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-RohitMaxwell-

@-RohitMaxwell-

Trailblazer

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Posted: 11 years ago

amazing OS! Write more <3

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fanraya

@fanraya

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

Wow, this is beautiful, you should write more, Great job..

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Bossqueen

@Brokengirl

Navigator

Posted: 11 years ago

Wonderfully well written. Couldn't have been said any better. You captured all the right emotions with words only. Makes you actually feel what they're feeling.

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sneaky-aj

@sneaky-aj

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

when i read that you were writing on Saahil for the first time, I was prepared to keep my expectations low...but two lines into the story and i knew that this is going to be one of the best thats gonna be ever written on them. Honestly, it was beautiful!

The raw pain, Aahil's slow acceptance of Sanam into his life...and even Sanam's curiosity and perception of Aahil's behavior...a very well done job indeed...nuff said😊

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Esha

@eshaaax3.

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

OMFG THAT WAS BRILLIANT!

I need this to happen in the show! Im literally dying to see Ahil confide in Sanam and for her to help him get over his past!

You write so beautifully! And i love the play on the word Stay- beautifully used!

Wish to read more from you ! :)

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mahwash

@Mahu34

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

Wow!!! Thank you so much for the likes and comments :) It means so much to me! It really warms my heart that you enjoyed reading the story :))

You know what, maybe I'll write another one on them.. Oh well, time will tell :D

Once again, thank you for liking my story, guys <3 Much love to you all!

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farz_parachute

@farz_parachute

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

This is an amazing piece on SaHil! How very vivid your narrative is. I'm most amazed!

The storyline on one side, the pain and anguish- the emotions how very very very engrossing it is!

Wow!

You've written so very beautifully!

You've made a fan out of me! Am most certainly already eagerly waiting for your next venture!

Truly talented you are!

Mwah!

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Fatty :)

@havokhotline

Inactive

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

This was a masterpiece in itself. It was incredibly detailed and I could visualise the entire thing. I can't wait for your next story. Wonderful stuff! :)