A Little Beat - A Poetic Drabble From Across The Seas - Page 11

Originally posted by: ImmortalLove

Wow..

Its beautifully written

Good work

Originally posted by: gowtu

🤗

Originally posted by: aseelashah

Saima it was a lovely poem.

I love it.

Thanks for pm

Originally posted by: Saima-Syed

Kya Sis

its the Truth

Originally posted by: LoveOnlyAsYa

WOW!!!

Sis, Farz this is so beautiful.

Sis am on phone as you know so can't highlight the parts I loved most. But all in all a beautiful drabble.

Loved it.

Originally posted by: -LiveLoveLaugh-

Oh my gosh, that was so beautiful! <3<3<3

Originally posted by: NAVI55

Oh wow...

Beautiful poem👏

Saima and Farz you make an awesome team👍🏼

the words were just so simple yet amazing...

The sheer simplicity was brilliant👏

Don't stop writing because we all want to keep reading😉

Originally posted by: NAVI55

Originally posted by: --SH7_Sunny--

Love the poem Saima Di and Farz 😃

I still dont understand thy dont Farz write it😆

Fazr u shld write more u write good😃

Awesome poem 👏

Originally posted by: farz_parachute

*Ohmy*

*hyperventilates*

Uh, heyya Sunny. *shy shy blush blush*

You love the poem? Thanks!

*blush blush*

This is a collaboration, and I honestly feel that Sis Saima should post this so I told her so. But while posted it for both of us, she's claiming no credit whatsoever, and I cannot accept that now can I. How can she give ME full credit, when WE BOTH worked very hard on it. Well words are easy for Sis Saima, so I kinda struggled, she had it flowing flawlessly.

You really think I should write more? *aww!! hyperventilates yet again*

Hmm...thank. Have you by any chance checked out my most recent and cryptic OS?

No?

Here's some shameless promo of my very humble (and confusing to most) OS- I'm sure Sis Saima won't mind.

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/qubool-hai/3977719/yeh-lo-main-hari-piya-an-os

Thanks again Sunny!

*shies away*

*Oh God! Did I actually promoted my OS here? To Sunny? What a loser Farz! I wonder what he would think*