'AN OFFER YOU JUST CANT REFUSE.' ASYA FF CHAPTER 1 pg/13 9/5/14

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EuphoricDamsel

@EuphoricDamsel

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+ 7

Posted: 11 years ago

#51

Amazing !!..
Is it just me who's feeling this is smwht related to...
-Starslinedup-"s FF ...
Turnaround ...

Or the thought is mutual well I'd love to read a second writers
Thoughts on the same ...

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indu333

@indu333

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Posted: 11 years ago

#52

update was amazing...😊

cont soon and thanku for the pm...

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mooumi

@mooumi

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Posted: 11 years ago

#53

Awesome updt...lvd it...continue soon dear n thnks for d pm 😃

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jas91

@jas91

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#54

Banner & chapter-1 is nice 👏

but what is Zoya & Haider's relation now

I m confused😕

Did Zoya moved on after 10 years leap😲

I thought she loved Asad & broke-up wid him due 2 some majburi

anyways will wait 4 nxt part⭐️

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Simran Bhandary

@pwenCezz_symrun

Inactive

Posted: 11 years ago

#55

reswa
Unreswa!!
Awesome start it was!!
truly amazing!! i have been awed by ur writing skills!!👏
the words nd the way of writing has just amazed me!!
I'm eager to read more nd more now!! do continue soon!!
nd the banner is also too awesome!!😳

Edited by pwenCezz_symrun - 11 years ago

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Simran Bhandary

@pwenCezz_symrun

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Posted: 11 years ago

#56

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kiki

@-waitingforyou-

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#57

i just read the synosis !
and wow !!
nice concept !!
it sounds really interesting !
but zoya's actions of accepting the money is still unclear to me !
looking forward to know what made her leave asad !!
nice begining :)
best wishes dear !

love
-kiki😳

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Alone111

@Alone111

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Posted: 11 years ago

#58

Gud strt..
I loved it..
But short one..
Luking frwrd for nxt chapters..
Continue soon

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kiki

@-waitingforyou-

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#59

read the introduction !!
such vivid descriptions about the whole scenery was mesmerizing !
the whole thing was elegantly and beautifully written !
you are really a talented writer !👏
loved the whole intro !