#8 - AsYa/KaBhi FF : AsYa's Love Story... COMPLETED !!! (Go #9) - Page 96

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Posted: 11 years ago

The tickle and "Student" reference scene was absolutely cute.


"...he kept her down and kissed her softly, pouring his happiness, before whispering an 'I love you, Jaan' and hugging her tightly, then bent down on his knees and pulled Zoya's kurti up, he caressed her belly, and planted a kiss there and murmured another 'I also love you little one and i'm waiting for you to come', making Zoya smile tearily, he put his arms around her waist and rested his head against her belly, kissing it again and again while Zoya ran her hands through his hair,..."


Breathtaking!


"Baby, can i talk to you ?"


This man is perfect. *sigh*


"...he put his free arm around her waist and pulled her closer before resting his ear against her belly and gestured Najma to do the same which she did, Zoya smiled looking at them before Asad spoke.

"Bade Baby, tumne sunna chota Baby kya keh raha hai ?" Asad winked mischievously at Najma to which she almost giggled, and Zoya looked at him confused, "Chota Baby keh raha hai ke for once, rotlu Ammi is not crying !" Asad and Najma burst into fits of laughter and Zoya gasped outraged."


""Aap na... Aap na, aap bohot boore hain !" Zoya pointed her finger at him before crossing her arms and turning away to go to their room, but Asad had got up and had grabbed her wrist, yanking her to his chest with an arm around Najma and the other around her.

"I love you, my girls !! And you too little one !" Asad kissed Najma's, then Zoya's head and then caressed gently her belly.

"Love you too, Bhaijaan/Asad !" Najma and Zoya spoke simultaneously before hugging him tightly making him smile, he was so happy, today he felt once again being the luckiest man on Earth with his loved ones."


Endearing scene!


Pregnant Zoe and helpless Asad - Lovely!


""Thank you for this beautiful gift... Ab batao, kya naam rakhe hum apne shehzade ka ?" Asad asked lovingly and before he could reply, Dilshad and Najma barged in, but this time Asad didn't tried to move away, he felt good sitting with hiw wife and son.

The little baby was taken by Dilshad who was in awe with the beauty of the baby, soon the baby was in Najma's arms after a lot of whining, she smiled at the little one and kissed his forehead, she took his hand and he grabbed her index finger in his tiny fist.

Zoya and Asad looked at the scene in awe, she rested her head against his shoulder, "Tamatar, kya tum chote Baby ka naam rakhogi ?", she asked lovingly at a surprised Najma.

"Haan ! Main bhi chahta hoon ke mera Bada Baby hi mere Chote Baby ka naam rakhe..." Asad smiled at her and Dilshad couldn't be prouder of her children.

Najma looked at the little baby in her arms, "Rizwan...", she whispered the name and he stirred as if liking it, she looked up smiling at others then said out loud, "Rizwan Ahmed Khan !"

Zoya asked Najma to bring the baby to her, once in her arms, she looked up at Asad with a smile, "Humara beta Rizwan...""


Picturesque family


"After Najma took Rizwan in her arms, Zoya took Asma's hand and showed her, her room which was right accross theirs, it was a pink room with a lot of toys everywhere which Zoya and Asad had prepared for her.

While Dilshad showed Asma around the house, Asad and Zoya went in the room attached to theirs which was in a light-green painted, and with a beautiful wooden cradle in the middle of the room, a rocking chair on the side of it and little toys everywhere, the room had a peaceful ora and the fact that there was sun coming from the window brought a sense of perfectness.

Asad sat on the rocking chair with Zoya in his lap and he held Rizwan with the other arm, they shared a moment of silence and contentment before Dilshad, Najma and Asma barged in, Asma ran towards her parents and Asad gave Rizwan to Zoya before making Asma sit in his lap, Najma put her arms around Asad's neck from behing, hugging him and he smiled while Dilshad looked at her family with tears in her eyes, then caressed Zoya's hair, before taking Rizwan from her and Zoya rested her back against Asad's chest and whispered, 'Humari duniya..', and Asad completed, 'Humara Muqaddar !', before knocking his head with hers lovingly."


That was just exquisite. I adored that.


Here goes, not wanting to quote half the chapter. 😳

Another fairy-tale ends...😒

Epilogue, do come soon. ☺️

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Niya_789


I wont say u thanks😆
N giv u another reason to yell at me😛


good girl
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Posted: 11 years ago

Beautiful writing Princess, this has been a splendid read.

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Posted: 11 years ago

Bete jaan aap khud araam karne jaayengi ya Mujhe kuch aur bolna padega?
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: AsyaManeet


Bete jaan aap khud araam karne jaayengi ya Mujhe kuch aur bolna padega?

Jati hun
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Posted: 11 years ago

Good girl!!
jaan nikaal di thi kal!!
go nw!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
Little Api

Last Chapter already.

What can I say a beautiful chapter, I loved this story and will definitely miss it.

A complete family

Look forward to the epilogue

Love you Bano
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Posted: 11 years ago
Awesome...

Happy family...to be precise picture perfect.

But still cant believe it was the last part.

Eagerly waiting for epilogue
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Posted: 11 years ago


Yes me alsoo...
Achaa plzzz dnt cry warna aur tbiyt kharaab ho gee
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: SBanoMalik


Late ho gayi ! 😆 koi baat nahi, jaake mere dusre FF ko padhlo i'm still t the part 9 there 😳
Thank you so much yaar !! 🤗 ❤️
I'm glad u liked the names, they r the name s of some people dear to me ! 😳
Congrats ! 🥳 😆



😆 jab tak mai,umrah se aonge u will be on 19 😭
welcome 🤗
yeah they were cute... awww 😊
thank u thank u 😃 😆

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