AsYa TS- Rain Rain Go Away!-Part 2-Pg 37- 24/6/14 - Page 47

Originally posted by: azsumay

awesome Really I loved it. but I want you continue this story till ss/ff this story

thanks for pm

Originally posted by: -Mrinalini-

Fantastic TS! 👏

Loved it! ❤️

Originally posted by: swapno

Ankie!!!

I love the paper boat scenes...it reminded me my rainy day experience in childhood!!!

Sigh !! feeling nostalgic...

It was a fabulous update...

I loved it a lot...

Their longing, their yearning again their maturity...

So so beautifully expressed chapter...

Loved it ...thoroughly...🤗

Originally posted by: grad2011

awesome update!!!

Originally posted by: teju_KaBhi

I m super late :(

Chalo koi bat nahi. Coming to last part.

I thought it to turn into a fairy tales type but hey this is what happens in real life too. Right ??

I m damn sure right ;)

<3<3<3<3

The end with paper boats was perfect, reminded me of my childhood :)

Thanks 4 pm.

Originally posted by: sweetluck

Awesome ...👏

loved it...

"nice kid",,,,,,"yours",,,,,epic..🤣..poor asad..🤣

beautifully penned ..enjoyed..😃

thanks for pm..😃

Originally posted by: treasure11

You resed for the update 2mins early but update 45 min baad mila 🥱

I dont know how to imagine someone other thn asya

but she was asking him to come inside for coffee na 😕

Thank god u dont 😳😆

Originally posted by: jazmeen

Simply amazing ts

Totally loved it. Its so beautifully written

Originally posted by: sweety003

This is one of the sweetest TS i have ever come across 😃

You know i always love your "STORY OF LOVE" 😉😆

I'm surprised when asad started conversation with ker and shocked when he offered to drop her 😆

Asad and his attempts to know about the child was eally amusing 😆

Everything was perfect, their emotions, doubts and thoughts simply amazing dear 😛

My boat clashed with hers, but did not let it drown. They steadied themselves together... this is just WoW 😊

Love you ankie 😳