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Dazzler

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Posted: 11 years ago

#471

Originally posted by: -Crazy4AsYa-
nice update...
waiting for next...
continue soon

thanks a lot...m glad u liked the update😊

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Dazzler

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Posted: 11 years ago

#472

Originally posted by: AMMY12
awsm update.
Superb one.
Luvd it.
Cont asap
Thanx 4 d pm.
Waiting 4 d nxt part.
T.c.

thanks a lot m glad u enjoyed the update😊

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Dazzler

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Posted: 11 years ago

#473

Originally posted by: life4me
Awesome. Continue soon please.

thank u😃

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Dazzler

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Posted: 11 years ago

#474

Originally posted by: princeegoyal
awesome

thanks😊

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Dazzler

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Posted: 11 years ago

#475

Originally posted by: mishtypiya
nice..

thanks😊

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Anitha

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Stunner

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Posted: 11 years ago

#476

Originally posted by: -StarsLinedUp-

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Sweetheart..thanks for such a lovely comment..it was the first one I read this morning n it made me smile...thanks for that...now for the update...I am glad u liked it..I know it was not the usual...but worry not she will recall things soon enough..n hopefully it will be liked...
Asad being a gentleman..well I guess it was the right thing to do...

O and thank u for appreciating my story and for sayin that I deserve more than 100 likes...I am flattered...

Will update soon😉

U always welcome buddy.
its my pleasure to comment in this beautiful FF.
It means a lot to me.😳
Really😃 now i desperately want the next part soon no doubt surely we will like it..❤️
Asad is a gentleman hope i'll get some1 like him soon in my life😆
Its so sweet of u 🤗
Ps: plz update once upon a time soon

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Dazzler

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Posted: 11 years ago

#477

Originally posted by: Surish

thanks😊

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Dazzler

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Posted: 11 years ago

#478

Originally posted by: DevikaRavish
Hey Aashna... you were 100% correct... This was totally unexpected...I had imagined Zoya to wake up and have a fight with Asad for getting her to his room.. but this was more than amazing...A TRUE GENTLEMAN in your words...😊

I loved the way Asad had given all the instructions to the hotel staff to get her luggage transferred and also instructed not to let her know about all that happened previous night... I loved this fact...😊

and the comment from Henry and one of the other receptionist... the love which they could see in Asad's eyes.. amazing...Beautifully written...👏👏👏

He had taken care of her medication as well.. how thoughtful.. I love this Asad more now...😊

So Ayaan and Asad have a plan and there is also an abandoned house in Newyork which he is using.. Now what is the excitement Rihan is speaking about ?? Is that another attempt to murder Zoya ?? I know you have mentioned that culprit works alone but co-incidentally something happens which points to both Rihan and Shahid... So eager to know the culprit...

Cool Ayaan found out that Najma had got to know about something about this culprit which made him murder her.. Asad now is the protector for Zoya and he will surely do it ... Good to know that her thooughts are disturbing him...

and the final scene their meeting in office.. and she felt she got back what she had lost and found peace in her heart.. great...

When Zoya questioned Henry about her dress previous night.. he mentioning that she must have purchased something from hotel stores.. 🤣 ..

I wonder how she will react after she knows that it was his room and his clothes ??😉

Take care Aashna.. Hoping to read the next update soon...

res..BRB M back...Devika...u and ur lond..wonderful comments...wat can I say about them...its truly flattering and wonderful to read them and respond to them...

So first...the whole next day situation...I am glad..that my unexpected was liked by u...I like the fact that Asad being a gentlman was the highlight..I mean wat else would a good guy do with a married gal??? of course he will maintain distance and try and help out naa...but worry not I will give u ur fight and Zoya's panic..😆

Even Asad as of now has started to feel some pull but then again she is married and not available...so ofcourse he's going to try and bury those new emotions...

Rihaan...is planning on Zoya's conert night and dinner...not killing her...so no malice there...

And as for Asad and Ayaan...they are very close to Abdul..and soon he will realise he's in trouble..

The office scene was for opening some doors of acknowledgement...For Asad it was acknowleding the night..and for Zoya it was remembering that night...next update will touch on the 2 parts...

So gal keep reading...more craziness is on its way...ab to interval ke nazdik aa rahi hai story...something big will happen by ch15..😉

PS...I will touch on her realising that she was wearing her clothes..n Ch 14b😛

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Dazzler

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Posted: 11 years ago

#479

Originally posted by: Perfectionist2
Res

its here for wen u unres😉

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Dazzler

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Posted: 11 years ago

#480

Originally posted by: Kinjal Babaria
Wow Aashna thank you for the update😊😊
Loved how asad handled the whole situation😳👏

It Shows how much he cares for zoya😳😳😊

Loved the little asad-zoya moment in their office 😃😊

Hope you get your desired likes...I wanna read the next part desperately 😆

Thanks for pm :)

Thanks a lot gal...I am glad this update was liked...glad that u enjoyed Asad's way of handling things...and the office moment was there to give some room for Zoya to realize what happened..

I hope so to..as for my likes..n worry not...will update soon😉