||~ The Sunshine of My life #4 AsYa FF ~||Part37 PG130 15/06/14

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-Anku-

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Posted: 11 years ago

#581

Originally posted by: -Mrinalini-
I don't have any expectations from this story other than the fact that you keep surprising me with every chapter and I love it that way! ❤️

Thanks so much <3 I am glad you do..

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aumigi

@aumigi

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Posted: 11 years ago

#582

thank you for an awesome update. loving the story, maybe a little more of ahana. Hopefully Asad finds out who is trying to harm his family. Let us know what happened to Ayaan would be nice. 😛

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lourel24

@lourel24

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#583

This part was beautiful.loved the way anu was clinging to zoya,the way she saved him,the way asad said he can't say no to her pout.everything was beautiful but the major part confession I found was not up to the level.I found something was missing but don't know what.I was eagerly waiting for this scene.Expectation was high too.zoya being in hospital n asad being restless was perfect backdrop u have weaved but when the moment came,it just came n gone too.My chotu sa view on wat i felt.

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-Anku-

@-Anku-

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Posted: 11 years ago

#584

Originally posted by: lourel24
This part was beautiful.loved the way anu was clinging to zoya,the way she saved him,the way asad said he can't say no to her pout.everything was beautiful but the major part confession I found was not up to the level.I found something was missing but don't know what.I was eagerly waiting for this scene.Expectation was high too.zoya being in hospital n asad being restless was perfect backdrop u have weaved but when the moment came,it just came n gone too.My chotu sa view on wat i felt.

Sorry for not living up to your expectations, but that's how the confession was meant to be. Zoya was hurt on the head, and totally fine otherwise but he was worried for her anyway. Asad had already realized his love and knew even about Zoya's, they have been friends for a while and know each other pretty well. And since Asad had to be calm for his family, he consciously tried controlling his emotions. Maybe you had different expectations, but I always thought that when I make AsYa confess it would be simple and subtle. You could let me know what disappointed you, though now I can do nothing to change it. 😊

Thanks for your comment :)

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SleepingBeauty.

@SleepingBeauty.

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Posted: 11 years ago

#585

Im not telling you what I want from the story coz u already know it 🤣

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BlackNWhite

@desidillse

Sparkler

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Posted: 11 years ago

#586

Congo KKR has won so we are going to get update on friday also.

Yipppeee🥳

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BlackNWhite

@desidillse

Sparkler

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Posted: 11 years ago

#587

Aww AsYa are too cute and Annuu aww my anu is the icing on the cake😳

What a lovely update yaar ...finally AsYa are going to marry soonish

This was the best confession ever

Romantic update on friday also ...👏

You are doing a great job Ankita 👏👏

But I have a strong feeling that either you are going to end this after 2 or 3 chapters or you are going to give some other twist ...sad twist😭

i hope all my instincts are wrong

please update soon ...

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-Anku-

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Posted: 11 years ago

#588

Originally posted by: -Aditi.
Aww AsYa are too cute and Annuu aww my anu is the icing on the cake😳
What a lovely update yaar ...finally AsYa are going to marry soonish

This was the best confession ever

Romantic update on friday also ...👏

You are doing a great job Ankita 👏👏

But I have a strong feeling that either you are going to end this after 2 or 3 chapters or you are going to give some other twist ...sad twist😭

i hope all my instincts are wrong

please update soon ...

Thanks for liking the updates 😊 BUT NO LOL the FF is not ending in 2/3 parts, it still has a lot of time for that to happen.

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Aishu

@Ish_Speaks

Rocker

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Posted: 11 years ago

#589

Unress in pg 83

Sorry for late Comment...

Do give a look

Waiting for 2morow Night

And about Suggestions

I don't have anything particular to say ..

I just need Khan family to go on Family trip...