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shreya mehra

@shreya11mehra

Stunner

Posted: 11 years ago

#101

Originally posted by: maha2012
n asad should be the one grabbing her n giving a passionate kissy 😳

Hayyeee...

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-StarsLinedUp-

@-StarsLinedUp-

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#102

Hey everyone..please dont hate me...but I'll be taking a week off from writing.

Reasons u ask...😳

Nothing major...just some much needed time allocation to personal agendas...and some relaxation of the oversaturated brain...🤪

I have been too hyper active mentally so..before I burn myself out..its better I take some time to cool down...and come back in a week and give you some wonderful upadates...

Other than that..I also need some time to work both my stories out in my head..so I get a better direction...

So bear with me for a week...and I'll be back in no time..

In the meanwhile...feel free to ask me anything that's on your mind...and I'll gladly respond...

Hope to catch ya guys soon...😉

Thanks a lot for being a peach and being so understanding...🤗

Now I am gonna go..start reading some books..watching some movies..and do a lot of brain storming...😉 All in the name of inspiration😃

Cheers!!!❤️

Edited by -StarsLinedUp- - 11 years ago

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Alone111

@Alone111

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#103

O M g
one week..
*sign*
ll be waiting

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Divya.S.R

@Divya.S.R

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#104

1 week?? you mean 7 days?? 168 hours?? 10,080 mins?? 604,800 seconds??😲😲😭

*sigh* ok I guess...

but will we get a back to back update😃?? 😃😆 Too much huh?? can't help it.. addicted to this story..

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DevikaRavish

@DevikaRavish

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#105

Aashna.. Take your time.. I was checking out for your update today as you promised.. but that is fine.. Am sure you will come back with a rocking update.. 😊

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Heena

@aarzoo50

Inactive

Posted: 11 years ago

#106

20 may. tak. no update... mera kya hoga till then... jaldi aane ki try krna plz

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Young And Horny!

@Perfectionist2

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#107

Aashna Ma'am

I read your latest chapter love the drunk Zoya.

Oh god lord but she is something eh?

Flashing! Aa-Ah! Yeah she so complex cos she lost her mum is it.

Anyhow i loved the sexual tease and I loved how it moved further a step in a weird kind of but intimate way. Loved how he promised and she was scared. Poor Zoya I felt for her when she said i was waiting for you.

Shows a vulnerable and injured side of her otherwise hard overbearing Shield.

If Zoya gets to Asad and imprints a mark, so does Asad do to her.

I would have loved if she said something more of the lines to Asad about her relationship with Rihan, Asad just let it go I would have liked him oddly quizzical to know more at the same time not portray it loud and confirm it.

The mystery that is running alone side is also gripping, a very layers story telling at it's best.

I didn't initially like this story cos i was very prejudiced but when I decided to give it a try without being judgmental about any character, i find them oddly befitting one another.

Yes this is different and somewhere bold and bashful but you are brave to think differently.

You told me earlier that you subdued Zoya and Asad to make the blow soft.

I think you should not. You should go the way you planned.

I am loving this and keep going. People will come along soon.

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Alone111

@Alone111

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#108

Originally posted by: aarzoo50
20 may. tak. no update... mera kya hoga till then... jaldi aane ki try krna plz

main hoon na JEEJU...

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life4me

@life4me

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#109

Ok. Will wait for update.

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rajsmi

@rajsmi

Inactive

Posted: 11 years ago

#110

Read the update now...late perhaps for a reply but wanted to write what I thought about it...

Still confused about what Asad wants from coming and joining the office and Zoya's character seems a lil off :-( Hope its just a facade and she is strong and nice :-)