl who was going to get the biggest gift of her life, but not long before that insane fire was back in her eyes again. "Rehan--it's not long before you have everything that is rightfully yours--!"

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Scene change-

Outside the house a dark figure hurried past through the lawn. Wearing boots the shadow didn't try to run as it wanted to avoid any kind of sound.

This was just the beginning, the real game would be much more exciting to play!
That was the last thought before the shadow left the boundary and vanished into the darkness. . . .

to be continued----

precap: preparation for the engagement is in full swing---the day ends with an event that nobody had expected. Sanam in an edge where she is left to decide what choice she would make... on the other hand everyone is just a mere pawn in tanveer's game. Will Aahil get what he wants or will he do what he has to do? The next chapter will tell.

I hope you enjoyed it. :) I know it's a small one and had no Saahil but i promise the next update will be bigger and will have a lot of Saahil moments. . .and to add-it will be intense! 😳
and I wnt keep you guys waiting for too long. Hence I'll update on the next weekend! :)

please drop in your comments and share with me what you think and what you are expecting. I'll be eagerly waiting for your views. :)

take care sweethearts. Have a lovely time!🤗

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ssafdar

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Posted: 11 years ago

#157

The tension is at breaking point!!!! Sahil both still don't understand their attraction to each other and keep having silent conversations that are misunderstood... Who is the mysterious stalker creeping around the grounds??? How did Rehaan get hurt??? Who is blackmailing Nida???

Cannot wait for some answers to be revealed.

Thank you for the heads up