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TaiLung

@TaiLung

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#431

I was so eagerly waiting for this update for long time but what i get

But dont worry i will be happy when you give the next update very soon

And about update it was awesome, u beautifully described everyone's emotions especially Humeria's loved it

I am 100% sure that Zoya is alive

Cant wait for the next update 😛

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aseela sha

@aseelashah

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#432

Aashna bravo 👏

your update is suspence ki dukaan😡

mujhe paagal karne ka irada hai kya?

Mein pahale hi aadi paagal hu,poora mat banavo .2 kids hai unhe sambhalna hai😉😆

Yaar this update gives me a mild attack.I forgot to take breath while reading

Yaar ithna suspense mere sehat ke liye acha nahiii😆

Update was outstanding👏👏👏

Woman you know how to torture ur readers & how to hook them to the story👏👏

Humaira poor girl is so broken .Thank Allah Ayaan is thr to handle her⭐️

Gafoor's & Humi's reactions u wrote very well👏👏

That Rihaan what should i say🤢🤢

And Zoya ko kuch ho gaya &Asad ko wo pata nahi eisa hota hai kya?😉

I have no patience so pls pls update soon

Busy hone ka bahana nahi chalega😆

thanks for pm😃

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jasmine ansari

@AMMY12

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#433

awsm update.
Superb one.
Luvd it.
Cont asap.
Waiting 4 d nxt part.
Thanx 4 d pm.
T.c.

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Vrinda

@vrindagupta

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#434

nice update

killer planned everything well and no evidence to be traced to him

i thought asad would save her

but i guess u have planned something else for zoya..

but one thing i'm sure is that zoya is alive she can't die like this

ayaan finally got to see humeira but..he might have not expected the hug..

hope asad gets some clues soon

u r such a devil left it at a cliffhanger

can't wait to read more

update soon

thanks for the PM

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EuphoricDamsel

@EuphoricDamsel

Stunner

+ 7

Posted: 11 years ago

#435

Res 😃
With 440 volt smile /^

unres with 440 volt ke tears .^😭

i knew it u would do such a thing to my poor Zoya ...

but agar Zoya mar gyi tho happy ending keda hogi ?...

so i know you wouldn't change the script for some twist ]s...

i have a doubt no Shahid in this one ...

and abdul even was trying to disappear ...

but still i know its rihaan and rihaan and rihaan ...

when the whole lingerie fiasco occured it was rihaan who was irritated to the core not shahid this tells us that his first attempt of killing zoya was all vain and that he was very frustrated ...

but where did THIS ZOYA ? SHAHID ? AND ASAD MIYAAN GO ? ...

ARGHHH !!!

"dil ke armaan aasuon me beh gye ..." 😭

Edited by ASYA4eveAAA - 11 years ago

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EuphoricDamsel

@EuphoricDamsel

Stunner

+ 7

Posted: 11 years ago

#436

Ressy 😆

unressy 😭

wahhh !!!

meri zoya ko maar daala ...

*^chaati piith piith kr roying*^

ek min !!!

mai update ke kuch tricky parts pr aapki nazre daalna chahungi look next post ... 😊😭🤢

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EuphoricDamsel

@EuphoricDamsel

Stunner

+ 7

Posted: 11 years ago

#437

He couldn't believe he has lost his suspect...he had followed him almost 10 blocks and now he was gone...Frustrated he walked back to his car..I took him an hour back and forth.He was completely drenched and angry. Finally the rain stopped and he got to his car. He looked around for his brother but he was nowhere to be seen. His car was parked in a distance, so he knew he was around.But where did he go?? He was supposed to meet him here...He got into his car and grabbed his cell and called him...He didn't pick up..He tried again, still no answer. What was he supposed to do now. He walked around in hopes of finding his brother but the neighbouhood was abandoned. Finally he decied to leave.He was sure Abdul would not show up this late.. Grabbing his phone he sent a quick text to his brother and drove off into the night...

this person is ayaan and he is trying to call asad buut asad didn't pick up because he was busy saving Zoya ...

YOOHOO I GOT THE LEADS ...🤪

Edited by ASYA4eveAAA - 11 years ago

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EuphoricDamsel

@EuphoricDamsel

Stunner

+ 7

Posted: 11 years ago

#438

Mine ...

AGAIN. ..

Uh..did Zoya and Rihaan fight??

No...sir and maam..smile...nice to each other...good...no fight...

See rihaan wanted to create this situation so that no one suspects him when Zoya's dead . Otherwise how could he suddenly change so much and give Zoya all time together she wanted ?? 😃

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shreya mehra

@shreya11mehra

Stunner

Posted: 11 years ago

#439

Humzi rocks in the update..

I knw there wsnt much of asad n zoya...bt still humzi was thw star if dis update

Ayaan met her finally...

M sure asad vl save zoya

Thn vl gt our most awaited lingerie romance..pool romance..hot romance☺️

Ye rehaan kutte ki maut marega...kiide pare isko..😡

I want update asap

Tk ur tym aashna...

Congrats fr blog...

Love

Shreya

Edited by shreya11mehra - 11 years ago

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Heena

@aarzoo50

Inactive

Posted: 11 years ago

#440

The messaging...
". Hurry..there are cops in the office. .Something bigs going down it seems.."

"On my way..be there in 10.."
"Do you have any idea why
they are here?? Ayaan texted
back..."
"I think so "...came a quick reply...

does "i think so" imply anything here...
asad ko pata hai...????...
is zoya with him... safe n sound????