AsYa TS- Rain Rain Go Away!-Part 2-Pg 37- 24/6/14 - Page 47

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: azsumay

awesome Really I loved it. but I want you continue this story till ss/ff this story

thanks for pm


thank you for liking it 😳

and regarding continuing till a SS/FF, i will leave a note on that...😊
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: -Mrinalini-

Fantastic TS! 👏


Loved it! ❤️


thank you so much Mrina!! 🤗
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: swapno

Ankie!!!

I love the paper boat scenes...it reminded me my rainy day experience in childhood!!!
Sigh !! feeling nostalgic...
It was a fabulous update...
I loved it a lot...
Their longing, their yearning again their maturity...
So so beautifully expressed chapter...
Loved it ...thoroughly...🤗


thank you so much Swapno!!
it means a lot!! really!!! 😛

ha ha.. yeah.. sailing paper boats is something that i loved to do in childhood too.. 😳

i am glad that you liked it 😳🤗
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Posted: 11 years ago


thank you.. i am glad that you liked it... 😛
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: teju_KaBhi

I m super late :(

Chalo koi bat nahi. Coming to last part.
I thought it to turn into a fairy tales type but hey this is what happens in real life too. Right ??
I m damn sure right ;)
<3<3<3<3
The end with paper boats was perfect, reminded me of my childhood :)
Thanks 4 pm.


Ha ha.. no.. you are not late.. 😛

yes.. this story definitely has a lot to do with real life.. 😃
yes.. you are right!! 😉😆

thanks a lot dear.. loved your comment!! 😃
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: sweetluck

Awesome ...👏

loved it...

"nice kid",,,,,,"yours",,,,,epic..🤣..poor asad..🤣

beautifully penned ..enjoyed..😃

thanks for pm..😃


thanks dear..
glad that you liked it.. 😛

ha ha.. but Asad did show courage here 😆


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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: treasure11


You resed for the update 2mins early but update 45 min baad mila 🥱
I dont know how to imagine someone other thn asya
but she was asking him to come inside for coffee na 😕
Thank god u dont 😳😆


When i give a time..it means i will res at that timel!! 🥱🤣
awww
then don't 😳
yeah... she was.. but Asad is a gentleman..and they still had coffee... 😳
should i have known?? 😳🤣
Edited by BeYourself - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: jazmeen

Simply amazing ts

Totally loved it. Its so beautifully written


thanks a lot..i am really glad to know that you liked it!
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: sweety003

This is one of the sweetest TS i have ever come across 😃


You know i always love your "STORY OF LOVE" 😉😆

I'm surprised when asad started conversation with ker and shocked when he offered to drop her 😆
Asad and his attempts to know about the child was eally amusing 😆

Everything was perfect, their emotions, doubts and thoughts simply amazing dear 😛

My boat clashed with hers, but did not let it drown. They steadied themselves together... this is just WoW 😊

Love you ankie 😳


awww...😳
thanks a lot Anu...🤗

ha ha...😆
giving me my own words huh? 😉😆
yeah.. but this was more about attraction 😳😛

ha ha...😆
he had just then recovered from an awkward situation! 😉😆

yeah.. he didn't have much time..and he didn't want to miss the opportunity either 😃

thanks again for the lovely comment sweetheart...😳

love you too... ❤️

get well soon! 🤗
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Posted: 11 years ago
Awesome update 👏
Loved it..do continue soon
Thanks for the pm...

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