Asad and Haya OS: Khamoshiyon ki Aadat - Page 4

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Posted: 11 years ago
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That was so beautiful!
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Posted: 11 years ago
#32
WHY DO YOU WRITE SO BEAUTIFULLY?! 😳 It is so emotionally beautiful <333333333
I wanted to see Asad with kids! 😳 You make me cry with emotions :')
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Posted: 11 years ago
#33
it is sooo cute
loved the way u described asad haya s relation
i miss my akdoo
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Posted: 11 years ago
#34
Res!
Unres!

Hayaa and Asad. Differemt yet alike?

You know you are 'connected' with someone, when you don't need words. Its either the eyes, the expressions, or the telepathy! You become a mind reader and you don't even know when.

Mamu and his niece have this 'connection'. Their conversations lie in silence, happiness in actions.

Little Hayaa can't hear but loves banging on the doors? Aww. <3
And then she has those colorful and attractive playbooks!

Loved how you portrayed Najma - a worried and caring mother.
And Zoya, the crazy Mami whose non stop blabber makes even the little special girl smile. :)

Wish this could happen, in an alternate universe - with no one eyed cat woman, a 10 day nikaah ceremony, and our beloved AsYa with kids.

Your stories are like QH all over again! With logical plots, of course.

Beautiful OS :)
Edited by Zanutix - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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it was really cute... asad and haya. was surprised when i got the pm. thought you had mispelt zoya as haya. but it was awesome... such a long time i read some asad story that it felt great...
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Posted: 11 years ago
#36
So cute
Haya is like her mamu
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Posted: 11 years ago
#37

Originally posted by: KSGmaniac_24579

It was so dam cute

Loved the way u described everyone's emotions
Loved the bond haya shared with everyone!
Loved it


Thank you. Glad that you liked it. 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
#38

Originally posted by: farz_parachute

MINE mine mine!

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You did it again, didn't you Noe? Played with the strings of our hearts. Well, mine specifically!

Dil ki tar and all that.

And Asad plays Haya the guitar.

With the title you had my mind run wild. I was thinking he's her doctor? Or just some stranger?

Never in a million years did I though of him as who he really is to Haya, her Mamu.

And, I never thought of him as anything other than her Mamu and now I think why I didn't 😲. Him being her doctor would make a darn good scene. Vaise Rahat is Dr. Rahat, so maybe that role is for him.

And, yes, it was difficult for me to write him as her Mamu in one way - that is, I watch QH2 as a brand new show (Yes, I watch it, but on and off and not very attentively) and I don't link any character back to QH1 characters (not even Dilshaad). I don't like to. But, it was very easy in another way, as Haya reminds me of Asad - the part of him that was hidden from the world. She so reminds me of Asad that he has to be Mamu. In this OS, I could emphasize only on silence, manners, politeness, etc. but other characteristics that I observed in grown up Haya like her insecurity because of her physical challenges, her pain that she hides, her vulnerability, her eyes that speak - I could not highlight them, because here in this OS Asad would make sure that she gets treatment and she wouldn't grew up to be the young lady that we see in the show. I mean she will be same minus the things that I mentioned. So, it was tricky. But, there is no other way I can write this.

Very, very heartfelt!
Typical Noe style!


How do you do it?
How? Tell me, I need to know.

Thank Gul for giving us Haya and Surbhi C. for portraying her well.

First when I got up today, I had a surprise waiting in the form of an old memory. And now just when I'm thinking, chalo...let's just refresh one last time...and I get this. I wanna cry.
Happy tears!

Double bonanaza! But that means no update on Emma FF till next week.

And thank you for the picture!

I love you!


And I miss Asad. And Zoya. And Najma.

I also miss them. 💔

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Posted: 11 years ago
#39

Originally posted by: aYASHIKA

Lovely os...
Such a cute...
U potrait emotions of each one so beautifully. . .
Love the bond that haya share with everyone specially asad


Thank you.

Glad that you liked it! 😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
#40

Originally posted by: MisHumptyDumpty

Asad as .mamoo..


I ..

It was fantastic. . Reminded me of someone whom I grew up with..

Thanks...


Miss HDeee...😃

Yes, Asad as Mamu.

Glad that you liked it!

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