AsYa TS- Rain Rain Go Away!-Part 2-Pg 37- 24/6/14

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Posted: 11 years ago

#451

This is one of the sweetest TS i have ever come across 😃

You know i always love your "STORY OF LOVE" 😉😆

I'm surprised when asad started conversation with ker and shocked when he offered to drop her 😆

Asad and his attempts to know about the child was eally amusing 😆

Everything was perfect, their emotions, doubts and thoughts simply amazing dear 😛

My boat clashed with hers, but did not let it drown. They steadied themselves together... this is just WoW 😊

Love you ankie 😳

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Posted: 11 years ago

#452

Originally posted by: Amulya9

ur most welcome Ankita 😊
vl b waiting fr ur note 😳

will be posting it soon.. 😛

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Posted: 11 years ago

#453

Originally posted by: SimplySmile

I like that Asad has more vocabulary rather than just woh and actually. I know it must have taken him a hell load of courage to talk to her and I think that deserves a round of applause,👏

I'm although very surprised that Zoya didn't blow up when he talked to her, I was sure that she would take out her pepper spray and blind the poor guy,

It seems as if the weather and Zeeshan are playing cupid for AsYa in this story, I'm glad that they are, the two need all the help that they can get,

I don't even want to imagine how awkward the car ride must have been, seriously you could have even heard ants crawling if you listened in, that's how bad it must have been,

I'm glad that your taking this slow. As much as it affects the story, it bothers me when writers just poof in love to the story when it makes no sense whatsoever. Its pretty obvious that in this story AsYa are attracted to each other, now I'm looking forward to see the two move past that and develop new and stronger feelings,

Update soon:)

yeah.. true!! Asad did require a lot of courage here.. 😉

he wanted to take the first step..yet he was hesitating! 😊

ha ha.. Zoya didn't do all that...may be because i didn't put much dialogues between them...😛

true.. the Rain did play a cupid between them..ad also Zeeshan.. 😳

Now.. this was funny!! ants crawling! 🤣

yeah.. the car ride was ridiculously awkward..and the situation too 😉😆

Here...love held no chance... i personally don't believe in love at first sight..it can be attraction, or at most like... but love takes time to happen! 😊

I actually wanted to keep this story based on only attraction... i would still come up with a note soon! 😛

Thanks for the amazing comment!! 😃

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Posted: 11 years ago

#454

Originally posted by: prabha75
superb

Originally posted by: AMMY12
awsm update.
Superb one.
Luvd it.
Thanx 4 d pm.
T.c.

Originally posted by: neenabinu
very nice

Thank you... i am glad that you liked the update 😛

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Posted: 11 years ago

#455

Originally posted by: ican
Good Zoya is like a kid
Like her that way
Asad ...well is asad
Zoya omg
He is nice but I can shout for neighbors too

Zoya is not immature.. but fun loving.. yet she knows that it's absolutely an insensible act to let a stranger in... she understands all that 😛

and Asad is a gentleman! 😳

Thanks for the comment 😊

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Posted: 11 years ago

#456

Originally posted by: pinks2911

Thanks for the beautiful comment 😛

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Posted: 11 years ago

#457

Originally posted by: TaiLung
wow loved it
entirely different story
how they begin their attractions towards each other
and the ending was lovely
there are somethings which ddnt want any words how things will ned
loved it😃

thanks a lot dear... 😛

i am glad that you have found it different... 😛

yes.. attraction does all the talking here... it's all about that... 😳

and few things don't need words... only gestures are enough 😳

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Posted: 11 years ago

#458

Originally posted by: aYASHIKA
Awesome update...
Beautifully written. ...
I loved asad pov...
Asad offered zoya lift...so cute...
Paper boats..wow I loved them...
Asya are so adorable and cute...
Loved every bit of it...

Thanks a lot dear!! it's truly means a lot for me!! 😛

i am glad that you loved his POV 😳

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Posted: 11 years ago

#459

Originally posted by: aarzoo50
it was beautifully written...
specially the watly u ended the update was fantastic...
both spend the good time together..
nt much spoken... bt some things dont need to b in words...
keep writing ankita

thanks a lot Heena 😛

they just needed the time to know that the other person is good enough and love can be given a chance 😳

you are right.. it was all about gestures here...😛

i will... 😊