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fanraya

@fanraya

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#741

Wow, really beautiful, loved Dilshad and Asad conversation, finally Asad realized his love, I really hope he knows Zoe is madly in love with him, hopefully Zoya is ot going t egret hurt again.please get these two lovers together soon, eagerly waiting for the next part..

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sanasahel

@sanasahel

Inactive

Posted: 11 years ago

#742

Nice update. Asad confessed, Zoya confessed But both to Dilshad...

hmmm wait kare aur kya kare 😊

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Aishu

@Ish_Speaks

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#743

I loved it

Completely flawless...

Yeh asad kitna zidda hai

Zoya se bhi zyaada

And Where did zoya went ??

Continue soon

Thanks for pm

Pm me for next work ...

Edited by Aishwa09 - 11 years ago

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jas91

@jas91

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#744

res

unres

Beautifully penned part👏

It was just amazing⭐️

So Asad has feelings 4 Zoya🥳

but he is not voicing them cuz he thinks she deserves better than him

he is also right from his Pov😒

but he doesn't know Zoya too loves him❤️

I loved Dillu momma she made him admit that he loves Zoya🤗

but stubern Asad is not ready 2 give up😡

Zoya is not in d house😲

has she listened Dillu- Asad's conversation😕

mayb yes that's why she left d house

I m so excited 4 d nxt part😆

continue soon

I missed Anu in this part. Hope 2 see her in nxt part😃

Edited by jas91 - 11 years ago

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-Anku-

@-Anku-

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#745

Originally posted by: tanu3579

naa... its all ur writing... there r a few stories whr i feel as connected... n this one is such a story...
i feel too much fr zoya here specifically... dont knw y...
bt i just feel very connected to her..

i wish asad soon realises tht he is blessed, beyond the worldly limits to hv someone like zoya to love him..

she truely.. truely ... a god-send-angel... who has only been giving never sought / askd fr anythg in return... :)

n the way u write it... it flows... almost draws the entire thg infront of me... as if its a running show i m watching 😉

He realizes he is blessed, and values it too, but he thinks its selfish to only think about himself and Aahana and he doesn't know Zoya's feelings yet, so naturally he's bound to think that way.

Zoya will get everything she's ever desired and even more, just very little time left for it.

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antiquegold

@antiquegold

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#746

I loved asads realization of love! Thanks for this update ankie. A shout out to you for the courage, intensity and honesty you put into every update. You have a lot of material now. Why not blog it on tumblr or wordpress? Pm us with your link, and ?i am sure it will go viral! This forum is a smoking ruin. I am only here for you and ankie! Even saima has stopped updating! HugS! Take care!

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-Anku-

@-Anku-

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#747

Originally posted by: Oldestfan
I loved asads realization of love! Thanks for this update ankie. A shout out to you for the courage, intensity and honesty you put into every update. You have a lot of material now. Why not blog it on tumblr or wordpress? Pm us with your link, and ?i am sure it will go viral! This forum is a smoking ruin. I am only here for you and ankie! Even saima has stopped updating! HugS! Take care!

Thanks so much for your comments, you comment here less but I keep waiting for you to 😆 I would love to do what you suggested. But here at least I have comments coming, not sure what response I would get on wordpress, plus its lot of work too. But I'll surely do it at one point.😊

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Alone111

@Alone111

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#748

Aaahh
he confessed...
Ofcourse in front of dillu..
But he did..
Yipppeee

loved it

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sona_naksh

@sona_naksh

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#749

wowww...so much happened in dis update ...n atleast asad confessed to himself n dilshad ...
i m luving it more n more as d story is progressing ...
update soon plzzz .
thnx for pm

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tanu3579

@tanu3579

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#750

so finally he does realise n accept too...

dilshaad was amazing... only she cud mk him speak it out loud..

i can understand his thot too though...

he wud definiltely b thinking tht zoya deserves better... tht he has too much baggage n responsibilities which might burden her...

i wish he gets to knw soon tht zoya is already in love with him, n all the responsibilites tht come along with him :)

tht she is already a mother to ahana.. she can not change tht nw..

n zoya... she must b feeling bad.. as if she got everythg, n then lost it too..

n i wonder whr has she gone nw... she does knw tht someone might b trying to harm her, i hope she hasnt stepped out, n definitely nt into some danger...

though i guess this wud bring bak the fear of losing her in asad... n mayb tht helps him :) :)