Mukkandar ka khel: asya FS part 4 on pg 28 - Page 5

Originally posted by: Surish

Originally posted by: -Crazy4AsYa-

i love ur concept...it's a better way to show zoyaan than that crap accidental nikah !!!
well done...
continue soon

Originally posted by: anopama

wow
really asad got pic of zoya and ayaan with
molvi saab so it look like she ran away to marry
ayan.
hated this track on QH
continue

Originally posted by: aishw09

I loved it 😊

Continue soon

and i am not saying anything particular abt the story

because i am kinda shocked after reading the last 2 lines of the story 😲

Waiting to see asad's reaction

i guess this is tanveer's chaal 😡

and continue soon

thanks for pm

pm me for next update

And remember one thing I HATE zoyaan track ...😡

Originally posted by: RAJLUVASYA

Awesome start di. Concept is amazing. U have to continue it aur woh v jaldi. But di 1 req pls dont make mu btwn asya. I m fed up with this mu track. I hope asya listen to zoya and dont jump into a conclusion. And both asya together solve this problem. But if asad jump into conclusion that zoya and ayan r married then i want zoya slap asad and went to new york. Thanks for pm. Continue soonish. Sorry for ranting

Originally posted by: RAJLUVASYA

not only u dear. We all including Uma di hate zoyan track

Originally posted by: angel_juhi04

Awesome Update Uma di👏😊

I also wanted sumthn to happen like dis

Billi Bitch😡

Please don't show Asad doubting, getn angry n manhandling Zoya😡

How can he even doubt her after so much?

Zoya thought Asad dat he f**ked Billi n Asad sud think abt dat

I don't want Asad to act stupid like always n Zoya as dumb n only crying🥱

Update soon n PM me😃

Originally posted by: RAJLUVASYA

agree with u juhi di. I m fed up with asad doubting and manhandling zoya. If asad again jump into conclusion then i want zoya went to ny for forever

Originally posted by: angel_juhi04

I don't know y Gul shows manhandling as okay n making us to believe dat u vl fall in love wid d same guy. As I writing in my 3rd FF dat Asad is suffering all d insults n taunts but many r not able to accept it but I can't step back. They want me to show Zoya forgive Asad soon which is not possible cuz they r not even friends n love vl come in a long way. They go crazy over Asad calling him hot n possessive even if he insults, manhandles, slaps n even rapes Zoya in many stories. But still they expect Zoya to forgive him soon. They expect Asad to learn d truth n stop being bad bad to Zoya. My question is dat is it neccesary to be evil wen sum1 does bad to u or u believe them doing bad to u? Is it necessary to take revenge in an awful way. In Obliterate, people want Asad n Zoya but I can't even think abt it. I prefer Ali n Zoya while Asad sud go n rot in hell wid his dear Tanu. In my story, Asad is supposed to regret each n every word n statement he said to Zoya n dats wat is happening. D story is supposed to be story between 2 rivals who hv their different supporters. AsYa romance vl start only after divorce track. I am even rushing d story a little bit to make Asad fall in a grave problem due to Tanveer. Cumn to dis story, if Asad doubts Zoya now then he is not worthy of trusting Zoya ever. How can he come to conclusions by just seeing a photo? Due to Asad, Akram kidnapped Zoya n forced her to marry him. Due to Asad, Tanveer tried to kill Zoya many times. So, Asad use his brain dis time.

Originally posted by: Az07

So true Juhi In real life this is not possible

In my story forced marriage also everyone wants zoya to forgive asad soon because he is regretting

No one is seeing zoya As a normal girl & how a normal person reacts in that situation

Most shocking thing is 75% are of women population in it

I think they are loving KSG or rv more than the character asad