||~ The Sunshine of My life #4 AsYa FF ~||Part37 PG130 15/06/14 - Page 53

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Posted: 11 years ago
wowww...I liked this surprise
its awesome as usual...
asad linking dots n i want 2 know who's that bloody person behind all this
Zoya sensed his fears n their convo is so sweet especially back massage by Mr.AAK n asad wants 2 know when she fell in love with him..how romantic 😳
blowing air on her face .that part is damn cute.

And he didn't take a minute to answer it," When I almost lost you.." he said, his voice hoarse. "When life got sucked out of me thinking I had lost you, when I saw you bleeding, pale and worn, so unlike yourself..It was then that I realized how much your meant to me. And that the concern, the urge to spend more time with you, the need for your guidance in every step of my life, and everything that I called friendship was love...this amazing I totally loved it

"I want to Zoya, I want you to know everything about me, I want you to know all of me.. I guess I would be a better man if I can see myself through your eyes," he said smiling his shy smile...awww that's y I love this man

n they both slept on same bed...yay 😳

I know you can, but I can't, so I need to lean on you," he replied amusingly...this sooo cute

n asad waking up aanu is cuteness overloaded n that group hug...hayyee
so Bu n Mi bigading aanU...sigh I want 2 b aanu right now

soo Zoya is gng back 2 KV forever...yippee.. n romance on d way.. Tuesday come soon
n pls make her call him as asad only... show me tho v never got 2 hear that...only once she called him
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Ankita.M


Thanks so much Mrin, I am so glad you liked it.. I put my heart into it, especially when its romance 😆 So so glad you liked it.


LOVED! ❤️
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: tanu3579

beautiful...

even i loved the ease between asad n zoya... the way asad seems to b behving just himself.. nt bound by any past present or future ... whn he is with zoya.. :) :)

dilshaad steals it fr me everytime fr being such a understanding... n perceptive mom tht she is.. :) :)

najma is a darling... cute tamatar :) :)

n aanu... tht little angel... she really is a darling... n yes aanu.. no matter wht bu says... mi has all the rt to spoil u... :) :)
n sweety .. always team up with mi... it is soo soo soo much more fun :) :)


loved the way they r trying to understand each other n helping hte other do the same too... the way they try to find out abt each others feelings... origin n reasons... i think such open conversation lays a strong foundation fr any relationship... n hence i really enjoyed reading it.. :) :)



Thanks a ton Tanu 🤗 your an amazing read, It skipped my mind to mention you in the beginning of my other story, but I genuinely do await your response and concern.

Thanks so much for liking the update 😊 their relation is going to grow with each update.
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: p_s05

I'm punctual! 😛

KKR! Okay, just so we get an update on Tuesday. 😆


Liked the concern at the beginning and the teasing that followed. Mr Khan isn't able to resist her expressions. ☺️


"And he didn't take a minute to answer it," When I almost lost you.." he said, his voice hoarse. "When life got sucked out of me thinking I had lost you, when I saw you bleeding, pale and worn, so unlike yourself..It was then that I realized how much your meant to me. And that the concern, the urge to spend more time with you, the need for your guidance in every step of my life, and everything that I called friendship was love.." he said emotionally, his voice thick."


Loved the confession, of the first realization.


"I saw you," Zoya whispered," I saw you and Aahana when I shut my eyes that day.."


Dialogues and scenes I loved and that were outstanding:


"For me, everything is about you Zoya..." *sigh*


"You don't have to ever, you don't need to tell me anything if you don't want to.."


An understanding partner! 👏


"I want to Zoya, I want you to know everything about me, I want you to know all of me.. I guess I would be a better man if I can see myself through your eyes,"


This guys is just amazing! 👏


"Hey!" he whispered and cuddled her," Please don't cry, I don't like it. And I never know what to say to stop making you cry.."


"The next moment she felt Asad blowing air on her gently and she giggled, "Like this.. she loves it.." he said and looked back at a sleeping Aahana once before turning to Zoya.

"I love it too," she divulged.


"Really? That's good.. I know how to cajole you too now when you start crying," he chuckled."


That was damn cute. ❤️



Adoration, devotion kind of love. - Unadulterated!



""You said last night, that you thought that you didn't know what you saw in my eyes that day, love or pity. It wasn't pity, it can never be. It was love, admiration and respect...For you, for your struggles, for what you're made of. I can only be proud of you Zoya, and these scars on you are nothing to be shameful off. For me they'll always be a matter of pride, and I want them to be the same for you. From today, you don't need to hide them, did you hear me?" Asad demanded, explaining as if she were a child."


Endearing! ⭐️

"Asad smiled at her and repeated the same making her yell and then gently open her eyes. The sudden light made her scrunch her eyes. Asad laughed and picked her up, letting her hide her face in his shirt. Kissing the crown of her head he whispered," Good Morning Aanu," and she just sighed and kept sleeping on his shoulder. He held her down and stared at her. He couldn't and wouldn't be able to explain anyone how scared her was of losing her. And that fear had been rekindled after yesterday. He bought her closer and kissed her eyes. Her eyes flickered open and she smiled at her father."


Dad and baby are always charming! 😎


"Zoya just looked at him dismissingly and turned her attention back to Aahana who was seated in her lap and playing with her fingers. After she was bored she began fiddling with the bandage on her left arm, which alerted Asad instantly."


""Let her be Asad," she called out, unable to see Aahana cry."


""Ab kaun bigaad raha hai meri beti ko.."


"Woh sirf aapki beti nahi hai Asad, she is mine too, aur aapne ek saal bahut bigaad liya, now let me do it too.." she said sheepishly making Asad stare at her, and her bond with their daughter."


So is Mom and baby! 😎


Adore the over-protectiveness and concern that's always present within the both of them, especially Asad. 😃


Walking her to the bathroom, assisting her wash her face, and holding up her hair, was touching ❤️ - Are there gentlemen like him in realism... I hope I find my AAK. 😛



The entire family together was a sweet scene. - A perfect family! 😃


I think I quoted half the chapter. 😉


Hey hey.. a comment from you makes my day 🤗 I am so glad you liked the update.

I just went by the flow, because even though I have a planned simple story, the romance is never planned, it just comes with the flow.

The moments were the kind of romance I love.

Any comment from you is welcome 😆
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: SleepingBeauty.

Omg im soo upset with you. You told me u werent updating aaj so I didnt stalk this :( And I am again commenting sooo late :(

But eekss I love their romance and I absolutely adore the ami daughter moments! The care and love each character has for each other is soo :')

Hope we get an update on tueaday!! LOOL


SORRY I forgot to tell you :( I got busy with the match


BUT YES BECAUSE they won, you guys sure do 😆
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: kajenilious

Omg d update was
awsm 😛
beautiful 😛
cute 😛 😳
lvly 😃
Rmntic 😉
lvd d way zoya cnfsd about ayesha tat
reveals hw sweet she was ⭐️
asad masagd hr bck 😳
Dey slept togthr witout hesitations 👏
lvd d way zoya says tat she wil b cmfrtble wit hm 😳
asad make hr wash hr face by hldng hr hair tat was my favv 👏
lvd hw asad makes wakeup ahana 😃
oh lvd d part where ahana cute litle antics wit hr mum
whch may trouble zoe bt she makes hr wat she wants tat was so sweet 👏
pls update tuesday pls pls pls


I am so glad you liked the update. Asad is very expressive when he wants to be 😊 there'll be more romance 😳
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Niya_789

KKR won so another update na ??😛


Tuesday? yeap 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: SimplySmile


I love how the understanding between AsYa has gone up a whole new level,

Its so cute whenever Aahana starts to cry when shes not with Zoya,

I hope therre are more scenes with Asad Zoya and their little angel, its adorable,

I like how the two manage to clear away any insecurities

The Protective Ahmed Khan as always is cute

The update was great as always looking forward to Ch. 35😃


Thanks so much 😊

Of course .. the story is about the three of them, so there will be more of them surely 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: sweet4shehzadi

yay update mil gaya

awesome
amazing
fantastic
brilliant
wonderful
adorable
cute
emotional
and list goes on
beautifully written 👍🏼
asad & zoya conversation
i love it
continue soon😉
and for pm




Thanks so much... so glad you liked it 😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
Look forward to the update on Tuesday, more romance. 😉

Congratulations! 🥳
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HAHA YESSS the win has made me very happy 😆 so update on the way.

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