AsYa SS:Forgotten Melody Updated 08/01/2017 pg 103 - Page 26

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Posted: 11 years ago
Asad guilty emotions...

Dilshad can guess... terrible something wrong...

so he did got a clue...

with the ipad... he came there looking

for her... life

giving him second chance...
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Posted: 11 years ago
Such a beautiful update
Asad and his temper
Poor zoya suffered so much
I hope she gives it back to him
I hope she dsnt forgive him easily
Update soonnishhh
And thanx for the dedication🤗
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: marcoe

Such a beautiful update

Asad and his temper
Poor zoya suffered so much
I hope she gives it back to him
I hope she dsnt forgive him easily
Update soonnishhh
And thanx for the dedication🤗


You're welcome my dear 🤗
I agree with you ... Zoya may be pure of heart but her self-respect comes first
so Asad has his work cut out for him, and hopping on his one foot is
just one of the many crazy things he'll have to do 😆
Thank you once again, love you ❤️
Have a splendid week my dear x
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Posted: 11 years ago
Awesome updt dear...Lvd it...3 month of asad's agony superbly depicted... Poor zoyee... N asad feeling so guilty.. I hope zoyee will forgive him...I want my asya together n lovey dovey.. 😳 yearningly waiting fr d next part...continue soon
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Zanutix

MissReadingFaye, treat yourself with a double scoop choco fudge and chocolate sprinkles please. The tab's on me.

HOW do you manage to tug on our heart strings?
WHY do we feel remorseful despite not being AAK?
WHERE did you get such an amazing vocab from? *a bit jealous here*
WHAT are you?!

The amount of guilt Asad had, and the way you described it, I don't think it could've been done better.
They are finally face to face now.
And.. and Zoya fainted? Oh my! No!

Can't wait to know what happens next, please don't leave us hanging!

You are awesome! *gosh I sound like Google Chrome*

Cheers!


Lol I'm on a diet but that treat sounds far too tempting 😆

Well when it comes to emotions, I am an emotional freakazoid lol 😆 in fact I cried in Toy Story 3 when Andy gives his toys away to the little girl lol it was so sad 😆

Vocab lets see ... some of it comes from my uni text books on pathology (I know weird but morosely and saturated , incessantly ... etc occur a billion times in one text book)
... and some from my high school English Language studies and then there is always the trusted thesaurus lol and for me rain just makes me word vomit lol

I always like reading and writing things from the perspective of a character so I think being able to feel what the character feels is an important part of a story but thank you for your compliments 🤗 I just proof read and corrected my mistakes lol and I think I have a lot to learn but thanks my dear. Love, Fatima x
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Posted: 11 years ago
wow loved the update
cant believed asad left for work the next
without apologizing to zoya
he cant work it is haunting him the memories
the words the flashes it cant be buried and forgotten
so finally he realize it was all him he started it he fulfilled
his dreams and let go of all the restrictions and still he wants her
near him and he dont wants her near him he wants her to go away
far away from him be careful what u wish for asad
well mr.asad come home afraid to face zoya he knows she will forgive
him in a heartbeat but he cant forgive himself for what he did and said
but their is no zoya in sight and his family is not telling him when he asked
he i getting irritated and angry at how zoya can ignore him after everything😆😆😆
she is GONE asad GONE and the anger really and throwing things 😡werent u
the one that asked her to go from u ur life ur house ur country.
oh it us funny dilshad wants to know y her son is so angry at zoya what did she do
loved how he almost let his feeling slip...oh she scattered his life he was so consumed
in fixing it not consumed in her 😆😉so sad asd that she didnt say bye to u
dilshad intuition is right about asad and she just dont know what to do
oh asad is is just day 1 and such self loathing u r ready to run after her ...run run as fast as u can
the tortured soul and heart if asad is so😭sad he missed he so much
he have broken her completely all her trust she had in him he has shattered
loved her shayri and words that he had to say for he to appear...he should have tried it
he wants to wake up from this bad dream and find her in the guest room,her room,his home in her
rightful place 😭😭
3mths 3 mths asad suffered in zoya memory wow sleeping in her room calling her and never
reaching her... His mother was no stranger to this; she saw her son's existent shrivelled to pieces missing zoya 😭😭
who is the one person I love and hate the most ...Jahapanah Six Packs😃(I always wonder this answer on the show bcuz I could have swore he did enter that in the show)
awww he have a pic of them in his wallet and he realizes a little too late that his misfit is a perfect fit
for his family👍🏼
omg omg omg an email comes to zoya from nargis the friend house who she is staying and asad reads it guess he figure out the password 😆😆
so he learns she is still in bhopal and she is pregnant no wonder the windows got broken
yay he is off to find her no time to waste time to recify his mistakes👏👏👏
dilshads promise to get all her answers from both of them🤔
so the journey starts to find zoya he knows where he is going but not exactly
which house and his thoughts on being with zoya and giving her all the happiness
at her feet or as he said give her the world on a silver platter caused him nearly a collision
so allah smiled on asad and put his car in front of zoya house 😆
just imagine his surprise seeing her in front of him he had to touch her to see if she was real
zoya coudnt believed he was in front of her that she lost conciousness
oh zoya dont leave asad he cant live without u
continue soon




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Posted: 11 years ago
amazing update...
Asad's state was so well described...luvd it...
update soon...thnx fr pm...
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Posted: 11 years ago
Awesome update
Asad three months time was beautifully written
He told dilshad in pieces after checked her email
Dilshad wants to tell him abt tanveer but he cut it off
Zoya unconscious hope everything will be fine
Continue soon
Thanks for long update & pm
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Posted: 11 years ago
awesome
u explained every emotion that i was actually picturising every thing in front of me
tnks 4 pm
cont soon

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