Asad and Haya OS: Khamoshiyon ki Aadat - Page 5

Originally posted by: MisHumptyDumpty

I looovvveeed the part where haya didn't understand what zoya was trying to do n gave an expression Same as asad Hahahahahahahah

Originally posted by: -Anitha-

So cute os.
Beautifully written

Originally posted by: madhvi4gurti

it was damn beautiful!!! emotional!

wow dr...an amazing piece of work!👏

Originally posted by: ap3h7u

Yet another amazing piece by you...only today I came to know that Najma's daughter has a hearing and speaking disability🤔...loved how you described Asad and Haya's bond😳...Zoya was her usual self😳...oh!how I loved the techno-geek Zoya...beautifully written

Originally posted by: p_s05

That picture! - Heartrending!

This was exceptionally beautiful!

You never fail to amaze me with tear-jerking, stirring narratives.

Sincere thanks!😳😊

The knocking of the door, dinning table ethics, strumming of the guitar and; their prominent silence.

I was pleasantly surprised, an uncle and his niece, and their parallel dimensions.

Asad's persona would affect next generation, too. Just by being in their surroundings. I would have loved to see him as dad, after all the doubts he had about himself of being a good lover, husband or father. Khair...jo bhi ho...

Liked the anything and everything's possible aunt too.

"Zoya was the one whose behaviour with Haya was almost normal. If she didn't hear sounds, no problem. Zoya would make strange faces and make her smile. If toys that made sounds didn't catch her attention, she got her toys that emitted colourful lights. Zoya Asad Khan had solution for every problem."

"Her Mami made her smile a lot, but there were times when her Mami's actions confused her and she got an expression on her face that was identical to her Mamu, if he was watching her Mami's antics."

A liberated soul to enhance the magnificence of the silence and its inhabitants lives. 😃

Red - Brilliantly put. 👏 Zoya was indeed a liberated soul.

Thank you. 😃

Originally posted by: aashiqua

I always loved ur works... U jst make the heart full of warm feelings...d emotions only known to heart cannot b xpressd in words

Originally posted by: shilpita87

This is one of the most beautiful thing i have read in a long time.. and i can't thank you enough for it.. you are an amazing writer.

Originally posted by: mayurisb80

This is a beautiful os in so many ways...conversing love through silence and signs...

Originally posted by: farz_parachute

I'm so attached to that Asad. That I see this Asad as that.


By THAT I mean...Emma wala. Eh Zoya. Well all Asad is Zoya's! Your latest Asad!

You do that? Okay, if you like it that way. I see the one here as the same guy as 'Somewhere in Time' - showwala Asad. He was a lot more vulnerable and such a little boy at times.

But, if you see him as Emma wala Asad, that's alright, too.😃

In Heartbeat Warfare...he's a but different. Yet the same. But there's a difference. Hmm.

Yes, in HW he is different. All three are same but different.

Zoya is not from any. She's brand new here. Your brand new.

Is it? Hmmm...Zoya is someone I never get completely hang of. So, if you say, she is brand new, she is brand new.

Thank you for this.



I knew there was a Haya story coming from you. But I was expecting a love one. With Rahat.

Actually, I thought of only Haya and Asad. She reminds me of him. And, she and Rahat remind me of old QH. But, I never thought of a Haya & Rahat story.

I'm happily surprised.


But that doesn't mean you're off the hook. I shall wait for it. And when it does come...I shall be there commenting!

No promises for that one. If further development in Haya-Rahat track inspires me, then maybe.

Originally posted by: notagain

Res 🤗

Mamu's are the best!!!

Aur, Asad mamu the bestest! 😃

I never expected this, it was a complete surprise and yet not. This OS. Haya is just another woman in his life, just a little girl as of now. But yeah, this man is one who would love them all for exactly who they are. With all his fierceness and caring.

Khan villa and their family is my favorite part of QH. No doubt, Haya fits in seamlessly. She would be doted upon and yet be encouraged to be independent. Haya is a perfect blend in, the one who grows into the family with her silent fortitude and mamu's indulgence.

Haya is a beautiful character inside out. She would have been a perfect fit in KV. And, I find it so fitting that she is the one who is in KV in the show.

Beautifully written Noe. Loved the relations that have persisted, strengthened and blossomed in this story. The little girl who has a mamu who converses with her in their own cocooned silences. The mami who compensates with her frazzled actions, a mom, who is learning with her to understand how it all works, and a nani who brings it all together.

Blue - that is so beautifully put, especially about the mom who is learning. 👏 I started this one with Asad and Haya in mind with others having a small role. But, when I reached Najma's part, then I realized that how much is there to her in context of Haya. She is a regular girl. Finished college, got married, had a child - regular, normal life. Kid was to grow up, go to school and so on. But, she got Haya. She is no Asad or Zoya or Dilshaad. It would have been such a shock to her. But, as you said she is learning with her daughter.

She is blessed in so many ways. Lovely OS indeed. 🤗

Thank you 🤗