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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: Az07



Ya may be but in the readers Atleast 80% of female population will be supporting asad that's what irritates me


yes di. I m big fan of asya. But in my opinion if asad done mistake then he have to pay for it. Not 80% di i think 90% supports asad
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: Az07


Ya may be but in the readers Atleast 80% of female population will be supporting asad that's what irritates me


As I show Zoya as a normal girl in my stories, I may be seen as a Asad hater but if he is wrong how can I support him? He never used his brain. He only believes wat he sees n always needs proofs to believe sumthn. In 14th nov 2012 epi, wen Ayaan was complaining to Asad abt d price tag issue n how Haseena taunts Nikhat on her skin colour, Asad tells dat bride's side has to bow before groom's side n tells for Nikhat's smile n lifetime happiness these insults r nothing. He also tells dat Nikhat loves Imraan n he sud think abt dat. But has he thought y Imraan never stood up for Nikhat? Dats y I mention dis '14 nov epi' comment on many people's comment on my FF to make them understand y I can't show Zoya becumn Asad's friend n how idiot Asad actually is to think such regressive things.
In Laadla movie, for a change I hated d female lead Sri Devi for her attitude n wanted d male lead Anil Kapoor to marry another female lead Raveena Tandon who truly loved him n sacrifice her love for Sri Devi unaware by anyone dat she is marrying him for revenge. So, I support who is right.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: RAJLUVASYA


yes di. I m big fan of asya. But in my opinion if asad done mistake then he have to pay for it. Not 80% di i think 90% supports asad


Ya true they always supports asad for everything & bash other women characters
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: angel_juhi04


As I show Zoya as a normal girl in my stories, I may be seen as a Asad hater but if he is wrong how can I support him? He never used his brain. He only believes wat he sees n always needs proofs to believe sumthn. In 14th nov 2012 epi, wen Ayaan was complaining to Asad abt d price tag issue n how Haseena taunts Nikhat on her skin colour, Asad tells dat bride's side has to bow before groom's side n tells for Nikhat's smile n lifetime happiness these insults r nothing. He also tells dat Nikhat loves Imraan n he sud think abt dat. But has he thought y Imraan never stood up for Nikhat? Dats y I mention dis '14 nov epi' comment on many people's comment on my FF to make them understand y I can't show Zoya becumn Asad's friend n how idiot Asad actually is to think such regressive things.
In Laadla movie, for a change I hated d female lead Sri Devi for her attitude n wanted d male lead Anil Kapoor to marry another female lead Raveena Tandon who truly loved him n sacrifice her love for Sri Devi unaware by anyone dat she is marrying him for revenge. So, I support who is right.



Ya he has zero brains & always judged zoya on her cloths & trusted tanveer on zoya.
He didn't realise that by sending NikhAt as dil to QM she has to suffer her entire life
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Part 2


Asad was so shocked. No it's not what it seems. Something else is there behind this picture. Something more which he has to find out. He could now see his zoya is in a big problem Ayaan also. Only he can save them.

Haseena bee was noticing asad. She went towards him. She took the fallen photographs from the floor. After seeing the photos she shouted.
Haseena bee: ya Allah ye Saab kya hai?
Hearing her Imran, farhaan, najma,dilshad & Chand bee came running. They were also shocked after seeing the photos.
Haseena bee: see I told you that girl ran away from her own wedding. Chi! Shameless girl, she eloped with her fianc younger brother. Characterless girl. I knew she will do something like that by the way she dress up.
Asad roared: shut up! Just shut up! If you utter 1 more word about my zoya I will kill you. Who are you to judge her? Just because she wears jeans you are calling her as a shameless girl? Please don't repeat my mistakes. I too first thought like that. I have insulted her just because she wears jeans. I have even compared her to a witch tanveer who always wears salwar suits & covers her head with pallu. You knew she got pregnant without even getting married? She tried to trap me because she wants a rich man as her baby's father. She even tried to kill zoya multiple times because she tried to reveal her true face Infront of us. And just look at yourself you always wears salwars but you always insults & taunts others & in this era you ask dowry. You shamelessly goes and eats from others house. You played with poor girls emotions using your son. Even after belonging in to a rich family you are a miser who even calculates the future dil wealth. You have no right to abuse my zoya. I am 100% sure it's not what it seems in the photographs. Sometimes truth is even beyond what we see from our eyes. I trust my zoya & also Ayaan. No one will speak anything against them without knowing the entire truth. And haseena bee before blaming at others fault just try to see your own faults first.

Haseena bee was tongue tied. She felt like asad has slapped her with his words.
Dilshad: asad is right. We can't come into some conclusion just with these photographs. I trust my zoya more than my kids. She won't do anything like this. I am sure she is in some big problem.
Najma: ammi everyone has accused our zoya. So my nikkah will only take place after proving our zoya's innocence.
Imran: najma what are you saying?
Najma: Imran zoya was the one who helped us to get together. I won't marry without her presence. Now everyone is accusing zoya. I want to prove her innocence. Also ayaan bhaijaan's. They are in some problem & we shouldn't conduct nikkah when our dear ones are in trouble. Imran if you really love me you should understand my pov & support me.
Asad: najma is right. This nikkah will happen only when zoya returns.

Haseena bee & co returned back sadly.

Asad got a call from dysp. As he was answering dilshad & najma could see his face getting tensed. Once he cut the call they both bombarded with questions.
Dilshad: who was it asad? What happened?
Najma: is it related to zoya?
Asad: ammi few minutes back in a police station near chawk bazaar they received a call from an Islamic community marriage hall. Malvi Saab has made the call. He informed the SI that a girl in her early twenties named zoya came there seeking help as she was chased by some gundoos & also a guy at her same age group named Ayaan also was attacked by some gundoos.
Dilshad: ya Allah kya hua meri bacchi ko?
Najma: bhaijaan where is zoya now?
Asad: don't know najma. After few minutes the Malvi Saab again called back & informed them that the guy & girl went missing.
Dilshad: ya Allah meri zoya ki Raksha keejiye.
Najma: who are these gundoos? Why they are after zoya & Ayaan bhaijaan? Did they do something to them?
Asad: najma it's not been an hour this things has happened. I am sure someone is playing. If I am correct it's tanveer. May be she might have kidnapped zoya with the help of some gundoos & zoya might have tried to escape from them & reached community hall. Accidentally she might have met Ayaan there. So tanveer might have came up with another cheap trick. I am sure it's she who kidnapped them from community hall & it was her person who delivered this photographs here. Seeing this we all will conclude that zoya eloped with Ayaan.
Najma: bhaijaan what she wants? Why is she after us even after all the chaos she created in our life? What happened to zoya & Ayaan bhaijaan?
Asad: don't worry najma she will be punished for her deeds. Nothing will happen to Ayaan & zoya. I will bring them back safely. Ammi please pray for them. I will come back only with your dil.
Asad took his car & left. Both najma & dilshad prayed for zoya & Ayaan.

Sm

Every one was waiting for Ayaan & Humeira to return back from shopping. Both of there phones were not reachable. Rashid & shireen was so nervous. Where as NikhAt & nuzzat started crying. Gaffour was shouting at razia for sending ayra out for shopping.
It was at that time haseena bee, Chand bee & farhaan entered.
Shireen greeted them.
Shireen: come inside haseena bee. Please be seated.
Haseena bee: I have not came to enjoy your treat. Your son Ayaan eloped with his would bee Bhabhi zoya. Because of that my imran's nikkah didn't happen. So I am breaking the nikkah of farhaan & nikkah
Rashid: what non sense? My son won't do like that.
Chand bee: oh really rashid Miya! Just see this photos.
( she has got the photos without any ones notice)
Every one was shocked.
Badi bee: no this is not truth.
Haseena bee: I don't care. I am breaking all the relations from this family who doesn't have values.
She dragged farhaan & Chand bee & moved outside. NikhAt ran inside crying. Nuzzat & shireen followed her. The others was still shocked

Outside Sm hall
Chand bee: what baji why you broke the relation they were actually hens who lay golden eggs.
Haseena bee: Buddhu! Who will marry a girl from this family with this much bad name. On top of that NikhAt is dark. So they will come at our doorsteps & often more money.
Farhaan: ammi you are great

Maternity clinic

Zoya opened her eyes only to find her in ayaan's embrace. He was also unconscious. She Fred herself & she realised that once again she was in the same clinic where she met tanveer few hours ago. She remembered meeting Ayaan in community hall & both explaining the situation how they landed there. When they turned to go to office room suddenly she felt something at her nostrils. After that everything is blank. Now it's clear for her that someone has smelled chloroform in her nose same with Ayaan.
She was not sure of the time, najma would she have got married? Mr.khan will be really tensed now thinking about her. Ya she has broke her promise that she will not leave the house without informing him. This all her fault. Poor Ayaan also got trapped now because of her. She tried to call Ayaan
Zoya: raabart wake up we are trapped we have to escape somehow. Wake up.
She shook him hardly. After sometime he got. Once he got oriented he too realised that they are trapped they have to escape. Humeira! What happened to her? They has to escape. They got got up.
They heard a voice ' trying to escape impossible'
They turned towards the source of noise. They saw tanveer standing.
Tanveer: you both can't escape. You know what zoya I tried to kill you but you escaped then I followed you & to my luck Ayaan was also with you, so I kidnapped you both & sent some photos to KV. Now you both are missing & under the photos impression it's like you both eloped. Ha ha ha.
Zoya ran towards her & bet her hardly.
Zoya shouted: you witch you are not a women. You will have to pay for your deeds tanveer. You kidnapped & sent our photos trying to show that we eloped? You cheap women I will kill you.
Before zoya could hit her again gundoos surrounded her & bet her harshly. Ayaan ran towards them & tried to save zoya but he too was bet badly.
Tanveer ordered: enough guys. Now leave them here don't even give water. Let them suffer & die. No one will save them from here.
Zoya even in a weak condition shouted: tanveer mr.khan won't fall in your cheap tricks. He will come & save me.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Awesome update
Asad denied the pics. He felt both zoya & ayaan are in trouble
Haseena taunted & used bad words for zoya & Asad roared
She was greedy woman, broke Farhan alliance with nikhat
Tanveer kidnaped zoya & ayaan again
She hit them badly.
Zoya said to her that asad never believe on those pics
Continue soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
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superb dear.. Love it.. Thanks for pm..
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OMGOMGOMGOMG
PLZZ CONTONUE SOON
REALLY WANT TO KNOW WHAT HAPPENS
OMG COME FAST OMGOMG
SAD AND GOOD STORY

KEEP COMING
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Posted: 11 years ago
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awesome update
thank god asad dint belive it and stood for zoya and ayaan
hassena needs a tight slap in her face
tanveer...y it s always tanveer who wins??
i hope u prove me wrong in this
asad where r u??

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