SurVir FF X Men (Updated June 6th)

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Chapter 1: Identity


It was a cold night in the city of Mumbai. While everyone was sound asleep in their homes, a young man was roaming on the streets, alone and somber. A hood covered his head as he wore a long cloak like attire to cover himself. What was even more peculiar were the long gloves that he wore that appeared to cover his long fingers. He stopped near a brick wall in the alley and stood still, in thought.

Why am I here? he pondered to himself. Wandering like a aimless fool has left me like this. And whats worse is that I stand alone in this condition. Why...why was I the only one left with this-

Before he could finish his thought, he heard a cry for help. He began to run to where he had heard this sound. He was led to another corner of the street where a girl turned towards him was being harassed by what looked like a mere hooligan. That was when he removed his gloves to reveal what was really hidden under them...metal alloy claws that were merged with his skin coming from above his fingers on his hands. At an accelerated speed, he rushed towards the scoundrel and slashed him with his claws on his face. The hooligan fell to the ground, frozen with fear at the sudden attack. Before he could even look at the man's face, the hooligan scurried away from the scene. The girl looked at her savior, who from her perspective was a tall,dark man. She gasped at the sight of his claws. The reaction triggered the young man to turn away in fear.

"Thank you," the girl said. "I'm sorry if I upset you...I have just never seen someone with such claws."
And she makes it even worse by emphasizing on my condition. Better to leave, he said to himself.

"Must you talk about my condition in front of me," he said. "People like you don't even understand what it is like to not be like the people around you. And to feel alone in such a big world where you are judged simply by your appearance. I don't even know why I'm talking to you. It's simply...pointless."
"Sad that you feel that way. But not everyone is like that in this world. And who knows...I might be similar to you in ways you would've never thought of."the girl replied.

He looked up, turning towards the girl, whose words struck his mind with a chord of welcoming. He looked directly at her. She had a modern outlook, dressed in a long sleeved navy blue top, blue jeans, and a pair of chapal. What really struck him about her was her long raven black hair that draped over her shoulders and her well defined eyes that looked like shiny white pearls, gleaming in the moonlight.

"I've always been taught to respect those who cared about your life, For that, I am willing to extend the hands of friendship. For that you must know my name...Surbhi," the girl said. "Now...I would like to see the face of the one who saved me...if you dont mind."

No one has ever spoken like this to me before, he thought to himself. Slowly, he removed his hood off his head. He had wavy jet black hair and his face showed a sense of pride, but anguish at the same time. "Who are you?" Surbhi asked.

The man let out a deep breath and closed his eyes. He opened them. "Karanvir..."he replied.

Index:
Chapter 1: Page 1
Chapter 2: Page 2
Chapter 3: Page 2
Chapter 4: Page 2
Chapter 5: Page 4
Chapter 6: Page 5
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Posted: 11 years ago
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wow!!! nice!!!
those claws!!!!
are you an X-men fan???
me too!!!
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Originally posted by: ashrina

wow!!! nice!!!

those claws!!!!
are you an X-men fan???
me too!!!


YUP! And so is KVB! Thats why I made this for him! Stay tuned for more!
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Great OS! Wonderfully written!!👏
Same here! An X-men fan! :D

waiting to read more!
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nice start⭐️
X-man fan😉
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Originally posted by: meryl97


YUP! And so is KVB! Thats why I made this for him! Stay tuned for more!


YAY!!!
X-men fans!!! wow!!!
And Iam totally bowled over KVB...he is gr8!!!
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Wow nice os
woh bhe x-mem wala
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Took peoples advice to put chapters on single thread. So I will continue from the original. Please continue reading from this thread.
Chapter 2 - Triples
Surbhi and Karanvir reached to the destination. After a long walk, Surbhi had brought Karanvir to the place she wanted to take him to. "Why are we here?" Karanvir asked her.

"I told you along the way. I can introduce you to someone I know. Someone who can help you," Surbhi replied. "Have patience,na!"
"I dont need help with anything!" Karanvir exclaimed. "I don't even know why I followed you here."

"But you did...which proves you trust me.Right?"
"Possibly."
"Shall we go in now?"
"Fine."

The two were standing infront of an old house. Surbhi pulled up the garage door and she entered inside with Karanvir. Closing it, she and Karanvir went to the study room of the house. Inside, books and papers were scattered around the area as if a storm had came in. "Is this your house?" Karanvir asked.

"No...this is my boss's house. He's a professor. I'm like his assistant. I come here every morning really early and wait till he gets here." Surbhi answered.

"Then where do you stay?"
"My boss owns an outhouse. I stay there."
"Alone?"
"Yes."
"And...your family?"

Surbhi's face dampered at the question. Before she could reply, the door bell rang. She attended to the door where a man in a black coat stood. "Morning." he smiled as he walked in.

"Morning,sir." Surbhi greeted. Behind the man, two other men came inside as well. Both were tall, muscular, and dressed in a somewhat similar fashion. One of them was wearing a white bandana while the other large black tattoos on his arms.

"Karan, this is Professor Vaquar Shaikh." Surbhi introduced.
"Pleasure to meet another Karan." Professor Shaikh said as he shook Karanvir's hand.
"Another?"Karanvir asked, confused.
"You see these two Karans here," Professor Shaikh pointed to the two men. "The bandana wala is KSG and the inked one is KT."
"And he's a new client as well." Surbhi added.
"In that case you will need a code name as well." Professor Shaikh said.
"What is all this?!" Karanvir asked, confused.
"You'll know in good time, my boy." Professor Shaikh said.

The five of them retreated to the study room. "Sir, from what I have observed...he seems to have inhibited animal instincts. He has accelerated strength, ivory claws, and great endurance as well." Surbhi explained to Professor Shaikh, showing him her a detailed report she had written.

"Well written, Surbhi," Professor Shaikh said, "Now we have to give his code name."
"What is this? Are you going to experiment on me or something?" Karanvir asked.
"No. KSG and KT have been with us in order for us to train and observe their abilities to put them into good use for protection uses," Professor Shaikh explained. "Your powers will be used for the same."
"I think we can call him KV, short for Karanvir." Surbhi suggested.
"Good. Now then...I should at least introduce you to your comrads," Professor Shaikh said. "First, KT. His powers come from the tattoos on his arms."
"My powers depend on moods or emotions," KT stated. "Right now, my powers are in a normal state when the tatoos are simply black. I can only control them mentally through the color range in between. If they turn white, I'm rendered powerless."
"Could you demonstrate?.I don't understand." KV said.

KT closed his eyes. As he focused, his tattoos slowly changed from jet black to a deep blue. As they did, he opened his hand where a floating medium sized water bubble formed in his palm. KV looked at this sight in astonishment and said, "I can't believe your tattoos allow you to do that."

"And now KSG..."Professor Shaikh stated. "He-"
Before the professor could finish his statement, he and the others noticed KSG was gone. "He must've left again!" Surbhi cried.

"That boy!" Professor Shaikh said, frustrated. "I will track him."
"I'll come." KT added.
"What's wrong with him?" KV asked.
"You'll be with us for a while. You'll know in due time." KT answered.

End of Chapter 2. Hope u liked it! Leave comments down below!
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Chapter 3 Mirrors
"What's wrong with him?" KV asked Surbhi. The two of them were left alone in the house while Professor Shaikh and KT had left to get KSG.
Surbhi was making chai for her and KV.

"KSG is like that. He doesn't like to talk to new people."
"Then why is he even here if he doesn't want to be."
"He has no where else to go. He was abandoned in his childhood. Professor Shaikh found him and took him in as his own. But at the same time, he's still that confused little boy that I saw in him when I first saw him."
"How long have you known him?"
"Since I started working here...about a year at least. His behavior is different...as if he feels alone and incomplete."
"I don't get it."
"Remember what KT said. You'll be here for a while."
"No one around here likes explaining things."
"Explaining is nothing. Learning comes from observation."

KV looked at Surbhi in silence for a moment. She speaks differently from other girls, he thought to himself. Surbhi poured the chai into two cups and handed one to KV.

On the other hand, Professor Shaikh and KT were walking in a distant valley. "Are you sure he's here?" KT asked. "I'm positive. My tracking device never fails." Professor Shaikh answered. Thats when KT pointed ahead.

KSG was found sitting in a corner near a tree, alone and in frustration pulling at his head. "Karan..."Professor Shaikh called. KSG sat there, silent. He looked into a small mirror that he held in his palm. "Whats wrong with you? You know you can't be trusted being alone all the time!" KT shouted.

"Thats exactly it!" KSG shouted as he stood up in rage. "I already tolerate you! Now I must tolerate another one of my name! Do I have no identity?!"
"Calm down." Professor Shaikh said.
"How can I?! Since I was left alone that rainy night as a child, all I feel is that loneliness is the answer! Though we have these abilities, were still not similar! Mine is nothing but a curse!" KSG yelled. "A curse which has rid me of peace! Because of which...whenever I look in the mirror...I see nothing but stains..."

KSG turned away from Professor Shaikh and KT, who were left speechless. Sweat came down KSG's face. As he looked at the mirror again, he smashed it against the tree, shattering it to pieces.

End of Chapter 3. Please leave comments below.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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You compiled!!!!!!



Can you believe it!


I only just read chapter 1!



I love X-Men!


Surbhi is like Storm!! But with long hairrr.



I love all of them!!


Mwahhh

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