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Gourav

@Shubh007

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#11

So Emotional and Heart Touching Os...👍🏼

Just Love It...😊

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Muskaan

@sweet4shehzadi

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Posted: 11 years ago

#12

Lovely & Emotional os dear
Heart touching
Beautifully written
Its amazing
Thanks for pm

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Miss-Appy

@Miss-Appy

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#13

Awww u almost made me cry... 😭
It was so beautiful !!! I was in trance while reading this ! Seriously ! ❤️
Beautiful story just like u ! 🤗 ❤️

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ChocoBerry

@ChocoBerry

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#14

WHAT THE HELL JULIET!!!!

WHO ON EARTH SAID IT WAS BAD. MEIN USKO EK THAPPAR MAROONGI. Tumko nahi, jisne tumko kaha this is bad usko 😉

Buddy this was so beautiful. Sigh and am so in love with it. am going back to read it again.

He stopped time for her... yaar you stopped time for me too. It felt as if everything was on a stand still while i read this OS, i even stopped breathing from where she was at the publishers.

Loved it 🤗

Edited by LoveOnlyAsYa - 11 years ago

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Amulya

@Amulya9

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#15

OMG.. thisz is soo soo beautiful...
n Juliet ur saying thisz is terrible.. how could u 😡
10years asad waited fr her..true love
I ended up crying while reading this.
I read it 3 times 😛 ..loved it a lot

Edited by Amulya9 - 11 years ago

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Mrinalini

@minakrish

Viewbie

+ 45

Posted: 11 years ago

#16

Comments updated on Pg 1 😃

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Prashni Singh

@-SilverSparkle-

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#17

"...I see him still sitting on the patio this time with a torch light hovering over his books." 🥺

A reality that tortures and compels me to question my soul, making me wish I had the ability to terminate poverty and rid the anguish it induces. 🤢

"I wasn't going away forever you know. " He said holding me back. "I know how much you admired that torch light!"

Picturesque! ❤️

"My something stood stranded but I wondered if his something did surface."

"Zoya!" She called " He still sleeps holding the torch light in his hand."

You have tugged heartstrings here. 😭 That reduced me to tears, very rear occurrence in context. 🥺

"He rose to his prime while I hit my base."

Life surely moves in a full circle.

""Say something." He initiates.

I hold his hand in mine and inch closer. Resting my chin on his shoulder my eyes reaches his...

"I LOVE YOU!"

He had stopped time for me...

"I Love you too..""

Enchanting, "Love" a profoundly spectacular emotion.

Thanks for the PM!

Edited by p_s05 - 11 years ago

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fifi1297

@fifi1297

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#18

Wow...fabulous

it was beautifully written...

Loved it..😊

"He still sleeps holding his torch light in his hand"..Loved dis line..

Wonderful!!!..

Superb...

Thnx for pm

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@ChamakChallo91

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#19

Beautiful os!

Love the way you wrote it !

Thanks for the pm :)

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Heena

@aarzoo50

Inactive

Posted: 11 years ago

#20

it was simply beautiful...
loved it...

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