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Posted: 11 years ago

#451

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DevikaRavish

@DevikaRavish

Dazzler

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Posted: 11 years ago

#452

Hey Aashna... you were 100% correct... This was totally unexpected...I had imagined Zoya to wake up and have a fight with Asad for getting her to his room.. but this was more than amazing...A TRUE GENTLEMAN in your words...😊

I loved the way Asad had given all the instructions to the hotel staff to get her luggage transferred and also instructed not to let her know about all that happened previous night... I loved this fact...😊

and the comment from Henry and one of the other receptionist... the love which they could see in Asad's eyes.. amazing...Beautifully written...👏👏👏

He had taken care of her medication as well.. how thoughtful.. I love this Asad more now...😊

So Ayaan and Asad have a plan and there is also an abandoned house in Newyork which he is using.. Now what is the excitement Rihan is speaking about ?? Is that another attempt to murder Zoya ?? I know you have mentioned that culprit works alone but co-incidentally something happens which points to both Rihan and Shahid... So eager to know the culprit...

Cool Ayaan found out that Najma had got to know about something about this culprit which made him murder her.. Asad now is the protector for Zoya and he will surely do it ... Good to know that her thooughts are disturbing him...

and the final scene their meeting in office.. and she felt she got back what she had lost and found peace in her heart.. great...

When Zoya questioned Henry about her dress previous night.. he mentioning that she must have purchased something from hotel stores.. 🤣 ..

I wonder how she will react after she knows that it was his room and his clothes ??😉

Take care Aashna.. Hoping to read the next update soon...

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potternerd

@potternerd

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Posted: 11 years ago

#453

Wow Aashna thank you for the update😊😊

Loved how asad handled the whole situation😳👏

It Shows how much he cares for zoya😳😳😊

Loved the little asad-zoya moment in their office 😃😊

Hope you get your desired likes...I wanna read the next part desperately 😆

Thanks for pm :)

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Asif

@asifiqbalsh

Rocker

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Posted: 11 years ago

#454

Awesome update
Asad arranged everything for zoya before leaving
She didn't remember anything
The moment they saw each other in office, zoya felt peace
Asad made his mind & that is to save zoya
When will u tell us who the culprit is
Plz continue soon
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Alone111

@Alone111

Sparkler

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Posted: 11 years ago

#455

Huh

Zoya doesn't knw anthng wht hppnd before nt...
Ohooo
Well managed by Mr.khan..

Nd wht was that
Wht rehaan planed for her
Maarne na ??????

Superb prt
I loved ittt

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Gourav

@Shubh007

Rocker

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Posted: 11 years ago

#456

Awesome...👏

Amazing...😃

Superb...👍🏼

Just love it...🤗

Update nxt part soon...😊

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Heena

@aarzoo50

Inactive

Posted: 11 years ago

#457

awesome one aashna...
well i was expecting an early morning bawaal with zoya creating the ruckus... giving asad left n right n what not... but turned it into an exceptional situation. loved it
asad is so cute... took care of everything so that zoya is not bothered much...
Henry's wish... "I wish whatever's between
them moves out of their way soon
enough"... well i wish same too
but zoya is still heavy headed... frustrated n nt convinced with wt hotel staff said... vn vl she come to kno ...
ayaan has got some leads there...
asad is concerned abt zoyas safety n vl make sure she stays safe... but reasons he gives himself... he's nt sure...
now this rehaan... saying tomorrow best night... mujhe shak hai... another attack on zoya... may be...
continue soon aashna...

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961111

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Posted: 11 years ago

#458

Hey Ms. Dazzler...😳

Congrats once again... 🥳

i am so late this time

i generally don't come online at night..so i missed the first page 😒😆

anyway, coming to the update...😛

yeah...it was actually unpredictable...

here i was building hopes to read about Zoya's reaction when she realizes that she is in Asad's clothes

but truly speaking, i am glad that you didn't write anything that i was expecting 😳

what you wrote was 1000 times better and more realistic!!!👏👏

great work!! 👍🏼

Zoya would feel extremely ashamed of herself for doing what she did... slow realization in this case will be much better for their relationship 😳

And Asad!!

i am loving him more each day ❤️

what he did was an act of a true gentleman!! 😳

Rihaan is planning to make the night special for her? 😲🤣

Joke of the Millennium that is!! 🤣🤣

beta, tu jakar imli khaa... special cheeze Asad ke liye chod de 🤣🤣

i am really excited to see what Asad does to save Zoya from all this... All this has nothing to do with her.. and he knows that well too...So i am more eager to read the next chapters...

you better update soon!! you have 70+ likes by the way 😉😳

lots of love ❤️

Ankita 😳🤗

Edited by BeYourself - 11 years ago