'AN OFFER YOU JUST CANT REFUSE.' ASYA FF CHAPTER 1 pg/13 9/5/14

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Asif

@asifiqbalsh

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Posted: 11 years ago

#71

Nice concept
Good start
Continue soon
Plz pm me for next update
Thanks

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safa/fuii

@Splash-ASYA

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Posted: 11 years ago

#72

amazing start..
just read it..
couldnt read it before as i am busy with my exams these days
anyway.. plz continue ASAP..
thanxx for the pms..

-fuii-

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CallmeCel

@CallmeCel

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Posted: 11 years ago

#73

just looved it very much. Sorry could not comment earlier as my PC is a little problamatic this days. Please send me the pms and advance sorry if i wont be able to comment on time.

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Linsie

@Linsie

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Posted: 11 years ago

#74

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Linsie

@Linsie

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Posted: 11 years ago

#75

POINTS TO KEEP IN MIND WHILE READING :

1.The story would revolve around not only asya but also their friend circle as they would be playing an imp. role. 👏 👏 GOOD TO KNOW

2. There'll be simultaneous situations. i.e Flashbacks and present will be updated together.
😃

3. The main concept of the story, as I have already mentioned, is from the book 'an offer you cant refuse'. 😃 OK

4. However, the lines, quotes, shayris and situations Will be my own efforts. 👏 GOOD

5. Characters have nothing to do with the original story and are completely my imagination.
👏 OK

6. I would really appreciate your response. Because, as much as I love writing, I need good readers. 👏 WILL DO MY BEST

7. P.Ms will be sent only to those who would like and comment. Please do not expect P.Ms if you don't do either of the two, as it would be my wastage of time.. Sending P.Ms to those who don't even read. 👏

8. There's a leap of ten years in the story. 😲 OK

9. The story will be narrated in all the three ways, Asad's POV, Zoya's POV and 3rd person POV. 👏 OK

10. I declare that this story is solely written by me. I work really hard on it, and would not appreciate having them taken from me without permission. 👏 👏

IF ANYONE TRY TO HARM.. THE STORY ... HMM VERY SERIOUS ISSUE😡 😡