#8 - AsYa/KaBhi FF : AsYa's Love Story... COMPLETED !!! (Go #9) - Page 97

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: p_s05

The tickle and "Student" reference scene was absolutely
cute.


"...he kept her down and kissed her softly, pouring his happiness, before whispering an 'I love you, Jaan' and hugging her tightly, then bent down on his knees and pulled Zoya's kurti up, he caressed her belly, and planted a kiss there and murmured another 'I also love you little one and i'm waiting for you to come', making Zoya smile tearily, he put his arms around her waist and rested his head against her belly, kissing it again and again while Zoya ran her hands through his hair,..."


<font size="2">Breathtaking</font>!


"Baby, can i talk to you ?"


This man is perfect. *sigh*


"...he put his free arm around her waist and pulled her closer before resting his ear against her belly and gestured Najma to do the same which she did, Zoya smiled looking at them before Asad spoke.

"Bade Baby, tumne sunna chota Baby kya keh raha hai ?" Asad winked mischievously at Najma to which she almost giggled, and Zoya looked at him confused, "Chota Baby keh raha hai ke for once, rotlu Ammi is not crying !" Asad and Najma burst into fits of laughter and Zoya gasped outraged."


""Aap na... Aap na, aap bohot boore hain !" Zoya pointed her finger at him before crossing her arms and turning away to go to their room, but Asad had got up and had grabbed her wrist, yanking her to his chest with an arm around Najma and the other around her.

"I love you, my girls !! And you too little one !" Asad kissed Najma's, then Zoya's head and then caressed gently her belly.

"Love you too, Bhaijaan/Asad !" Najma and Zoya spoke simultaneously before hugging him tightly making him smile, he was so happy, today he felt once again being the luckiest man on Earth with his loved ones."


Endearing scene!


Pregnant Zoe and helpless Asad - Lovely!


""Thank you for this beautiful gift... Ab batao, kya naam rakhe hum apne shehzade ka ?" Asad asked lovingly and before he could reply, Dilshad and Najma barged in, but this time Asad didn't tried to move away, he felt good sitting with hiw wife and son.

The little baby was taken by Dilshad who was in awe with the beauty of the baby, soon the baby was in Najma's arms after a lot of whining, she smiled at the little one and kissed his forehead, she took his hand and he grabbed her index finger in his tiny fist.

Zoya and Asad looked at the scene in awe, she rested her head against his shoulder, "Tamatar, kya tum chote Baby ka naam rakhogi ?", she asked lovingly at a surprised Najma.

"Haan ! Main bhi chahta hoon ke mera Bada Baby hi mere Chote Baby ka naam rakhe..." Asad smiled at her and Dilshad couldn't be prouder of her children.

Najma looked at the little baby in her arms, "Rizwan...", she whispered the name and he stirred as if liking it, she looked up smiling at others then said out loud, "Rizwan Ahmed Khan !"

Zoya asked Najma to bring the baby to her, once in her arms, she looked up at Asad with a smile, "Humara beta Rizwan...""


Picturesque family


"After Najma took Rizwan in her arms, Zoya took Asma's hand and showed her, her room which was right accross theirs, it was a pink room with a lot of toys everywhere which Zoya and Asad had prepared for her.

While Dilshad showed Asma around the house, Asad and Zoya went in the room attached to theirs which was in a light-green painted, and with a beautiful wooden cradle in the middle of the room, a rocking chair on the side of it and little toys everywhere, the room had a peaceful ora and the fact that there was sun coming from the window brought a sense of perfectness.

Asad sat on the rocking chair with Zoya in his lap and he held Rizwan with the other arm, they shared a moment of silence and contentment before Dilshad, Najma and Asma barged in, Asma ran towards her parents and Asad gave Rizwan to Zoya before making Asma sit in his lap, Najma put her arms around Asad's neck from behing, hugging him and he smiled while Dilshad looked at her family with tears in her eyes, then caressed Zoya's hair, before taking Rizwan from her and Zoya rested her back against Asad's chest and whispered, 'Humari duniya..', and Asad completed, 'Humara Muqaddar !', before knocking his head with hers lovingly."


That was just exquisite. I adored that.


Here goes, not wanting to quote half the chapter. 😳

Another fairy-tale ends...😒


Epilogue, do come soon. ☺️



Thank you so much Prashni !! 🤗 I'm glad you liked it !! ❤️
U r sooo so so so sooo sweet !!! MWAH !! ❤️
I so so so love ur comments !! ❤️
Has to end and the epilogue will be coming soon 😳
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: p_s05

Beautiful writing Princess, this has been a splendid read.


Thank you so much !! 🤗 ❤️
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Posted: 11 years ago
beautiful update👍🏼
was very sweet nd emotional
loved d khan family bonding😊
last chapter😔😭
i loved this story very much
will miss it
waiting 4r epilogue
nd thnx 4r pm
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Saima-Syed

Little Api

Last Chapter already.

What can I say a beautiful chapter, I loved this story and will definitely miss it.

A complete family

Look forward to the epilogue

Love you Bano


Hey Badi Aapi ! 😃
Yeah ! It had to end 😳 Thank you so much !! Will post epilogue very soon ❤️

Love u too Aapi !! 🤗 ❤️
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Posted: 11 years ago
I loved it so so much ... I atleast read 2 time ...
I loved it ...
Thank you !! Thank you !!!

Love you
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: ssrdj

Awesome...

Happy family...to be precise picture perfect.

But still cant believe it was the last part.

Eagerly waiting for epilogue


Thanks Sarita !! ❤️
Had to end and epilogue will come very soon 😉
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Posted: 11 years ago
awsom and lovely ending
love nazma reaction about zoe pregnancy

nzma keep the baby name
asya adopted the baby asma
perfect ending

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: scarletmalik


beautiful update👍🏼

was very sweet nd emotional
loved d khan family bonding😊
last chapter😔😭
i loved this story very much
will miss it
waiting 4r epilogue
nd thnx 4r pm


Thank you so much Scarlet !! 🤗 I'm glad you liked it !! ❤️
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Posted: 11 years ago
I cant bid a goodbye to this story...i fell in love with this love story 😭 😭

You have knitted everything perfectly as always.

In this part Naj as bada baby was very hearttouching

The love asya shared with Naj is adorable.

Adoption of Asma was unexpected...but it touch my heart...

I m crying...i will miss this story 😭 😭
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Posted: 11 years ago
Wow love it totally love it
Love how zoya told him and he was so ecstatic
He was so so overjoyed
Rizwan is born and he was named by the big baby he was a bit sad and jealous in the beginning
But then she was told she will be the big baby forever
Wow they adopt asma that was beautiful I didn't even think about that
But it was a beautiful touch hats off to who suggested it
So the perfect family happily ever after
Waiting for the epi

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