||~ The Sunshine of My life #4 AsYa FF ~||Part37 PG130 15/06/14

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vinita459

@vinita459

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Posted: 11 years ago

#541

Such a cute chapter Ankita:)
Totally loved it.
Love AsYa scene in the hospital 😳
Both were curious to know about other's feeling when they fell in love:)
Love zoya and aahana's bonding
Keep it up Ankie:)
Looking forward to upcoming AsYa romance 😳

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-Astrid-

@-Astrid-

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Posted: 11 years ago

#542

I somehow missed commenting on the last chapter...so here's a collective comment for both the chapters😃...

The confession...it was everything I wanted it to be😳...may be I was the only one who never wanted their confession to be hurried...Asad had a past and I wanted him to take quite a lot of time to come out of the shell he had confined himself into since so many years...also I wanted him to fight with his own feelings and try not to acknowledge them...that's exactly what you gave me...it happened only when it became inevitable...all these made the confession absolutely PERRFECT...beautifully penned😳...and our little bundle of sunshine Aanu and her antics just added to the beauty

Hospital romance...I was expecting a few long eye-locks but seems like the pent-up emotions found a better way through words😳...their moments of realisation...loved their sensitivity and understanding towards each other...Asad will talk about Ayesha😳...finally😃...I've always loved Ayesha and I'm eager to learn about Asad's true feelings for her😳...update soon😃

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Heena

@aarzoo50

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Posted: 11 years ago

#543

beautiful update...
loved it...
aaww the heart to heart talk was awesome... with cute bickerings in between...
asad vl share everything abt his lyf... regarding ayesha but not now...
i loved the blowing of air wala scene most...
maa beti ek jese...
all sorted out for now...

KKR won... waiting for tuesday ki update treat...

Edited by aarzoo50 - 11 years ago

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fatima30

@fatima30

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Posted: 11 years ago

#544

Hiii I totally love your story and you write so beautifully...if possible it would be nice to see asad seeking zoyas father...and it would be lovely to have asya wedding

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nilusoni

@nilusoni

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Posted: 11 years ago

#545

Wow lovely part
asya talk is good
sorry for late commenting
and happy that kkr won ipl that means update on tuesday
thanx for pm
do pm me for next part
continue soon

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DarkPhoenix93

@DarkPhoenix93

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Posted: 11 years ago

#546

A little cheesy but I love it! When will they get married? Soon?

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DarkPhoenix93

@DarkPhoenix93

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Posted: 11 years ago

#547

A little cheesy but I love it! When will they be getting married? Soon?

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sona_naksh

@sona_naksh

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Posted: 11 years ago

#548

so now hopefully v ll b getting update on tue 😳

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aYASHIKA

@aYASHIKA

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Posted: 11 years ago

#549

I m loving the way story is progressing. ...
I want more asya romance and more zoya and aahana moments. ..I cant get enough of that...
I remember i said it before...i want to see some ayaan and zoya scene...
If u are able to include them than can u plzz