Mukkandar ka khel: asya FS part 4 on pg 28

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KReyAS

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Posted: 11 years ago

#21

awsom strt dear loved it

cont soon thnx fr pm

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Ankita Grover

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Posted: 11 years ago

#22

awesome start

would love to read ahead conti soon

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anopama

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Posted: 11 years ago

#23

wow
really asad got pic of zoya and ayaan with
molvi saab so it look like she ran away to marry
ayan.
hated this track on QH
continue

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Aishu

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Posted: 11 years ago

#24

I loved it 😊

Continue soon

and i am not saying anything particular abt the story

because i am kinda shocked after reading the last 2 lines of the story 😲

Waiting to see asad's reaction

i guess this is tanveer's chaal 😡

and continue soon

thanks for pm

pm me for next update

And remember one thing I HATE zoyaan track ...😡

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jazsidhu

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Posted: 11 years ago

#25

hey tis is very interesting...

luv it...

thx fr the pm n do pm me for the next part...

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RAJ

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Posted: 11 years ago

#26

Awesome start di. Concept is amazing. U have to continue it aur woh v jaldi. But di 1 req pls dont make mu btwn asya. I m fed up with this mu track. I hope asya listen to zoya and dont jump into a conclusion. And both asya together solve this problem. But if asad jump into conclusion that zoya and ayan r married then i want zoya slap asad and went to new york. Thanks for pm. Continue soonish. Sorry for ranting

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RAJ

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Posted: 11 years ago

#27

Originally posted by: aishw09
I loved it 😊

Continue soon

and i am not saying anything particular abt the story

because i am kinda shocked after reading the last 2 lines of the story 😲

Waiting to see asad's reaction

i guess this is tanveer's chaal 😡

and continue soon

thanks for pm

pm me for next update

And remember one thing I HATE zoyaan track ...😡

not only u dear. We all including Uma di hate zoyan track

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ChipChipiBhaalu

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Posted: 11 years ago

#28

Awesome Update Uma di👏😊

I also wanted sumthn to happen like dis

Billi Bitch😡

Please don't show Asad doubting, getn angry n manhandling Zoya😡

How can he even doubt her after so much?

Zoya thought Asad dat he f**ked Billi n Asad sud think abt dat

I don't want Asad to act stupid like always n Zoya as dumb n only crying🥱

Update soon n PM me😃

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RAJ

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Posted: 11 years ago

#29

Originally posted by: angel_juhi04
Awesome Update Uma di👏😊
I also wanted sumthn to happen like dis
Billi Bitch😡
Please don't show Asad doubting, getn angry n manhandling Zoya😡
How can he even doubt her after so much?
Zoya thought Asad dat he f**ked Billi n Asad sud think abt dat
I don't want Asad to act stupid like always n Zoya as dumb n only crying🥱
Update soon n PM me😃

agree with u juhi di. I m fed up with asad doubting and manhandling zoya. If asad again jump into conclusion then i want zoya went to ny for forever

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ChipChipiBhaalu

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Posted: 11 years ago

#30

Originally posted by: RAJLUVASYA

agree with u juhi di. I m fed up with asad doubting and manhandling zoya. If asad again jump into conclusion then i want zoya went to ny for forever

I don't know y Gul shows manhandling as okay n making us to believe dat u vl fall in love wid d same guy. As I writing in my 3rd FF dat Asad is suffering all d insults n taunts but many r not able to accept it but I can't step back. They want me to show Zoya forgive Asad soon which is not possible cuz they r not even friends n love vl come in a long way. They go crazy over Asad calling him hot n possessive even if he insults, manhandles, slaps n even rapes Zoya in many stories. But still they expect Zoya to forgive him soon. They expect Asad to learn d truth n stop being bad bad to Zoya. My question is dat is it neccesary to be evil wen sum1 does bad to u or u believe them doing bad to u? Is it necessary to take revenge in an awful way. In Obliterate, people want Asad n Zoya but I can't even think abt it. I prefer Ali n Zoya while Asad sud go n rot in hell wid his dear Tanu. In my story, Asad is supposed to regret each n every word n statement he said to Zoya n dats wat is happening. D story is supposed to be story between 2 rivals who hv their different supporters. AsYa romance vl start only after divorce track. I am even rushing d story a little bit to make Asad fall in a grave problem due to Tanveer. Cumn to dis story, if Asad doubts Zoya now then he is not worthy of trusting Zoya ever. How can he come to conclusions by just seeing a photo? Due to Asad, Akram kidnapped Zoya n forced her to marry him. Due to Asad, Tanveer tried to kill Zoya many times. So, Asad use his brain dis time.

Edited by angel_juhi04 - 11 years ago