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Posted: 11 years ago
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Chapter 4 The Shocker
It was late at night at Professor Shaikh's household. Outside on the porch, KSG stood in silence watching the rain pour down. Thats when KT came out. He looked at KSG with a content, yet chilled face as KSG's back turned to him. "Karan..." KT said. KSG only turned his head at an angle.

"Enough...Karan. Its been a long day. At least forget about it now." KT pleaded. KSG remained silent. "Don't let your emotions get the better of you. Besides, tomorrow we have college...its best you rest up," KT continued. "At least start a new day on a fresh note." With that, KT headed back inside. KSG stood still and headed and inside to his room which he and KT shared. He went on the top of the bunk bed and laid on his bed, motionless...and slowly drifted to sleep.

The next morning, KSG and KT were getting ready to go to college. The two were finishing breakfast in the kitchen when Professor Shaikh came in. "Okay boys, I have to go. Now remember...KV is new to St Andrews College...so make him feel welcome." Professor Shaikh ordered.

"Sir, Surbhi is there for that. " KT smiled.
"But he's your new comrad. And he and Surbhi seem to have gotten along already. Now its your turn. Relationships can only build when we learn to connect with others."

KSG looked at Professor Shaikh with a somber face. "Anyways...I better get going. Bye." Professor Shaikh told KT and KSG as he began to leave. KT waved bye to Professor Shaikh as he left. "Come on. We should go as well." KT told KSG.

At St. Andrews College, KV was waiting near the college lounge. He checked his watch. Where is she? She's the one who told me to wait here. KV thought to himself. Thats when he saw Surbhi walking by in the lounge. But she had not came alone. She was talking to another boy. He was dressed in cool casual wear, jeans, and a green jacket. His hair was long and ruffled like a lorry. The two were laughing as they continued to converse.

"Mohit, are you sure you can go to the meeting by yourself?"
"Ofcourse! It seems our club president is busy nowadays!"
"Come on! A new recruit is now working under my boss. Since he's new to the college, I thought I'd show him around."
"Where is he?"

Surbhi looked around to find KV standing watching her and Mohit. "Right there!" Surbhi pointed out to KV. Mohit turned and waved to KV. Wonder who he is, KV thought to himself as he waved back to Mohit. "Anyways...I should go. I'll see you later." Surbhi told Mohit.

"Sure. Bye." Mohit said as he left the lounge. Surbhi then walked to KV. "Sorry..I'm a bit late." Surbhi apologized.

"Forget that. Tell me...who was that?"
"Him...that was Mohit. My friend."
"I've heard that one before,"
"What do you mean by that?!"
"Whats that saying in Hindi?Oh yeah...ek ladki aur ladka kabhi dost nahi ban sakti!"
"Oh shut up! That only happens in movies!"
"You never know..."
"Do you want me to show you around or not?"
"Fine."

Just then, Surbhi's cell phone rang. She took her phone out and answered the call. "Yeah KT?" Surbhi answered. "What?! Again! Okay...me and KV will be there!" Surbhi disconnected the call.

"What happened?"
"Its KSG. We have to go to the alley now!"
"Again this guy?! I'm starting to get annoyed with this KSG!"
"Come one!"

In the alley, KT found KSG sitting in the corner. "Everything has a limit, Karan! I've had it with you running off to be alone!" KT shouted. Just then, KV and Surbhi arrived on the scene. "Is he okay?" Surbhi asked.

"He is being too stubborn now!" KT shouted,
"I'll talk to him." Surbhi said.

Surbhi slowly walked towards KSG. "Karan..."she called. KSG sat in silence. "Karan...please...please get up." Surbhi pleaded. KSG didn't answer. Surbhi then touched KSG's shoulder. KSG immediately jerked her hand off, standing up and said, "Just leave me alone."

"How much longer do we leave you alone, Karan?!" Surbhi asked. "The more you stay alone the more you draw into yourself! Enough is enough! You can't hide from the real world forever!"
"I can...and I will..."KSG said sternly.
"Well we won't let you," Surbhi replied.

Surbhi then tried to grab KSG's hand as she said "Please lets go!"
"STOP!" KSG shouted as he jerked Surbhi off. It didn't stop there. In his anger, a release of dark energy emerged from his hand in the form of a shadowball and hit Surbhi directly. She fell to the ground, unconscious. KV and KT shared shocked looks on their faces while KSG stood stiff, regretting what he had done.

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Omg!! yay!


Do I see Mohit???


Am going to go read!!!


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Posted: 11 years ago
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wow!!!
wonderful update!!

oh yeah!! mohit is there too!!!!
cool!!!

un-huh...what's with ksg??
why does he wanna be alone!!????...poor guy!

omg !!!!
surbhi????
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Wow Awesomeee!


I might sound horribly repetitive by this point..but what do I do! You're the reason I'm all hyper!


So shadowball huh!! Impressive!


Awwh poor thing...he feels bad!


And ohmyyy thank you thank you for bringing in Haider for me!!!


He's my favourite! All time!


I love you for this!!


And thank you so very much for the update!!! I live it!!!


And yeahhh...you must add at the title that you've updated the chapters! Just put there Ch2-4 at pg 2 (May 31st)



That way people know you've update!


Hugs!


Mwahhh
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Finally
mujay original thread mil he gea and 3 parts wow
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Posted: 11 years ago
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awww lovvveee it! its maddd cuttteee!👏😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
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amazing!
never watched x man but this was nice!
ty for the pm.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Chapter 5 The Dawn of Evil
In a dark hideout, an old man dressed as a butler was coming towards a room. Inside the room, it was pitch dark. "Madam..." the man called. Turned towards him was a woman, who sat in a black chair. As she turned around in her swiveling chair, her face could not be seen due to the darkness. One could only see the white veil she was wearing. "What news do you bring for me?" the woman asked.

"KSG had attacked Surbhi in the alley...well by accident." The woman smirked, holding onto her veil. "So his powers have finally come to the limelight...interesting," the woman grinned/ "Let us see the footage. I want to get an idea of the power that lies within him."

At Professor Shaikh's house, Surbhi was resting in a clinic room. The professor, KV, and KT were watching over her. "So will she be okay?" KV asked.

"She'll be fine. She just needs some rest." Professor Shaikh stated.
"And where is he at?" KV asked.
"KSG is in his room...where he should be." KT answered.
"I think its time." Professor Shaikh said.
"For what?" KT asked.
"I have a team of professional consultants in Darjeeling that can help control him," Professor Shaikh stated. "They told me if we were having trouble in handling him, they can take care of him. I think we should go for it...I mean how long can we deal with this?!"
"Maybe he just needs friends," KV stated. "Let's try talking to him and-"
"And what,KV? You saw what happened with Surbhi. I think sir is right." KT said.
"I'll call them in the morning to get him." Professor Shaikh said.

Suddenly, a red alarm began to flash in the house. "Whats going on?!" KV asked. "Its the crime signal!" KT answered. Professor Shaikh took out a device from his jacket pocket. "There's a robbery in Bandra Bank!" Professor Shaikh stated.

"We should get going then!" KT exclaimed.
"For a robbery?! Isn't that what police are for?" KV asked.
"This will be a good way to test some teamwork. Now go." Professor Shaikh ordered.
"What about KSG?" KV asked.
"I will have to watch him." Professor Shaikh said.
"Come on." KT urged.

Back at the hideout, the woman was on the phone with someone. "Is everything set?" the woman asked. From the Bandra Bank, another woman was standing outside of the bank. She wore a gold colored outfit and had long brown black hair laid down on her back. "Everything is set, boss," the woman said on the phone. "Your minions are robbing the bank as we speak. The professor's pets should be on their way."

"Excellent. Now you go in as well. Its time my apprentice makes her entry."
"Ofcourse. I'll go in."

The woman hung up the phone. She tapped her phone's cover with her sharp nails as she had an evil smile plastered on her face. "The time has come...let the fun begin." she grinned.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Mine!!!


Wow!!! Who is this new entry!!!! So!


We finally have a villain!!!


And her apprentice. And minions!


Wow!!


It gets better with every update! I muss Mohit though! Hee!


Love you Mah darling! Mwah!!!
Edited by farz_parachute - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#20
very nice part⭐️
& she is unconsciousSo Ksg attacked Surbhi😲
& she is after Ksg😡😡Billi made an appearance here 2😡
I think Ksg likes Surbhi & is upset 2 see him wid KV😎
after reading part 4 i think Kv also likes Surbhi🤔
will we get a love triangle😆
atleast here make Ksg-Surbhi a couple plz😳😉
continue soon😊
thanx 4 PM😃

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