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@Perfectionist2

Dazzler

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Posted: 11 years ago

say something.😛

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marcoe

@marcoe

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Posted: 11 years ago

Omfg

I looveddd it!!!!

So beautiful

I had tears By the time it ended

Well it's so realistic

Ppl do let their love go away fir the love of their parents

Only realising later if they had tried a little harder

Asad waited for her for 10 years !!!

Poor him

So here's something I just said

Keep up the good work

Love ,

Marcoe

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Mrinalini

@minakrish

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Posted: 11 years ago

Fantastic OS Julz. Really beautiful!

The relationship you have portrayed is so pure... I wish I could have a guy like this Asad who would wait for me till the end of time! ❤️

Loved it! ❤️

Mrina <3

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jasminerose

@jasminerose

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Posted: 11 years ago

This was extremely beautiful!!

I don't know what Love is but if it is what you wrote, I think its the purest emotion, most giving in nature. I was overwhelmed. Beautiful story.

A very different piece coming from your side and I loved it. Sometimes a short writing gives away lot of emotions that touches heart in different ways. This was one of them.

There was this simplicity in this which was highly captivating. The torch light part was highly endearing.

I again say it was BEAUTIFUL.

Keep writing Juliet!!

I love it when your index has an entry. 😃

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Aashka

@Chillichick

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Posted: 11 years ago

Juliet this was amazing!!

You have written it so so so beautifully!!

I had tears when she had left him but was ecstatic when she met his sister...!!

But this line He still sleeps holding the torch light in his hand." truly touched my heart!

I am running short of words to tell you how amazingly innocent the story was yet you managed to capture the beauty of the story! And also tug a few strings of our hearts!

Aashka

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-StarsLinedUp-

@-StarsLinedUp-

Dazzler

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Posted: 11 years ago

I think self doubt creates beautiful material...Cos this indeed seems to be the by product of lacking confidence.

Gal SHUT UP...stop doubting...stop loathing your work...

This was in one word

BEAUTIFUL!!!!! No questions asked...

It was mesmerising and had such a wonderful flow to it..i knw it came from the heart cos it had so much heart...Everything was just perfect..and apt...the flow was right..the length was right..and how it all fell into place was JUST RIGHT!!!

Love it love it...Love it a lot!!!!

Criticisim...I wish I had but I dont..it was purely...BEAUTIFUL...and PERFECT!!!!

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Maha

@maha2012

Stunner

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Posted: 11 years ago

Juliet this was BEAUTIFUL😭👏

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SimplySmile

@SimplySmile

Voyager

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Posted: 11 years ago

That was so beautiful,

Asad was such a sweetheart in this story and it made me all fanrgirly

Loved it so much👏,

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scarletmalik

@scarletmalik

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Posted: 11 years ago

it was so beautiful👏

loved it❤️

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farz_parachute

@farz_parachute

Rocker

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Posted: 11 years ago

#10

Juliet thank you. Thank you for sharing this. I don't know how to tell you..but this kinda hit home.

I'm graciously humbled. Truly touched certain unknown chords of my heart. Unknown for I never knew they existed. Or maybe I did. And it's finally brought to use? It finally triggered? I mean I must though, right. Because it is too familiar a story, too familiar.

Thank you.

:')