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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: divram

Res 😆
Oh my god another update !!! 😲😆
That was awesome ... Detailed comment soon...

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Hehehee poor Asad is holding on to his building temper.. he is shocked to see her still drinking laying on his shoulder...😆
Hahahaha she so in her dreamland hearing him call her Zoya... OH MY GOD!!! she is crazy she is flashing?? Asad must be going crazy seeing all this...😆
Poor Zoya slowly let him know of her mom and her fears..😊.👏 He is turning soft to her..
Trying to get this dress off of me...I am hot...and I need to take off my bra...I cant stand being in a bra for long...it bothers me..My gals need some air to breathe... Too much information Ms Farooqi, please keep it to yourself... hahahahaaa Asad is in big trouble now...🤣☺️
Asad was beyond repair now, her image was embedded in his eyes.It took extreme amounts of self control for Asad to contain his thoughts. This was not happening.NO this couldn't happen...Why the hell was this happening... no words hehehee🤣😳
she is full on flirting with him... poor guy controlling so many things not only his anger😆..
them having dinner.. and Asad getting to know all about her likes and dislikes seems like an unintentional dinner date..😳😊
she flirting like never before.. wonder how she would react when she remembers all this after coming back to sense..😆
What Mr khan..you have a killer body...I mean those abs...those pecks...the path to yout happy trail... WOW...I bet you are good in bed...she smiled.. hahahahaahaaa you surely get a chance to confirm that later in future Zoya..😆🤣
awww he forgot that he had to find being lost in thoughts... oh no. she feels the situation similar to her previous nightmare and is getting scared... 😲
What took you so long she said between sobs...Don't you know I've been waiting for you??? I was so scared, so alone...why did you make me wait...
I am sorry...I didn't know you were waiting..Had I know I would have come sooner...her tried pacifyin her...caresseing her head and trying to calm her down... These lines make me feel its not just about the game.. but also for the delay in coming into each other's life😳😃.. or am I reading too much into the line..😕
they are so cute..
So now that we have a lead, can I say that the next update is gonna be blasting ...👏😃

beautifully scripted.. the fun and flirty part was good, but you also showed her reasons for adapting the 'bad girl avatar' really well...👏


RES...ooo a long update😉
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: BeYourself

I had my teeth out all the time while reading it 😆😆


i enjoyed the chapter thoroughly!!!

i wonder how is Zoya going to react when she actually sees herself in Asad's clothes in the morning 😉

though it was a chapter full of fun, i loved the realizations that Asad had!!!

He saw a new Zoya Farooqui, a completely different one whom he had been seeing all this while...
Zoya's fear and her lost faith in love was very beautifully written and expressed... 👏

and the text at the end!!!! Aaah!!! another new thing for me to think on!!! 😉😉

lovely update...

and now, i guess i will be going to your previous thread to make it reach up to 120 pages 😉😆


res...will get to ur comment soon...😛
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: grad2011

congrats on new thread!!!

awesome update :)


thanks a lot😊
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Kinjal Babaria

😳Congratulations for the new thread 😊😊

Drunk zoya was hilarious😆 blowing away asad's mind 😃
A superb read 😊
Loved that it was focused only on asad-zoya 😳 (Was much needed😉😳)
Thank you for updating before getting desired likes/comments
And thanks for pm too


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Posted: 11 years ago
Hello 😆... How are you???
Are you gonna update?? 😳
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Posted: 11 years ago

thank u😊
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: divram

Hello 😆... How are you???

Are you gonna update?? 😳


not today..this is just me waking up...m out of the city..so once I get mack to work tomm I will write it up...😉
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: indu333

congrats for the new thread...

update was outstanding,you are an amazing writer...
drunk zoya was funny...
you wrote the emotional part very well,,it touched my heart...😭
now asad got to know different side of zoya...
excited to read zoya's reaction in the next morning...😆
cant wait for next update,,,,,update sooon...


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Posted: 11 years ago

thank u as well😊
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Amin21

Congrats for the new thread

Awesome update got what I was waiting for to be the way .
Love it
Waiting for upcoming


thanks a lot gal..m glad u liked reading the update n it was wat u expected..😊

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