AsYa OS - Say Something! - Page 5

Originally posted by: BeYourself

I just forgot to tell you something!!

i am listening to this song on repeat now!!! 😉😊

Originally posted by: DevikaRavish

Juliet.. now .. what did come over you ?? Why all you wonderful writers are lacking confidence and mentioning that it was not good ??

It was AWSOME.. Very realistic..😊

Love indeed does not have any barriers... It was so touching to know Asad waited for 10 long years and he slept daily with torch.. and he did indeed make good money for himself in life waiting for her .. 😊

She did try to move on .. but she was not able to.. and that is LOVE..

I know .. I know you will not be very happy me asking this.. but can't stop myself from asking.. when will we get the next update of Butterflies ?? 😊

Take care Juliet.. All the best for your exams and yes keep writing and let us enjoy your works.. 😊

Originally posted by: Rarepearl

Hey Juliet,

This was absolutely marvelous. I've not heard the song yet but your take on it tells me it must be one hell of a song. You might not have liked this but This story touched my heart. I really cried going through this. The wait & longing Asad had to go through for her was really painful but then he still did. Time also taught Zoya what that something was which was missing from her life constantly & to yearn for his love too.

It was beautiful.

Love..

Thank you everyone for reading and dropping in your precious comments.

Originally posted by: Perfectionist2

I still think it was not that good it was ok but everyone liked it so much so may be it is not too bad.

I also know I have the most generous bunch of readers. I love all my readers. They never miss to encourage me.

Ok Will you believe me Devika if I said I choose to listen to this song because I was writing the hospital scene. But somehow, I diverted and ended up writing this OS instead.

I am stuck at one spot with Butterflies, It doesn't connect if you know what I mean. I am frustrated because I am trying to get that soothe the soul moment. But right now, it is just not happening... What I wrote is just BLAH AND MEH!

I am rewriting it. If I don't hit that spot in the next few days I will just post what I have.