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Applef

@Applef

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#31

awesome story..

she found him..

loved that zoya observes him every night..

and the torchlight..

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madhvi4gurti

@madhvi4gurti

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#32

who says its horrible?! OMG it was damn beautiful!!!! mindblowing!👏

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Nim

@Rarepearl

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#33

Hey Juliet,

This was absolutely marvelous. I've not heard the song yet but your take on it tells me it must be one hell of a song. You might not have liked this but This story touched my heart. I really cried going through this. The wait & longing Asad had to go through for her was really painful but then he still did. Time also taught Zoya what that something was which was missing from her life constantly & to yearn for his love too.

It was beautiful.

Love..

Edited by Rarepearl - 11 years ago

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Sadia Sharmeen Swapno

@swapno

Sparkler

+ 6

Posted: 11 years ago

#34

It is a sweet and wonderful OS...

loved it...😳

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amruta04

@amruta04

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#35

Wonderful OS Juliet...

Its just beautiful

Very well written

Keep up the good work 😊

Do write more

Thanks for the pm...

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DevikaRavish

@DevikaRavish

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#36

Juliet.. now .. what did come over you ?? Why all you wonderful writers are lacking confidence and mentioning that it was not good ??

It was AWSOME.. Very realistic..😊

Love indeed does not have any barriers... It was so touching to know Asad waited for 10 long years and he slept daily with torch.. and he did indeed make good money for himself in life waiting for her .. 😊

She did try to move on .. but she was not able to.. and that is LOVE..

I know .. I know you will not be very happy me asking this.. but can't stop myself from asking.. when will we get the next update of Butterflies ?? 😊

Take care Juliet.. All the best for your exams and yes keep writing and let us enjoy your works.. 😊