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I somehow missed commenting on the last chapter...so here's a collective comment for both the chapters😃...
The confession...it was everything I wanted it to be😳...may be I was the only one who never wanted their confession to be hurried...Asad had a past and I wanted him to take quite a lot of time to come out of the shell he had confined himself into since so many years...also I wanted him to fight with his own feelings and try not to acknowledge them...that's exactly what you gave me...it happened only when it became inevitable...all these made the confession absolutely PERRFECT...beautifully penned😳...and our little bundle of sunshine Aanu and her antics just added to the beautyHospital romance...I was expecting a few long eye-locks but seems like the pent-up emotions found a better way through words😳...their moments of realisation...loved their sensitivity and understanding towards each other...Asad will talk about Ayesha😳...finally😃...I've always loved Ayesha and I'm eager to learn about Asad's true feelings for her😳...update soon😃
Asad is a man who lives by his thoughts and lets them rule his life, so definitely it would have taken a while for him to change that about him or learn to accept changes.. And thanks so much, I am glad you liked the confession, though I definitely thought it came out too cheesy but that's just how I wanted it to be..
Eye locks are for young teenagers, AsYa are mature adults.. and in my story I've always maintained that maturity 😊 But there's their sort of romance.. Yes a lot about Ayesha will be spoken.. Thanks so much 😃
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